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The characters are well-drawn. And it's not easy to depict real female thinking for female characters. What's even better is that the heroines are not vases to be saved, but beings that can hold up half the sky. The struggle between political power and theocracy also has a certain depth, and the development of science and technology is relatively hard-core, not a system cheat. As for the shortcomings... The chapters are too unitary, which leads to conflicts in the arrangement of various timelines. In addition, finance and business are selectively ignored. That is to say, the plot of technology being stuck or being interfered by external interference did not happen. Just a little regretful. Currently at Chapter 245, I feel that the plot is getting more and more sloppy. It probably started with the antagonism between brother and sister in the Royal Capital Chapter, right? The chain reaction started by the assassination of the second princess seems very coherent at first glance, but there are many logical flaws. Especially for the subordinates of the second princess, it is unreasonable to lead their subordinates to break into the palace late at night, and even if they break in, they go to question the crime without bringing evidence of guilt (the assassin's body). Is this so stupid? The second is the end of Chapter 243. The male protagonist was actually kidnapped by a female assassin? Laughing to death! Mind-reading skills have also been exploited. Then even if he was kidnapped, the male protagonist actually had no backup plan. I couldn't understand it again! Doesn't this book focus on electric power technology? Now that the electric shock spear has been made, there is no shortened electric shock rod? Then even if 244's mind-reading ability comes back, there is no countermeasure? So disappointing! If the quality of writing continues to decline, it is recommended that the author stop updating for a while and polish it.

It's a pretty good Western fantasy novel with the theme of "Release That Witch". The world view is a nitrate-free world, so the protagonist uses electrical technology. The emotional lines are also well written, and aspects such as the struggle for hegemony and territory development are also relatively logical. If you are interested in related entries, you can read this book. I think this is a new book with great potential! [Like][Like][Like]

After seeing some book friends' views on soul travel, I would like to express my humble opinion. If it is inappropriate, everyone can discuss it. Give yourself five stars first🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟[laughing] Some friends' doubts about the setting of soul travel actually touch on a profound philosophical proposition-"self-identity". Science fiction writer Wang Jinkang has a short story "Leopard Man", which uses hard science fiction to push the issue of "self-identity" to the extreme boundary of biology, forming a wonderful contrast with the dilemma of soul travel. The core logic of the novel is: when a person's body is gradually replaced with the genes and organs of a leopard, at what critical point does he "no longer be himself"? This question is shocking because it challenges our materialistic understanding of "self". "Leopard Man" shows the alienation from "human" to "non-human", while soul travel shows the dislocation from "modern self" to "strange identity". In the setting of soul travel, you retain complete memories and values, but your social identity, interpersonal relationships, and body belong to others. Both "Leopard Man" and "Soul Pass" reveal the same proposition - the concept of "self" is far more fragile and vague than we imagine. With the development of brain-computer interface, consciousness uploading and other technologies, perhaps one day, human beings can really digitize their consciousness and upload it to the cloud before the body dies - then, does this consciousness that exists in the cloud still count as "you"? Does this digital "self" still exist? Perhaps "self" is never an immutable entity, but a process that is constantly being constructed and deconstructed. In this sense, the important thing may not be to ask "who am I", but to make a clear choice - every choice is reshaping the "self". Jump out of the setting of the novel and return to reality - life only lasts a hundred years. Instead of clinging to an inherent identity label, it is better to become the person you really want to be through constant construction and deconstruction. Thank you to all the readers who have accompanied this book, thank you🙏

I've read enough system novels. The protagonists in those novels are all puppets of the system. All their actions are brainless and illogical. In one sentence, they just have to implement system requirements. This book starts off a bit well. From the beginning to the end, the protagonists and heroines behave very reasonably. There are also branches to the main plot, and multiple forces are intertwined. It feels like a tribute to Game of Thrones.

I have finished reading the first volume. It is a very high-quality book. The good and bad sides are both online. The characters are all flesh and blood, and there is no brainless plot. The main feature is that the electric age has arrived in advance, which is eye-catching. We look forward to the dimensionality reduction of subsequent technologies [please update] [top post]

It's a good book on Tomato, although it feels a bit artificial in some places, and it varies from person to person (it's a little bit poisonous, but it can be ignored). Then the rhythm is a little faster when the electric shock spear comes out and then slows down again. The subject matter is good, but the writing is too long and maybe it is redundant? For example, the Holy See, Elves, Pirates, and Kingdoms only reach the fourth echelon of power (the super-standard Marquis power is perfect) after 250 chapters. If the author wants to add demon invasion, new continent, and undead natural disasters in addition to this, I am afraid that this book can be written for 1,000 chapters. Readers can accept growth, but they cannot accept the plot of "if it wasn't for the protagonist, he would have burped on the spot." This kind of plot is also a poison classic. This is why many Tadada novels are slow to discourage readers. Slowness is due to time constraints, and many authors choose to directly suppress it. The most outrageous thing I have ever seen is that the protagonist had a big battle and the seeds of his anger were broken. It's still recommended to read it. After all, there haven't been any very good books on Tomato recently. Since the rise of AI, it's remarkable to be able to create one's own plot and worldview.

