Rebellious Temporary Worker: Dominate One Person from Death Escape

I don't know if someone is arbitrarily grading or the system is suppressing the score. To be honest, there is nothing wrong with this book. There may be some repetitive language problems in the front, which seems to be relatively poor. However, the outline and plot development of the book should not be lower than an 8.5 Rating. I rarely write book reviews, but this book is really good, not boring, not too plot-driven, and remarkable because it does not revolve around Zhang Chulan. Come on, author. Change the language to avoid repeated words, which affects the senses. Also, the character description is a little bit OOC, but it's okay. I hope you pay attention and wish you good luck.

There's nothing bad about it, the pace is fast, and the writing is pretty good. Some people mentioned that the protagonist is a grandson, but I think it's okay. If you really can't stand it, you can skip a chapter or two. The chapter where the protagonist broke his arm in Biyou Village was really good. Give the author a four-star rating and keep working hard. The logic of the whole book is still online. I hope the author will not abandon the book.

This style, this description of the mission, is exactly the novel I want to write. This is what I want under the alien, a person who plots everyone for Chen Duo. He is the same kind of person as Zhang Chulan, but he is also a completely different person. I really like it. Quick update, I will give you power for love.

I really want to praise the writing [laughing], I feel like this kind of slowly improving novel really pokes me. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's more interesting to read than those mindless and cool novels. After looking at other ratings, the negative reviews are basically saying that the protagonist is weak, but the protagonist is invincible from the beginning. You're just looking at it. I just pushed it for two chapters at the beginning and then I finished it [laughing]. In short, the overall plot is okay, but there is an upgrade route. I give the author a big boost [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] By the way, and the protagonist's upgrade speed is much faster than in the original work. I really recommend watching it.

It's good-looking, the logic is clear, and it's not a brainless novel. The protagonist's IQ is online and he's a fun-loving person. It made me laugh to death in the middle of the night. I really enjoyed reading this, and it also has pure love! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Not bad, but the protagonist is either threatened or threatened again. When will Duoduo be arranged?

Personal opinion, the lawless version of Zhang Chulan, but the image description is not so smooth, the switch between the wretched man and the affectionate man is very stiff, other things are okay, I like watching this, I have been following it from the beginning until now, and I have been urging it until I finish the first chapter.

A great book, very good. It is a rare masterpiece among fan fiction. I hope the author will work hard and keep up the good work [Start] [Start] [Start] But think about it, it's okay to expand on Dumbledore in the later stages of the writing [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully]

Okay, I can read it with my brain.

I hope I can finish it and don't want it to be unfinished [Like]

Why is it only five-nine? I don't understand, it's so beautiful

Is it abusing the main text? It's a bit interesting. It's one of those rare fan stories that has the same tone as the original work [laughs crookedly] I don't believe that people who read one person can't read the main text.

It looks great, I love watching it, and I highly recommend it! The protagonist is pure fun! (Look at my duration, I'm not lying)

It looks good and I love this feeling.

Not bad, not bad, not bad

It feels pretty good, keep up the good work.

Very interesting

Hahahaha, so funny [crying with laughter]

Very interesting and funny. Get excited.

It must be praised, come on author Author, I feel that you can make this image more detailed and make it pure love. Come on, author!

How should I put it, I can give 4 points for the plot, but he is pure love, and I will give 5 points for pure love.

The protagonist of 666 Pi Shuai Shuai

The opening is really good, the writing is humorous

It's so cool [Admiration]. Although I don't know much about the plot of Under One Person, it doesn't affect me from watching the protagonist and Duoduo.

I originally thought it was just a gimmick at the beginning, but I didn't expect it to be surprisingly good-looking later on. The protagonist is like an enhanced version of Zhang Chulan. The mode of dancing on the tip of a knife to survive without a backer is great. The writing and dialogue are also first-class. It is already better-looking than many other fans. As expected, it is easy to make a masterpiece with a score of 6-7. I hope it can be maintained until the end.

It's very beautiful, and the writing is meticulous and not crude. I don't understand why the rating is so low. Maybe some people read too many mindless articles. [Laughing and crying]

Very good, the story is not watery and smooth

Not much to say, I really like watching it.

I'm a native cat and I love watching. 😋😋😋 Very interesting, highly recommended, sweet, sharp and reversal [exploration]

It was quite interesting, and it rarely made me laugh.