
Traveling Through the King's Continent, All the Canyons Shared My Dream.
穿进王者大陆全峡谷都和我同梦了
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Brothers, I am currently short of books, so I would like to ask you to take out the books in your library, Kangkang.
Douluo, Just Fight One, Don't Need Anything Else
Novel About Time Traveling to King of Glory
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The Protagonist Has Auxiliary Abilities, Rare and Purely Auxiliary
This is purely a help, thank you
Are There Any Otome Stories? I Am a Local Dog and I Love Shura Field.
Nan Xiangwan Is Over, My Youth Is Over
A Book That Guides the Heroes of the King, I Beg You on Your Knees
If there is any kind of strategy for the King of Heroes, please give me a recommendation 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
A Novel That Travels to the Continent of Kings
It's from the Continent of Kings
Come up with Some Quality Fanfics, There Are No Requirements. I've Been Eating Too Many Defenses Lately.
Anime fans and game fans are all OK and the quality must be good. Please give me some recommendations.
Looking for High-Quality Otome Literature
There's been a bit of a book shortage lately, do you have any good otome novels?
I Need a Lot of Substituting Otome Stories😋it Doesn't Matter If It's the Whole World
I want to see content similar to "[Substitution] You are always coveted by NPCs after traveling through time". Similar to this, don't recommend novels with female protagonists. If there are otome novels, they should revolve around yn. Don't recommend novels with female protagonists who are not in the first or second person. Any type
I Want to See the Heroine Fall in Love with the Hero of King of Glory
Looking for Good Otome Stories! ! !
What a beautiful otome novel!
There Is No Real Meaning of Heart-Throb Cool Article. . .
I don't want to be a guide to the heroine, I don't want to be disrespectful to women, I don't want to be grumpy, I'm just a simple heartthrob + crazy person, are there really no such things? Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah
I Just Want to Watch the Otome and Not the Original Girl! Can Be Substituted! Very Immersive!
I would like to read a book similar to "Fumino: Yokohama Blind Spot Observation Diary". You are not allowed to repost if the author has not clearly stated that it is from an otome. You are not allowed to repost if you write about an otome. If you see the original woman, you will block her and re-open the title. If you have doubts about the author's position, don't repost. It is safe for you and me. He has not given it to others.
Is There Such a Thing as a Substitute Otome Novel Where One Is Hungry and Begs to Be Fed?
Traveling Through the World of Glory of Kings, There Is a System and a Heroine
The Heroine Is Very Ordinary, but Suddenly She Is Liked by High-Quality People
The heroine is very ordinary including appearance and personality, but suddenly many people like her
Are There Any Novels About Time Traveling Through King of Glory?
Book shortage
Please Tell Me If You Know That the Protagonist Traveled to the King's Continent. Thank You.
Looking for a Heartthrob Among Anime Fans, the Main Character of Otome Should Preferably Be a Female.
The cursed Harry Potter is fine, as is Ye Luoli's.
Please! Otome! Must Be an Otome! Don't Want Anything Else! ! !
I want to read a book like "The Curse: It's your kid who wants to torture me, right?" Must be an otome! All! All! All! ! ! Single arrow! Single arrow! Single arrow! ! ! I just want to fight back with a spell, Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, Detective Conan, Danganronpa, text
Looking for a Heartthrob in Variety Movies + Good Writing Skills + 1Vn + Popular Movies
I want to watch content similar to "Variety Film and Television: Delicate Beauty Online Collapse Plot". Please pay attention to variety movies and don't recommend others. The best ones are those with many words and have been published a lot. They are both male and female + everyone loves them.































































































