After My Dantian Was Broken, I Raised a Group of Crazy Disciples

I know why this book has a low rating. Comments are selected according to the highest likes, and the first three are all two or three stars. I guess it's because they happened to see the section about the second apprentice, who was indeed not likable enough. But it's really, really good-looking😍very, very good-looking. I haven't logged in for a long time and specially logged in to comment. The plot concept is very good, the characters are distinct and not stereotyped, the light humor is very smooth to read, and there are many female characters. Several clan kings are women. Many people say they hate the second apprentice, but I think he is a very feminine character. He is extremely talented but always relies on his beauty to climb into bed and study romance novels tirelessly. In my opinion, the heroine regards him more as a tool to complete system tasks, and there is absolutely no ambiguity! The role of a handsome boy is quite new. It is said that the heroine was hurt by him, because the heroine was the favored daughter of heaven and fell and was seriously injured. After being accidentally injured by him, the heroine put a restraint on him. He himself also realized the dangers of pure Yang physique and controlled it. Therefore, the author must love the heroine most and will not let the heroine be abused for no reason! Returning to the creation of the heroine herself, she was also very successful. Her initial exploration of the system, subduing the ghost in the tree, and killing the demon king were all her highlights. Don't miss it if you pass by. Every supporting character setting by this author is very vivid and absolutely not stereotyped. It's really good. You won't lose money if you invest in it. It's worth a try! I feel so sad that such a beautiful and thoughtful book only has 7 points.

The protagonist's survival depends purely on luck Too imbecile. . . The protagonist's intelligence is sometimes high and sometimes low. How was it written?

It's very interesting. The heroine's character and image are very three-dimensional, but the second and third apprentices are really exhausting. I can only say that they are stupid and bad without knowing it. They only see whether they are good or not and don't care about others at all. The heroine is forced to clean up the mess every day [face covering]. It feels like the heroine gets angry every time she is hurt and angry. She keeps it all in her heart. She is a little bit aggrieved. The heroine is very good.

It's quite good-looking. In the southern realm of the lower realm where morality is absent and spiritual energy is thin, everyone wants to advance on the path and engage in intrigues for the sake of cultivation. The high-ranking ones cannibalize the flesh and blood of the lower-ranking ones. Unlike other novels about cultivating immortals, the seedlings with good qualifications are aloof. If they can't grow, they are all used up. There are currently no dramas in which a strong woman is a stronger man than a strong man. The heroine is a disciple of a large sect in the north. She has a lot of knowledge and a tough mind. In addition, the Shenhao system brings spiritual stone rebates to the heroine. The adventure of survival and becoming stronger is very interesting. Three of the five apprentices have appeared, and there is only one male apprentice. Fortunately, he is not too masculine. He is a stupid but very delicate love-minded boy who is very dependent on the heroine (the pure yang body can play a role, right? I cry and call my senior sister hehe)

It's rare to encounter so many descriptions of female characters. There are good and bad, with different characteristics, and they are all vivid. Who knows that ordinary women are rarely seen in female videos. This book is valuable [OK] and I finally have some brains (I finally don't just click on any interesting article and mark it as a non-female character. The heroine is obviously very weak. OK? I don't ask for a strong woman, but she is a normal person at least@_＠)

What a novel novel about immortality. The world of immortality is so big. There must be some means to survive as an immortal. Compared with the salty fish heroines, funny heroines and so on that I have read before. In the early stage, the heroine was able to bend and stretch when she encountered a strong enemy, she was plotted against her, she retaliated directly when she saw an opportunity, she also decisively grabbed a chance to find a way out of a desperate situation, unexpected reversal, and her meticulousness made me crazy. The communication between the system and the heroine is very meaningful. It is different from the regular master-apprentice novel. The supporting characters are well-rounded. Yurou's sentence "If the tea is spilled, will Fu Huaheng blame me?" There is not a lot of words to describe her in the article, but the character is established immediately. She is a very gentle young lady.

The author's writing is super good. It's an excellent book. The setting is very novel and completely dark. The writing is not bad. I like Yurou, Fu Bao, and Qing Bao very much. The characters are well created. It's not a loss to invest in. But judging from the number of chapters I've read so far, I really can't get used to Song. It gives me a character that has too many things and is stupid. It's hard for him to control his feelings because of his irritability. 80% Of the completely avoidable things that Fu Bao encounters are caused or created by him. He causes more harm than good to Fu Bao. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I've already finished 2/3 of it. I hope this character can be changed or this person can grow in the future.