It's good-looking. The male and female protagonists and villains have online IQs. It's not a brainless novel. It's enough for me, a bookworm who once passed the postgraduate entrance examination for electrical engineering, to see the ptsd. It can be seen that the author's knowledge is quite solid, but it's a bit strange that there is no development of medicine in more than 200 chapters. Hahh

I have been reading books for too long, and after reading 200 chapters, I have almost forgotten them all. Watched it again. There are some shortcomings, but it's actually pretty good. Basically everything will come back round. But it was quite satisfying to read them all in a few days. [Think]

This book is one of the better ones I've read in the same genre as "Release the Witch", but I have a few questions. The first one is that during the electrification process, wouldn't an explosion occur even if there is no nitric acid? Why not apply explosions to combat? The second thing is that after collecting so many witches, should we include all witches in the harem or only the senior witches? Moreover, cities and towns are progressing a bit too fast, but they have not rewritten town planning, such as medical care and roads. And the author should update it soon! ! ! Overall, the writing is good, but I don't know why it's not popular. It's a bit like the Tomato version of Let That Witch Go. Maybe it's because the number of words is too small, so it's not popular. I hope it can open up a larger world view and have a slightly larger number of words.

Well, it is a book that needs to be read with your brain. This book is not about pure technological crushing, but about shaping a modern civilization from various aspects such as politics, economy, culture, etc., And finally exposes the truth that the Holy See has concealed for thousands of years [laughs] But I looked through the comments and found that what the author wanted to write was a group portrait, but reading the whole book, there is no one kind of group portrait. It feels like there are too few minor characters and supporting characters in it. They basically use the characters' behaviors to prove their growth. He is worthy of being a science and engineering author, but he lacks the language and psychology to reflect the character's growth (including the heroine, I feel a bit). This part also needs to be written, otherwise readers will not be able to understand it. Where is the medical and health aspect? The author looks at me big [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The writing is okay, please support me.

Very good, the logic is clear, the writing is good, and the characters are well created.

It's a good book, I suggest the author design the plot well, it will become popular.

It's okay, this kind of female character portrayal is okay, but I actually have a doubt. I have forgotten the name of the maid next to the protagonist. Dongzhi has lived with him for so long, and the protagonist's personality suddenly changes drastically. How can he still not know who he is? This hole needs to be filled.

The IQ is online, the plot is interesting, and it is entertaining while still maintaining logic. The heroines are not vases, and the description of female psychology is very accurate. This book is good. I usually read Qidian. This book was recommended by a friend. Suggested starting point for the author

Observe first, it's really good in the early stage. OK, brothers, I have followed the group. After tasting it, I must say that it is really delicious. The author created each character with vivid images and interesting stories. I think the characteristics of this book are that the protagonist is not a eunuch. I hope the author can bring us more epic hymns, more interesting daily routines, and better stories. I will always support it! Come on! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I've just read the latest chapter. It's very interesting. It belongs to a technological powerhouse and the plot has a slow and appropriate pace.

I think it's pretty good

I really like this kind of theory.

This protagonist is not a eunuch and can have a real life. If you give likes, the author will respond [Like]

Based on my experience of reading so many Western Fantasy Lords articles on Tomato, this book is rated above 9 points. You can see that the author's description of climbing technology is very good. I think there are some shortcomings in that the author's description of politics and military is relatively simple. The development of productive forces will bring about the reform of production relations and systems, as well as military construction. I think the author can write something about this aspect.

Very good book

Liangcao is well written, good luck to the author

It's okay. I thought it was a bit lame when I saw that there weren't enough people to rate it. Surprisingly, it's not bad. I haven't seen any bad points yet.

Okay, so far it's pretty good.

Author, do you have any pictures of the female protagonist and the male protagonist?

In fact, regarding the plot of Gunpowder, I guess it is a long-term foreshadowing, but the impression is not good, mainly because I have tried several chapters but failed and gained nothing, and the plot has not advanced. It would be great to have some unexpected plot in a place like this [laughing]

The rhythm can be maintained without too many bells and whistles.

A breath of fresh air outside of fast-paced novels

I feel like it's still very well written. The writing is quite good, I feel it can be rated at least around 8 points