It's delicious, there's a plot and meat to eat, and the reactions are perfect (whether it's me or other characters). The only drawback is that after watching it, I want to fight the king, and then I'm beaten to the point of collapse by the opponent [crazy]
Babies, this is a pure B-generation book and prohibits NZD. The author is also very concerned about our opinions and comments. I highly recommend it to those who like B-generation. The King of B-generation is so fragrant! It's fun to show me! The more lovers you have, the more magnificent you are! ! ! ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨
No wonder most of the comments in the comment section praise the author as a true god. The writing style and logic are really top of the line tomatoes. It's no wonder that he is willing to get involved in this kind of field. He can establish the character with just a few strokes, and this difficult nut to crack can be regarded as a lot of work. I would blindly guess that the author is an old writer, and newcomers generally cannot write such concise descriptions, tight, well-proportioned frameworks, and interlocking plots. A subject like this, which requires extensive thinking and rich imagination, is very demanding. I am really full of praise. I have never seen this author before. He is so awesome. Even if there are some not-so-good personal styles, they are completely tolerable and the flaws cannot be concealed.
The King's Otome is very rare. The last time I saw the King's Otome was on Lao Ford and other novel platforms. There are almost no Tomato novels, they are all male videos, and the descriptions are very bad. The author's writing is really good, and it is very immersive. The setting is also super interesting! The plot doesn't drag too much! What a great book!
It's nice to watch OOC, and the plot development is reasonable... But the main character's temper is a little too good, and I could add some non-refreshing text to the introduction. After being hurt by Xuance, I forgived too easily. I hope I can think more about myself. I only apologize awkwardly and receive no punishment at all. It seems so useless😢… Why do so many people read this comment recently? I am confused: When I read and commented, this work should have been updated to about 80 chapters. At that time, there were a lot of plots that made me uncomfortable (I have a low acceptance of female abuse plots and a relatively high self-esteem. For me, the protagonist's sense of deservingness is very low and she is a bit useless). The reason why I read it at that time is: at that time, the author's introduction only wrote this article as a substitute article, and at that time, there were no descriptions of pain and injury, nor the protagonist's character, nor was it written that this article was not a strong woman, not a cool article. I feel more and more uncomfortable watching it, but the author's writing style is my favorite type, so I have been waiting for the protagonist to teach him a lesson, at least let the male protagonist with character flaws be educated or punished, but the result is not satisfactory. On the contrary, the protagonist has been sharing the troubles with these people, and is always implicated and injured. Others do wrong, and the heroine easily forgives them easily. She always says it's okay when she is hurt. I really can't take it in, so I posted this rant. I hope it can be a reference for sisters who have similar tastes to me😭 I respect the diversity of xp writing styles, but I don't recommend reading this if you are sensitive to women's independence!
❗A word of caution up front: This article is not suitable for people who like strong women and have high self-esteem. It is also not suitable for people who are incapable of accepting forced love and descriptions of pain. It is also not suitable for people who cannot accept being a nanny and who feel that the focus of otome stories should be on themselves. It is not suitable for reading. Let me add that it is not suitable for people who have a low tolerance for the character's unorthodox behavior. * Some places in the early stages will emphasize the disparity in power between us and the heroes. I have already explained that we are just ordinary people, and these people are kings and heroes with magical powers. In addition, the author did not overemphasize the disparity in power, so this is not a shocking point. Xuance's plot has been criticized, but his character is not OOC. He is just such a little lunatic. If you accept incompetence, you can abandon the story or skip chapters, don't make it difficult for yourself. If nothing else, this article is a long one, so even if "I" want to grow up, the pace will be slow. If you feel slow and frustrated, click on the upper left corner. * If you find that you are not suitable for this type of book after reading the author's demining and book review demining, please stop your losses immediately. Don't ignore the advice and be deceived and then personally attack the author. I personally recommend Nong Yi people to read this article. In short, it can be said in four words: "Flaws do not hide the advantages". Please note that I am a Nong Yi person. * It is a test of writing skills to simultaneously grasp the character's personality, ensure the reader's sense of involvement, and create a bond with the character within a reasonable range. So far, I think the author has grasped the personality and contrast of each character very appropriately. This is what I like