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The female protagonists who appear are all very distinctive and delicate. The classic plot of a female imp and a demon girl marrying the male protagonist, but having to part ways has also become the driving force for the male protagonist to become stronger. It is a pity that such an attractive female protagonist is offline like this.

Let me first tell you the reason for giving 4 stars. This book is not very poisonous. 3 Stars The image of the female supporting role is mainly that of the little witch. 1 Star Reason for deducting one star ①Before the little witch left, the protagonist showed a strong desire to become stronger. But after the little witch left, the protagonist sat quietly for a long time and did not practice immediately (of course, it is possible that he did not recover) ② When the little witch left, the villain proposed to return the favor to the little witch after collecting 3 holy elixirs. In the subsequent plot, the system gave the mission of fragments of the holy elixir, but the protagonist did not do it immediately, and the reason was not well explained in the text. ③The atmosphere created by the protagonist and the villain in the preconditions from the departure of the little witch Huaibei to the time she left has always given people a sad and depressing feeling. Then when she met the second female lead's master and was threatened, she felt very depressed. The protagonist in the previous article easily took care of the second female lead and was almost invincible in this world. There is a bit of conflict and lack of explosive points. ④ The writing style is young, the wording and sentence making skills are weak, and some plots lack certain foreshadowing. For example, the little witch does not suck the male protagonist's blood. Although it is explained in the later chapters, it can be clearly felt that it is to make up for the aftermath. Then there are the emotional changes of the heroine before and after and the sudden appearance of the villain. Although there are clues from the poison in the heroine's blood and the nature of the blood demon, the reason is not enough, and the turning point is quick. But this is tomatoes free and there are free standards that can be understood

The writing is really good, but I would like to give the author some advice. Don't accept too many women, or have affairs with too many people. If you write too many people, it's easy to lose control and give people the feeling of being a stud. I feel that some supporting female characters can be added appropriately to promote the story. It doesn't have to be ambiguous, such as a normal friendship or something else.

It's good to read. Xiao is a little witch. She has a pure love line and Lu Zou's training line. She inserted a dream simulation plot and misunderstood Lu. Lu currently thinks that the protagonist is going astray and wants to pull the protagonist out but he is trapped. It's a very good novel. The last time I liked it so much was the author Dolphin, the god next door.

This book is indeed not bad, especially the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is particularly delicately described. I also want to ask the author when he will teach the person named Pei a lesson. I feel that the male protagonist is a little aggrieved towards her [face covering]

This work is really good. As of the time I watched it. The part about pure love touched me, a person who has never been interested in pure love. But I don't know what the rest of the writing is like. Anyway, you can definitely see the 30 pictures before. Blessed are those who like both harem and pure love

Come on, the author, the writing is really good, the writing style is quite good, and the description of the heroine is also quite good, it is considered a good book, come on

After reading it, as a 10-year old bookworm, I only read Tomato as an H-story. However, the concept of this book is very good, and the protagonist's IQ is not very low, but he is also sugar-coated. So far, it is quite good. If the starting point of the book is right, it is not a bad online article. I hope it can be completed.

IQ is online, not brainless, and the protagonist is not a virgin, but it's just not interesting enough [smile]

I hope the author can continue writing! I like this plot so much, and I feel like there is a lot of drama behind it. I hope the author will not give up on this book, I will follow you forever!

Author, you know, "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to listen to, including readers. When you are seventy, do what you want and don't go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters in a day, you can do whatever you want! Update it quickly!!! [Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh]

The writing is very beautiful. The author writes according to his own ideas. Come on, the process of breaking through the inner demon is still a bit touching. The heroine's image is also well portrayed [Sending Hearts]

I think it's pretty good-looking, why was it taken off the shelves [crying] To be honest, this book doesn't have much illegal content? Those idiots reported it. Old Feng who reported those thick breasts

This book is good (I read 30 chapters). Although I wanted to read it, I saw that the eldest wife was leaving and I couldn't bear to continue reading. Quite sweet. I plan to add it to a bookshelf and keep it until the author finishes it or stops reading it. PS: If the author abandons the book, please send me the outline. Thanks. [Laugh]

Not bad, I hope the next heroine will be a reverse protagonist Although Xiao said that the protagonist can have a harem, I feel that it is not good for the protagonist to take the initiative.

No, buddy, I have a book, so how can I raise a book like this [crazy]

I originally thought that he would be the post-official, Uncle Xiao Huang, when he first came up. I didn't expect it to be half pure love [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] But it's quite watchable, the writing style is exquisite and the IQ is online

Oh my god, brothers, why has this book been taken off the shelves?

666 The book will be gone after a nap [crying]

It's okay so far, author, keep up the good work! [Code][Please update]

The author's writing style is very good. The characters are three-dimensional and not formulaic. The plot is smooth and logical, like a trumpet. It seems that there are multiple female protagonists but it is not unreasonable. There are probably only four female protagonists. The impression is very good.

It's really beautiful. The two heroines carefully described at this stage each have their own characteristics. I hope the author can continue to handle each heroine's role in this way. The plot development is also very smooth, and I hope that the various mysteries will be slowly solved. Quick update, can't sleep at night)

A very nice new book, the writing is very good, the plot design is very novel, I love reading it, I just want to read more, I almost finished it and I don't want to read it anymore [exploration] [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] Why was it taken off the shelves? I only kept it for two or three days. When I came back to see it, it was gone.

I originally just wanted to keep a book, but why was it taken off the shelves!

I haven't seen enough Why is there no more [crying][crying]

Good book, catching up with the big crowd. The low rating is probably because it is a newly released book.

It's great. When will this book be released? Are you coming back? It's probably gone, there's no news yet. Is there any hope of resurrection?

Tomato is one of the few that portrays the characters very well and the plot is well connected.

It's a very good book about cultivating immortals with multiple female protagonists. The emotional line is quite normal and not abrupt (Xiao Qingxian was banned for being too strong). I personally feel that the emotional line is very smooth after following it. However, I still want to see the reaction of the master and the senior sister after they find out about Mu Wen's marriage and the Shura field.

Not bad, not bad, and quite unique. The only shortcoming is that the author is very arrogant in wording! [Laughing][laughing]