It's good to read. Maybe many people avoid the male apprentice, but I think this book is very good because of him. The creator is no longer obsessed with giving the male character a golden body. The male is so emotionally short-sighted and extreme. He fits my core image of a "damp male ghost" very well. Like, the dank male ghosts we usually see have given them too many golden bodies, and given men too many charms that don't exist in them. This is good. I hope he will be infatuated and dedicated to the protagonist and die for love in self-satisfaction, okay? Don't whitewash, don't give charms.

Although the heroine of this novel is not happy enough and can always be suppressed, she always bounces back naturally and survives. The description shows that the heroine is very smart and reliable, and the core is super powerful. I couldn't read it before because I don't like to read stories where the heroine is too miserable. Now I'm a little obsessed with it. And I found that the core highlight of this novel is that the apprentice's character can't overtake the heroine. The heroine really has a charismatic personality and she will influence others to become powerful people, unlike other master-disciple stories. The heroine lies flat and has a mediocre personality. The apprentice is in a strong state.

How come Tomato always has such good articles but low ratings? The rating of this article is really low compared to the quality. I almost missed a good article. Fortunately, I am suspicious by nature. The settings in the early part of the article are very attractive. After reading so many casual novels, this is the first time I have seen the cruel and apocalyptic era of cultivating immortals. The heroine is also very lovable. She is not a virgin, does not hesitate, is very rational, calm and cautious, and has a full personality. The systematic character slightly neutralizes the seriousness in this background, and the whole logic is quite smooth and coherent. It is really good-looking.

It's very interesting. I see that some people don't like to read the ambiguous plot of master and apprentice, but please understand the label of this novel first, romance! The label has already been marked. To be honest, this novel is one of the rare novels in which a woman is among the disciples. The heroine herself is also very individual, and the author's emotional and career lines are both accurate. If you want to see the heroine without any love line and only career line as a lone wolf, you can search related tags without CP. Thank you.

It's good-looking. It's a different fairy tale about the survival of the fittest. The spirit of the weak is rarely cruel. I really like the heroine's sobriety and independence. I finally accepted a disciple to feed myself first, and I will consider future resources. The two disciples are quite cute. There are so many foreshadowings that are very interesting. I would like to see more.

The plot is very attractive and has many twists and turns. In the early stage, the heroine did not want to tie into the system because she would die if she made the wrong move in that environment. I have never seen such a world of immortality. The author wrote it very well [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

Why is this such a good book? I don't accept it. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. How can I give it a low score? There is no incompatibility between the three views [Ma Zhu] [Ma Zhu]. I like the heroine very much. I want to see the moment when the heroine returns to her peak. This is what girls should watch and remove all stumbling blocks.

I stumbled upon it by chance and read it all at once. After reading it, I just felt that it was still unfinished. Having read a lot of articles about the world of immortality, the world of immortality outlined in this book is refreshing. The boundary between the righteous way and the evil way in the world has been blurred, and it is full of intrigues, cruelty and exploitation. Even if the heroine's Dantian is broken and her strength is low, she can solve problems one by one in difficult situations and seize every opportunity. She really feels at ease in her heart. Three of the apprentices required for system upgrade have now been unlocked. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot development [Like][Like][Like][Like][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the heroine took on three apprentices. Among them, I wanted to take in one named Rouyu (? I forgot her name), but unfortunately she was tricked into a puppet. The characters of the eldest apprentice and second apprentice in the early stage can still be seen in the logic of the story. The eldest apprentice is averagely talented, but hardworking and careful. The heroine helps her, and she also helps the heroine. Although they each get what they need at the moment, it is still a normal master-sister relationship (master-apprentice relationship). But the direction of the second apprentice is becoming more and more confusing. What I want to see the most is the heroine's unique beauty, hahaha. The heroine can see people's personalities and calculations very clearly, but she just can't tell that the second apprentice likes him. Then there is a series of confusing operations by the second apprentice. The character of the third disciple is that of the second generation in the novel who comes from a good family and has good talents. I don't know what the personalities of the two apprentices at the back are. In the middle, there is a scene where the third apprentice and the second apprentice are talking about the plot of "The Peerless Favorite". It is said in the third apprentice's words that the boy who was replaced by the second apprentice was written by the author. Isn't it the same with the second apprentice? [Laughter and tears] [Laughter and tears] [Laughter and tears]. To be honest, I still hope that the second apprentice will be more normal later on. Have a look again~ I wish the author a good flow of literary thoughts and finish it as soon as possible~

Very nice. . Stay up late and watch. . Why is there so little data in this book? . Increase more. . Author, please update it again. I can do anything. The heroine's faint charm is simply too attractive. . . . .