very much, because I hate extremely OOC fanfics. You must know that there is no difference between excessive OOC and originality. (The focus of this article is obviously on the heroes of kings) * And my thoughts as a reader → Have you ever considered reducing the parts of the article about "I" being injured? The injuries here refer to some unnecessary small bumps on the body in the plot. It does not mean that you cannot be injured. After all, the continent of kings is full of dangers, so it is normal to get some injuries in the plot. Ps: I also hope that after being wronged in the article, we can find opportunities to take revenge, whether it is against NPCs or heroes. * I went to read the book reviews, and it turns out that everyone is interested in it... Some people are very subjective and cannot accept that they are weak in the text, nor can they accept that they are hurt or even criticized, so they hope to become stronger as soon as possible. But if you want to become stronger, you will inevitably have to spend a lot of words and ink to shape "you". Too much shaping of "you" will easily lead to the suspicion of being a heroine. This in itself is a contradictory and difficult point to grasp in Otome. After all, each reader's acceptance level is different. Anyway, the audience for this book has been selected now, and the author can just write boldly at his own pace. * To sum it up like this, I can probably understand the various difficulties that I struggled with when I came up with the idea. There are many things that need to be taken into consideration at the same time when writing this article. Teachers who are not in this circle and do not cook should be merciful in their evaluations. Don't cast a shadow on the cooks. Some book reviews have gone so far as to make personal attacks, which is really rude. If you really can't accept it, you can read the heroine's cool stories on your own, and don't worry about your breasts. I really like the author's portrayal of the role of the king. I have devoted all my following, gifts, and ratings to this article for the first time. I hope that I can accompany this book until the day it is finished, and I also hope that this work will grow even better.
It's so beautiful that men are menstruating and women are going crazy. It's the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so good that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so good that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It's so good. I saw it, it was God, it was my rose that illuminated my dark life and gave meaning to my world. I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.
Otome! ! ! ! [Note] DeliciousΨ( ̄∀ ̄)Ψ[Like][Like] This is a rare fanfic of King Otome. The author's writing is very good. I highly recommend it! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Note: No one is forcing you to read it. Don't scold the author or the "I" in the article. It's not necessary. It's an Otome. If you can't accept it, you can withdraw. Don't be gay, thank you
Nong Yi is awesome. Pure substitution is awesome. The author's writing is also awesome. It's so exciting to watch. I will be a surrogate sister with you in my next life. So what if the whole world is gone! So what if the whole world is gone! Author, why do you write so awesome Klass? It's so difficult for me to write Feng Feng Otome. It can be seen that you really figured out the character's personality and it's not OOC at all. Oh my god, it still has some plot. Everyone supports it.
Someone recommended Nong Yiwen and I rushed to watch it. The teacher really cares about everyone's sense of involvement. Otome Wen Kumeibao/I have been eating both ends for a long time. Furthermore, this setting is also great. It perfectly integrates the summoner's costume control function in the game, and it is even more delicious when combined with the story of falling into a dream at night. The plot is very smooth and can be read in one go. The writing is also very good and does not make people feel embarrassed. It has a sense of substitution. I will follow it😌
It's so refreshing, it made me feel so happy that my scalp was numb. The author is so awesome, his writing is so powerful, and he has such a strong sense of empathy. It makes me feel like he's home. It's an honor for us Otodai sisters to have the author as a cook. It's so refreshing. Support our Otodai chef! ! It's just that there are still some horses with low sense of worthiness that can't be hidden secretly in plq, but it doesn't hurt. Brother's rice bowl is so delicious! He Kai's "room that you can't get out of without having sex" is also delicious. I immersed myself in eating it. It was so refreshing. I asked for a Yixing meal online [crying] [crying]
Real otome stories are not those that are labeled as otome to deceive others. The sense of immersion is very good, and the sense of love is also very good. The author is very talented in writing about love, which makes people's hearts beat, and there is no sense of violation at all. It's hard not to laugh while reading this article. [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] It's not very long yet and a bit short, but the author is working hard to update it every day. I was very happy to eat my brother's rice bowl [Admiration] I hope more people will read this article, I think it's really good in tomatoes. For otome novels, there are no messy settings, no ridiculous flaws, the plot is also very good, and the writing style is also good, which is really a bit difficult. Anyway, I had a great time eating it. It was super refreshing.
