Longevity: From Laying Low in the Market to Mastering Skills

If you are truly a Taoist, I hope that this cautious attitude will continue to be maintained and that there will be no emotional connections. If you become an immortal, you should have an attitude of cultivating an immortal and devote yourself to the Tao. It's the same old routine again. When a beautiful woman reveals her strength, she always hesitates to save her. What happens next is that the hero saves the beauty and really has nothing to do except himself. It's a pity that after chasing her for so long, she is disappointed.

I wrote in the front that I moved to Jing'an Lane. I had a neighbor who was in the late stage of Qi training and was introduced to the formation. But I forgot about it after writing it in the back. It has become a shantytown again. I have to learn the formation again. The female neighbor who is in the late stage of Qi training is gone.

At present, the author's character design can still be the type I like, and it is also a panel. As long as it is not removed for the sake of women's sanity in the later stage, or there is no cp directly, it is OK. Women will only affect the speed of drawing the sword 🥰 and the character design is still decent, not the kind of fake, I said it was superficial, but it was gone in the blink of an eye.

Overall, it's okay. There's no weak plot. The protagonist is very decisive when it comes to running and killing. The growth of the protagonist is very smooth and very good. It's good to see a woman who doesn't turn into a male dog in heat. The cruelty of the world of cultivating immortals is well portrayed. The hardships of the low-level casual cultivators are inevitable. It's only thanks to the protagonist that he has a system, otherwise he would have been dead. Now, the general point of the plot is that the protagonist keeps running and changing maps. It has been changed many times. It is recommended to change it once or twice at most and then write a stable and developed paragraph before running again or something, otherwise it will easily cause visual fatigue. In the middle, you can insert some plots such as the protagonist entering the secret realm to search for treasures to enrich the plot of the novel. My suggestions are just for reference. I will be happy if it can give you something to think about. There are also too few, which is not good enough. Just because your writing is okay, I will mention it to you again. If you are writing as a side job or just for fun, treat it as if I didn't say it. Your novel seems to be above average at the moment. It is important to update it more on this platform. Because 🍅On this platform, not many people actually care about your writing style or plot. As long as your sentences are fluent and human-like, the plot logic chain is OK, there are fewer old routines, and there is no heavy AI flavor, then they will turn a blind eye. The sentences are fluent and you write like a human being. This platform shows that you have the appearance of a great god. This is just like the spiritual roots written in your novels. You have the appearance of a top grade. Although it is important, it is not enough to be more on this platform. It requires hard work. This platform follows the "fast food flow". You have to act according to circumstances here as if you are discussing things. See Planning according to the situation, the most important thing about the novels on the Tomato platform is that they are "smooth" and enjoyable to read. It doesn't matter whether the plot is sharp or sweet, you have to measure it so that people can read it. If it is enjoyable, it will be added to your bookshelf. If you want to read it later, you will click on it. But if you have fewer books, you will only keep books. Your novel should be on the rise now. It's best to update more, two to three chapters a day. This way there will be more content, and fewer people will support the book.

It's good-looking, good-looking, and very good-looking. The helplessness, fear, and desire to survive of low-level casual cultivators are vividly displayed.

It's really good-looking. I hope I can be invincible without a female protagonist.

Although there are some unreasonable parts of the plot in the middle, it is overall much better than this type of novel. I give it full marks.

It is a very good book. It describes the struggle and unwillingness of the monks at the bottom, and talks about the helplessness and vicissitudes of life. In order to live a better life, everyone has tried their best to live. Even if there is no glory and wealth, there is still the happiness of firewood, rice, oil, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea. Just reading it will integrate our lives into it unconsciously. This is the real life of most people. Come on, everyone, so that we can live a better life, all fellow Taoists, let's work together to "improve our cultivation."

Although there are traces of a mortal cultivating immortality, I was still fascinated by it. Good-looking and good-looking.

The rhythm is tight, no nonsense, in line with ordinary people's thinking, and the main line is logical.