It's good-looking. It's very different from the fairy tales I've read before. It's full of darkness and danger, and the characters are very fleshed out. It gives me a very novel feeling. It's not enough [crying][crying][crying]

I really like this type of novel! The author is really good at writing. Each character is very well drawn. The writing style is very delicate with flesh and blood. Every character has its own highlight, especially the heroine. I really love it to death. She is so handsome. I am hurt all over again because of the disciples. I feel so sad [I almost cry] I was looking forward to the heroine having five apprentices. I thought this book would be updated all the time, but I didn't wait until the end. I hope the author will continue to update this book! I read a lot of comment sections saying that the second apprentice is too ungrateful, but I think it's okay. He was originally in the small sect at the beginning, with preconceived ideas and long-term experience. In addition, the heroine Bao Bao is the first person who is sincerely so kind to him and invests energy and material resources in him. If it were me, I would also fall in love with the heroine. The most important thing is that these feelings are also one-line, and the divination in the text can be completely ignored. Every character is portrayed with flesh and blood, and many of the settings are quite interesting. For example, this world view is the southern border and the northern border, and there are many small worlds with boundary stones. I think it is quite interesting. I hope that the sword bone of the fourth apprentice can be recovered soon. I also hope that the five apprentices will be recruited soon so that the heroine can reshape the Dantian. A genius of a generation [almost crying] is really handsome. Big cheers for the author. If you continue to update, it is best to add as much foreshadowing as possible. A very good book. Come on! There is no need to update too quickly, but you must write this book carefully and carefully! (My first long review may not be very good, but I really like this book [I almost cried]

It's very interesting. It's not like other fairy tales. The plot and clues are quite interesting.

I found another treasure hahaha. It is a non-traditional fairy tale. This fairy tale world is the cruelest one I have read so far. The characters and plots are well written. The heroine is awesome and the readers will not be wronged (but they will feel sorry for what happened to the heroine in the past). After reading this, I want to read a few more chapters. The background of cultivating immortals and the heroine's experience are logically consistent. It's very comfortable to watch. I also like this heroine, she is exactly Gao Zhi's sister (I like it so much that she was not taken over by the red-haired boy).

I think the plot and character creation of this novel are particularly outstanding, especially the heroine's second apprentice Song Linhuo. The character is vivid and not stereotyped. Even if he occasionally does impulsive things, it doesn't disgust me at all. The overall impression is very good. Only the logic and character setting of the third apprentice really made me a little unhappy, but that's okay. Other than that, this book almost didn't bother me. What's interesting is that it has a very special appeal. I usually don't have a good reading patience, and I rarely stay immersed in the same book for a long time, but this one made me click on the update every time I had free time for several days. I didn't realize how much time had passed. Now I plan to read it first, and when there are more chapters in the future, I can find a whole block of time to read it in one go! ꒰ঌ^•𖥦•^໒꒱The above comments are my own feelings and do not represent everyone else. So everyone should take a good look at it >ᴗoಣ~

A very rare type of heroine! The heroine has a distinct personality, is beautiful and powerful, and every detail can reveal the proud daughter of heaven. It is fascinating and the world view is very interesting! Highly recommended, it's really beautiful ^ω^

Beautiful, really, very impressive. The heroine is here, the succubus. It's just that a few apprentices are too noisy, they should be growth-oriented. Author, please just generate a novel with 100,000 chapters for me! (). Please don't fool me. It looks really good.

A very unique world of cultivating immortals. I couldn't stand it at first because the people were so bad, but the more I watched, the better it became.

I've read Chapter 120 so far, and it's surprisingly good! ! The protagonist is not weak. You can feel that the protagonist is a very decisive and somewhat soft-hearted person, setting up the plot step by step in the plot. Part of the plot in which emotional intelligence is replaced by super IQ is really unexpectedly funny. There are a lot of foreshadowings that make people can't help but look forward to watching.

Oh my god, the image of the heroine is still very three-dimensional, but this apprentice is so annoying, they are all troublemakers.

Damn, this is so beautiful, the writing is great, the characters all have their own personalities, which makes people like me very much, and the subject matter is also very novel. I loved it, but I just felt it wasn't enough [I almost cried] and I finished it in less than a day.

Very good article. The world view is very attractive, and I really like the light character design of the heroine. When I clicked on the homepage, I found that it was the teacher I had followed the article before! I like the teacher's Shao Xiangwen very much. I hope this one will be a longer one.

It's really super pretty! The plot is novel, getting rid of the fixed script of "upgrading and fighting monsters" of traditional immortality novels, and instead starts from what happened after the fall of a generation of geniuses. At the beginning, a "dark" version of the world of cultivation is constructed that is different from the ordinary world of immortality but is extremely real... There are also a lot of suspense, and it is so well written [Love][Love]