It's a really great book! The author's writing style is really neither a noob nor embarrassing, and the dream writing is also very fragrant 😋 Especially the chapter about Brother Gai (), not only the king, but also the writing style is ranked among the best among all the second-generation Tomato fans. Hehe, by the way, I am wondering when Xiao Ming will appear. After all, Ming Shiyin's setting is a bit cool [Sending Hearts]
Five-star rating (◍>◡<◍) The sense of immersion is super good, and there are no people in the comment area who are complaining about CP or calling me "meibao", they are all taking the role well! I will give this author and readers five stars ˃ 𖥦 ˂ The writing is also super nice. It's not embarrassing at all, but it's a little short. I plan to stock up and read it all at once. It's really bad that the rating is so low! Everyone picked up their mobile phones and gave this book a good review (◍>◡<◍). I like Treasure Books. As a member of the party, it is really hard for me to see a good sense of substitution on Tomato. I do not post articles that affect my substitution in the comment area. After suffering for so long, I finally came across this book! I really cried (T^T) The only pity is that the author doesn't reveal the love interest of the female characters in official matches. I really want to show couples like Goya Haiyue, Gongsun Li, Yang Yuhuan and other handsome sisters and beautiful sisters ovo. As for the official matches, there is not much description in the article. It is acceptable even for non-official couples. ๑•́₃•̀๑ Looking forward to the follow-up! I hope I can get my favorite character soon, although I like many characters(?) That's all for now, I'll review the rest later! Following up on the review, the writing is pretty good, but the book review in the comment section is terrible. It is not a purely representative work, Otoyomu chooses it by himself. For those who don't want to mention official roles, it is impossible not to write about official roles no matter what. Many people have to write several official roles when there is no need to write about official roles. It is very uncomfortable to see. Asking if there is a big commander will kill some people. In the comment area, if there is a sentence about official dubbing, it is 99. If so, why don't you just go to the cp version of the official dubbing? Why bother to read the otome version? Jimei For people who don't like to read about relationships and background stories, those who are lovers are official couples. When people see Lanling King Hua Mulan being torn down, they ask what's going on. Why are you so rude when you can speak properly? Have they messed with you? Those who say that they are mistresses are all here, so Sun Quan, Sima Yi, and King Lanling are all here. After all, they also have wives. Is it okay to talk about other people's mistresses? B, those who have wives, are you mistresses? [Laughing] Oops, it turns out it's not in The King? Then Sun Quan doesn't have to use B. After all, there is a step trainer in the short play [Punch Out] Don't call him Yalian in the comment section. Our Yalian also has an official partner in the international server [laughing] It was agreed that we old farmers have no rules. I think we farmers have also entered the two-dimensional circle, and the rules have come. If we have time to make such irritating comments to people who express doubts, it is better to go and get more points. The malice is so great. In the comment area, Laoji Laozi is gradually growing into flesh and blood. Laoji Laoji, you are a cute baby. Fast forward to Laoji Laoji, who has an independent personality. The comment area is a combination of cute and cute cp chefs. It really scares me to death.
This is my favorite Nongyi book so far... Really... The rhythm is very good and the writing is very mature. The ambiguous atmosphere is invincible... I feel that the characters are not OOC at all... I look forward to the teacher writing about other areas! ! ! I will always follow you boss!
The new god of Nong Yi... I actually cried to death when I saw the good-looking Nong Yi in Tomato... It perfectly matches my imagination of the development of the King's Continent (the Great Wall chapter is particularly touching!). Looking forward to the follow-up Jixia, Chang'an, Third Place, Haidu, etc.! There are many heroes waiting for me in different places🥰 Needless to say, the plot is normal and good-looking! The character creation is also completely consistent with the personality, not OOC! The emotions are delicate and there are a lot of delicious Summoners, be confident! [That's me, the heroes I bought with gold coins and diamonds, why can't they all belong to me🥺👉👈] In terms of perception, max! The sense of immersion is maximally immersive! ! ! This is how Otome works should be! ! ! There is no need for descriptions or things that affect the substitution [I am really happy that there is no fixed name] I hope you can keep it up, boss! ! I don't know if I can, but I hope I can appeal to everyone to use words like "I" and "we" more often! [It's okay to be the master by yourself] Try to avoid calling the heroine such an independent title! Because the heroine is ourselves! Hold your head high and be confident! You are the heroine, so use words that center on yourself! ! 🥹When I read the titles of "heroine" and "little sister" in book reviews and paragraph reviews, it really affected my interpretation [We are the heroines, we don't want the heroine party! This is an otome, not an original heroine! !
