The new book "In order to pay off the Internet loan, I made up a dungeon invasion" has been published and is in book testing. I am asking for your support from dads. [The rating has just come out, it may go up later, time-travel + fictitious + no heroine or single heroine + literary copycat + urban daily life, first time writing, poor writing skills, accept all opinions with an open mind] My name is Wu Le, I am a poor college student, I traveled through time and became a lost young master of a rich family. I thought I could live a life of eating and waiting to die, but on the first day I came home, I was ignored, and the whole family was around my adopted son. Wu Le did not wait on me, so he turned around and left. Unexpectedly Discovering that there are no Internet articles that he was familiar with in his previous life, Wu Le, as a senior Internet article lover in his previous life, smiled contemptuously. He fought with his left hand and perfected the world with his right hand. Many years later, Wu Le, who had reached the top of Internet articles, sighed with emotion: "It turns out that making money is so easy!" The author of an online article from the same period said: "Hey, hey, you think it is easy. Take a look at us!" "Brother, please, rest and give us a way to survive!"
Reader comments
Overall, it was pretty good, but for me, this relationship with Xiaomei went a little too far. The relationship between them is just brother and sister, and they are not biological brothers and sisters. It has always been the male protagonist's unilateral contribution, but Xiaomei is a little confused, for example: [Wu Le did not respond, watching this scene quietly! The atmosphere at the dinner table was a little tense, but Fu Xiaomei kicked Wu Le hard under the table. I just want to ask: This is a family matter, what does it have to do with her! And ["Tell me. Where did you go all day? You didn't even say a word when you came back!!!" Xiaomei asked.
"I just forgot. I had something to do and I went out!" Wu Le defended.
"Forget? You can forget all this, but you still think of me as your sister? Huh?"] You know she is your sister. She is an adult, 30 years old, why do you still look like this when you come back later? Please clarify the relationship! Everything else is pretty good.
It's pretty good, better than the mindless and uncomfortable viewing. It's so much better to be disgusting. It's really hard to find high-quality online articles nowadays. Female videos are very popular. You have written very well, keep up the good work!
I saw Chapter 117, it was so good, it was with a divorced woman with a baby. Tsk, tsk, tsk, you are indeed a thief. See you in the next book, author.
Doesn't the author plan to add Wu Dong and the Great Master? There are mortals who can add Li Changgeng to the prehistoric world after finishing writing.
The plot at the beginning was very to my taste, but I didn't really like the later treatment of the Wu family except the old man, as well as some of Xiaomei's description details. It may be a matter of personal perception, but I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It's still pretty good-looking, even though he's also a real and fake young master. But there is no such thing as those female videos in the past, how to make you unhappy, how to frame green tea and so on. I haven't even written a few chapters of this, but later on I started a series of works about the male protagonist Wenzhaogong. Although the pace of time is a bit fast, a few years have passed in a flash. Still pretty good-looking. Oh, there is a heroine
It's not bad. When I first read the title, I thought it was another kind of book that would slap the whole family in the face. I regretted that kind of writing. At first glance, I thought it was pretty good, and it seemed quite leisurely [Chigua]
I watched it for an hour but it ended up being less than half an hour [Petrochemical]
Entertainment in the skin of a true young master
Is the protagonist a green turtle who wants to be a father? The jump was very sudden.
If you are new here, please read the first few chapters and Chapter 66 first, then you will get together with this biological family.
Well, how should I put it, it is still a pretty good book, just like a running account. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on.
It's pretty. Come on.
Unable to grasp the sand
Yes, the writing is quite beautiful.
The writing is okay, but there are many typos and paragraphs.
Science fiction. Those holy words. Writing a personal series [Thinking]
It's written by a real person, and I read it in a skip. I didn't read the first few chapters, so I don't know if it's bad or not. I just skipped it to pass the time.
I've finished reading the updates, it's so well written. A normal person would withhold property from his biological son and make his adopted son work overtime. The same is true for those who later wrote books.
Overall, it looks pretty good. I support it [laughs evilly]
This book is written very smoothly and well, suitable for listening to while working.