It's okay. As one of the rare pure otome characters in Tomato, it's pretty good. The writing is not awkward and is very smooth. However, I have always been in a weak position in the story. The forced love is written very well, but the experiences in the real world are really more embarrassing or embarrassing every time. I hope I can grow up in the future, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable to be such a coward all the time. I don't know what to say about what is written at the end. The audience of this book is more younger, especially where Mark and Kong Kong'er helped to find the wallet. No matter how much an adult collapses, he would not just lower his head and rummage without saying a word. The two of them stood by the side with confused faces. I really couldn't watch the conversation between Mark and me. After I found it, Holding it up and showing it to Mark is really not a scene that only a child would think of (don't say I'm beating up the cook, I started watching it right after he was kidnapped by King Lanling. I can't fault the early writing, but an adult can't grow up like a child in more than 300 chapters. It's really too weird)
It's super, super, super good-looking, not OOC at all🔥👍🏻 It's been a long time since I've found a King of Kings fanfic that I like so well. I almost ruined the articles written by those teachers in the past (╥_╥) Although I haven't read much yet, it's really super good-looking, just Yes... Actually, one of the reasons why I read it slowly is the name of the main controller. I asked if it was changed later. Otherwise, every time I see the name of the main controller being called, I will, um... Feel quite embarrassed. I have to, um, digest it before I can continue watching. 🥺
It's good to watch ~ the plot is very interesting! The character design is also very nice! The emotional line is also fragrant! The only regret is that in dreams, "I" almost never have autonomy/initiative, and I am forced to do so every time, or completely passively accepted. Although this is not the case in reality, the female protagonist is still slightly unhappy. I hope that I can also write about the heroine's dream of pleasing herself and satisfying herself later. Now that we know it is a dream, if it is forced every time and cannot be enjoyed voluntarily, then it is not the same as a nightmare.
🥩The writing is very good, but because I am more subjective, I don't have much sense of substitution. In addition, I feel that when I interact with the male protagonists, I am being pushed or led by the nose (I don't know how to put it). The part about King Lanling is also a bit abusive, and he is abducted by the enemy. The dialogue of the argument is a bit buggy, and it is too much for disaster () Generally speaking, the writing is quite good, the male protagonist is quite plump, and Lao Ji's character is actually a bit flat (too smooth and kind-hearted, but there is always a sense of deja vu of unknown intelligence)
Caught a rare long Nong Yi cook! So no matter what, I strongly support it! It can be said that Nong Yi is very cold and is completely inconsistent with the popularity of the game. I haven't had a long story 555 in a long time. Boss, please don't give up🌹🌹🌹 The plot in the dream is a little forced, which I personally don't like, but the second person makes up for it a little bit. Let's just think of it as a little trick between us lovers. I think the embarrassment of the ID is okay. When reading a story with game elements, the protagonist's ID is much more embarrassing than the headwind ID. I still can't forget the first article I read with a clear RPG game style. The protagonist takes props from the system backpack, but from the NPC perspective, he takes them out of thin air from his crotch hahh If you don't like forced love, don't read the dream about relying on pain. I saw it at a glance. I thought it was about relying on pain, but I didn't expect it was him biting me and bleeding.
It's so delicious, so delicious. . . . . I kept screaming while eating, the plot was also very good, it was a genius host [love] [love] [love] [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] The quality is really high, give me a look, the written interaction is also full of happiness, I like it so much! It's like I discovered a treasure [KISS][KISS] Teacher, come on, I love Nong Yi Thanks to myself on 1.17 [Full] for discovering this book and enjoying it for me [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] So I came to review passionately ❤️🔥Fantasy Baili keeps his promise and Baili Xuance brothers make a comeback. There is really nothing to say about the plot of this book. The author's writing is so fluent and I felt so comfortable reading it. I was really surprised to see such a good-looking book on Tomato! ! I'm so good, I'm so good, psychological committee member, you don't need to come [Punch out] [Grass has been planted] [Grass has been planted] More and more sisters must read this book! Incredible author, invincible book!
It was delicious. . As someone who hasn't been exposed to wzry for a long time, I was very satisfied after watching it. The characters are created very well, Yamiami! Super delicious! Teacher I love you! ! In the middle, I feel that the traces of AI are too heavy. . The previous article was very good. Why did the teacher switch to AI? I feel so uncomfortable. .
I read more than 200 chapters in two days and savored them carefully. This book is very interesting. From the beginning, it can be seen that the author's writing style is a bit green and childish, but the writing gets better and better later on. Especially in the part of King Lanling, the awkward and complicated love-hate emotions between the two people are very enjoyable. In the author's writing, everyone is unique and vivid, as if they really exist. I like the author's portrayal of King Lanling. This person is not purely bad or purely good, he is diverse. In fact, there is a little bit of selfishness, because I was caught by King Lanling too many times in The King, so I always feel very sacred when I see King Lanling being bullied. In fact, I hope the author will create some girls who can be conquered, such as Luna (brother-sister competition is so cool...) And Mirror (the strongest sister on the surface!). I believe someone will like it. Who can refuse Mr. Mirror, right~ Don't ask me to beg you, okay? I really want Mirror. . , I would like to praise the author again. He is always improving. The writing is very delicate, the characters are not homogeneous, and the emotions are super sincere. The sense of immersion is also very strong. Especially that ID makes me so embarrassed every time. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! I will continue to follow this novel. I finished reading it a second time and read it again. I reviewed the plot from the beginning and found some... Small details that I had overlooked because of my quick reading. ʚ(◜𖥦◝ )ɞ~ Author, you are really good at foreshadowing. And the suspense set up... The space left for people's own imagination, and the appropriate blank space for the article. Like. Like it very much. Everyone in the Great Wall Guards is very nice. They are portrayed very closely to the characters in the world of kings, with Hua Mulan's heroic appearance and Jia Luo's gentleness and intelligence. Um, I'm sorry, but I really like intellectual girls. . . (I was wrong.) I have never been able to get the point of Li Xin's tower-destroying mania in the game, so thank you for this otome article. What I regret now is that I can't eat him, what a contrast. . . So cute. . . . Be curious, will I finally know that they have the same dream as me? If so, it would be very embarrassing. ! Li Xin is too detailed. Damn it, this Li Xin is too discerning. . . I hope this article will not be unfinished in the end. You can see the careful consideration between the lines. However, there are too many characters in The King, so the article will inevitably be a bit long. But I will finish it. Yeah, right. Definitely. . Is it true that you can't appear on camera... Can you really not appear on camera...🥺🥺🥺I have been crying, I really kneel down and beg you. Too little fandom. Especially when you meet someone with such high quality and good writing skills... It doesn't matter if you can't. . It's just a pity. ! Probably just talking in sleep. It would be great if the author could see it. Yes, author, Mommy, don't be tired or idle. Hey, I really think having a poor memory is a good thing. I like to watch those novels, comics, and movies again and again, because after a short period of time I will forget the plot, and there is no sense of "boring" or "self-spoiler" that is said to be the same thing. Every time I relive it, every time I recall it, I will have different feelings. I can slowly savor the emotions and deeper meanings in a sentence, and add my own understanding and imagination. Whether it is an e-book or a physical book, I like to read it this way. Love this book so much! (In addition, you are the first teacher I came to Tomato to reward. Qwq… ο(=·ω<=)☆kira~Goodbye after three brushes~
It's quite interesting, and even someone who has only played a few games of King of Kings can understand the character relationships and plot. There are traces of AI polishing. The double quotation marks in chapters 25-38 are not the normal "", but the unique "" copied and pasted by AI.