It's very heartwarming. It's not as troublesome as the real and fake young masters on female videos. After watching the first few pictures, the following ones become more and more heartwarming.
Xiaomei thought they were the heroine, but she didn't expect they were brothers.
Read to Chapter 91
Please keep up the good work
It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author
You can write well, come on
Not bad, standard version. . .
If we don't create a legacy plot, I'm sorry for the title of this wealthy young man [eating melon]
Good, good, good, good
Does the author know how to write (Zhu Xian)?
You've already called me dad, so what else can you say?
Overall, it was pretty good, but for me, this relationship with Xiaomei went a little too far. The relationship between them is just brother and sister, and they are not biological brothers and sisters. It has always been the male protagonist's unilateral contribution, but Xiaomei is a little confused, for example: [Wu Le did not respond, watching this scene quietly! The atmosphere at the dinner table was a little tense, but Fu Xiaomei kicked Wu Le hard under the table. I just want to ask: This is a family matter, what does it have to do with her! And ["Tell me. Where did you go all day? You didn't even say a word when you came back!!!" Xiaomei asked. "I just forgot. I had something to do and I went out!" Wu Le defended. "Forget? You can forget all this, but you still think of me as your sister? Huh?"] You know she is your sister. She is an adult, 30 years old, why do you still look like this when you come back later? Please clarify the relationship! Everything else is pretty good.
It's pretty good, better than the mindless and uncomfortable viewing. It's so much better to be disgusting. It's really hard to find high-quality online articles nowadays. Female videos are very popular. You have written very well, keep up the good work!
I saw Chapter 117, it was so good, it was with a divorced woman with a baby. Tsk, tsk, tsk, you are indeed a thief. See you in the next book, author.
Doesn't the author plan to add Wu Dong and the Great Master? There are mortals who can add Li Changgeng to the prehistoric world after finishing writing.
The plot at the beginning was very to my taste, but I didn't really like the later treatment of the Wu family except the old man, as well as some of Xiaomei's description details. It may be a matter of personal perception, but I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It's still pretty good-looking, even though he's also a real and fake young master. But there is no such thing as those female videos in the past, how to make you unhappy, how to frame green tea and so on. I haven't even written a few chapters of this, but later on I started a series of works about the male protagonist Wenzhaogong. Although the pace of time is a bit fast, a few years have passed in a flash. Still pretty good-looking. Oh, there is a heroine
It's not bad. When I first read the title, I thought it was another kind of book that would slap the whole family in the face. I regretted that kind of writing. At first glance, I thought it was pretty good, and it seemed quite leisurely [Chigua] I watched it for an hour but it ended up being less than half an hour [Petrochemical]
Entertainment in the skin of a true young master
Is the protagonist a green turtle who wants to be a father? The jump was very sudden.
If you are new here, please read the first few chapters and Chapter 66 first, then you will get together with this biological family.
Well, how should I put it, it is still a pretty good book, just like a running account. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on.
It's pretty. Come on.
Unable to grasp the sand
Yes, the writing is quite beautiful.
The writing is okay, but there are many typos and paragraphs.
Science fiction. Those holy words. Writing a personal series [Thinking]
It's written by a real person, and I read it in a skip. I didn't read the first few chapters, so I don't know if it's bad or not. I just skipped it to pass the time.
I've finished reading the updates, it's so well written. A normal person would withhold property from his biological son and make his adopted son work overtime. The same is true for those who later wrote books.
Overall, it looks pretty good. I support it [laughs evilly]
This book is written very smoothly and well, suitable for listening to while working.
It's very heartwarming. It's not as troublesome as the real and fake young masters on female videos. After watching the first few pictures, the following ones become more and more heartwarming.
Xiaomei thought they were the heroine, but she didn't expect they were brothers.
Read to Chapter 91 Please keep up the good work
It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author
You can write well, come on
Not bad, standard version. . . If we don't create a legacy plot, I'm sorry for the title of this wealthy young man [eating melon]
Good, good, good, good
Does the author know how to write (Zhu Xian)?
You've already called me dad, so what else can you say?
Good, good, good