Well, first of all, the author's writing is very good. This is a rare long and well-written Honor of Kings fan novel. Those who like it will like it very much. The following is considered black mud Although I know that this is a substitute fan work for most readers, and for the reader's substitute experience, "my" character in the story will be relatively less distinctive, but during the reading process, I always felt that "my" character is still too soft, always frustrated and rarely gives a strong reply. When dealing with male characters (especially in dreams), I am always passive and easily blush and shy. I feel like "I" am not very subjective... It's not very comfortable to watch😶. And when reading, I always feel that "I" is actually a person who depends on other characters. It seems like there aren't many highlights that really belong to me. In fact, the "I" in the story feels more like a spoiled wife to me. Not quite able to substitute
The delicious food of God is coming! ! !(Why can't Yang Persimmon give 100 stars?...) The great teacher used such amazing words and plots to make me burst into tears. The character creation and plot development are all very delicate in all aspects. It's so delicious😭It's delicious. It's really great to meet the teacher. I'm so happy to see such excellent works😭😭😭Thank you teacher for your hard work every day! ! Teachers should also pay more attention to rest. I hope teachers will be happy every day -v- (You have such an awesome wife to enter the agricultural circle jpg)
Anyone who hasn't tasted this article will be sad, okay? It's simply amazing TT. I will stay here all day long! My wife's character creation is super good and she's not OOC at all! ! Every hero is flesh and blood. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent plots of other maps~ The teacher asked me to touch your most private draft box. You must still have it, right? 🥺! As a B-game summoner (you), your image is also super good. It has a more immersive feeling than many B-games I have played. QwQ is a growing A-Zhao. The atmosphere in the comment area is particularly good! The stroke of genius is that your coming-of-age story doesn't just revolve around each male protagonist. Each character in Dada's works has his own story and life, and is created in a super three-dimensional and vivid way. Our chef is so productive... Daji can stun me for 1.5 Seconds, and Zhang Liang can control me for 2.2 Seconds. Donghuang can also control me for 2.2 Seconds, and Mozi's ultimate move can stun me for 3.3 Seconds. Yixing's ultimate move can limit me for four seconds. The old master's ultimate move can trap me for five seconds. But the teacher's food has stuck with me all my life... Anyway, what else is there to say? Let's start the meal! (
Brilliant, wonderful, this article solves my urgent need for books. I feel so happy to have such a delicious article on my bookshelf. Each character is full of character, not OOC at all, and you can get the charm of each character. The interaction between the main controller and each character is very comfortable and smooth, and each character is also very good. The tension and ambiguity are written with great flavor. Although there are many characters, there is no confusion at all. It is written step by step, each character has a memory point, and everyone's xp is well taken care of. There will always be a character that will please you, such as the brothers' rice bowl between Shou Yue and Xuan Ce, and the forced love (ps: although it is a dream, the main control is very painful, not my xp, here is just an example). The author is also great, the writing style is very good, the updates are very active, and it has a beginning and an end (because I have read another book by the author, although the data is not good, but the author has updated them all, and the words can be seen that the author loves the characters and books he created), great, I will continue to follow the author.
First of all, the first point: the writing is smooth, the story content is compact, and the logic is smooth. Second point: Although it is an otome, the love of all characters is traceable and reasonable. Not obtrusive and acceptable. The third point: the inking and characterization of each character are very delicate. The author's hard work has been poured into the characters, giving them their unique self-charm. They exist as vivid people with emotions, sorrows, joys and beliefs. This is also what attracts me most about the article. The "love" between the characters is not a facial expression, but the magnificence of life, the vastness of the world, and the myriad possibilities of life, but I still love you out of my inner choice. The character takes the initiative to form a bond with the master, and also develops feelings due to the bond. The same goes for the protagonist. Finally, let me talk about a point that I think is a bit jumpy: the protagonist is a little uncomfortable when he sees that Xing is very popular, and even directly points out his "frivolity", a bit like an awkward young couple, so he will violate basic social etiquette and get angry directly. But it seems too fast for Zhen and the protagonist, who are comrades who have experienced life and death together, to directly turn to love. So I personally think it would be smoother to add a plot of ambiguity and mutual feelings before getting angry and jealous.