Who’s the Sword Idiot? Stop Making Your Husband Laugh

I feel it is better than Big Tank. It is not the kind of delicate writing, but the kind of lightness hidden in the words that collides with people's hearts, making people deeply aware of the vividness of the characters in the novel. The author must stick to it, the route of driving low and walking high is very suitable for you!

It's my first time for a newbie to post a long comment, so please bear with me. First of all, let me put it in perspective: The following is just my personal opinion. A thousand readers will have a thousand Hamlets, and each person will have a different idea. There may be minor spoilers. First of all, let's briefly talk about the general situation. The author's writing style does not pursue the rhetoric too much, but it can still be beautiful, such as: "Although the sycamore tree is standing, its heart is empty, waiting to bloom in spring, but it is buried in winter." Secondly, the settings of the male and female protagonists are very interesting and it is not a traditional post-marital romance. The male protagonist's three views on being a good person are well established, the female protagonist's character is also very full, and the author's psychological description is very interesting, which adds color to the portrayal of the character. Let's talk about it in detail below (there will be spoilers) The male and female protagonists got to know each other through constant blind dates, and then the two gods immediately got married, one to get rid of the painful life now and the other to draw material for the novel, yes! Yes, it was such a magical development [laughing] but it attracted me deeply. Currently, all the reviews I read from book friends are talking about raising a dog and the portrayal of the character Bobby. The plot of the dog may be to highlight the kindness of the male and female protagonists, but some readers are concerned about Teddy, which I don't quite understand why the review is negative. Then there is the shaping of Bobby as a person. Do you think he was born? He is very new, and there is no shortage of such irresponsible people in real life, which makes people disgusted and despised. But the author must have his reasons for writing this character in such a big way (he doesn't mean to whitewash Bobby, he will be beaten if he does something wrong, which cannot be changed). The male protagonist's complicated feelings for him bring people back to reality. This is not a youth romantic comedy. Everyone has their own life, and it is also to illustrate the complexity of the emotional behavior of human beings. The plot that impresses me the most now is the coldness between the male and female protagonists after they hugged each other. I think it was really well written. The male and female protagonists had a flash marriage with no emotional basis. The male protagonist felt that he had offended the female protagonist and didn't know how to speak. He thought that she was probably in love and wanted a divorce and was very uneasy. The female protagonist is too shy to speak, and is waiting for the male protagonist to sort out the situation and talk to her. Both parties are waiting for the other's action. Some people may think that the male protagonist is so scumbag and doesn't communicate. Wouldn't this trivial matter be solved? From the perspective of the male protagonist, a person who has never been in love suddenly gets married. She is very nice and treats you well, but she suddenly becomes cold to you the next day because of a hug from you. The most difficult thing for a couple is the cold period. How many couples can't get through this, hoping to wait for each other to speak, but it always backfires. If they can't take this step, they end up breaking up, not to mention the newlyweds of a man and a woman? People who have feelings can't let go, and people who don't have feelings can't be liked no matter what. As the author said, "They already have an agreement, it's just a legal agreement; they don't have an emotional agreement, this is the puzzle they must complete." I feel that the author handled it really well, and I haven't seen a novel with a love view that is so consistent with mine in a long time. If you have finished reading, thank you very much for your willingness to listen to my thoughts here. Looking forward to the author's subsequent chapters. Come on and write a book, meow~ A good book always shines when it shines~ By then, I will be a big old fan of the author, meow~ Please give the author more praise [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]

The narrative structure is good, and the colloquial dialogue and inner monologue are very comfortable to read. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. I am afraid that after staying up late to read it, I will writhe in bed and turn into a maggot.

Wow, the writing is really good. I haven't read such a touching book for a long time. Maybe its sentences are not amazing, but when I read it, I can taste a feeling, a unique taste. I like it very much. Let's put it this way, this story is like being told slowly by a half-drunk young man beside a glass of wine. It is fascinating. In short, good luck to the author. I hope you can still read such good-looking books in the future. I hope your career will go well. Suddenly I discovered that it was the author of a book I read before. Your last book was also pretty good.

How should I put it, this book has very obvious advantages and disadvantages, but it is indeed worth reading for those who like pure love. The advantage is that the whole book has clear logic, clear main and sub-lines, and creates a very perfect image for the male protagonist, so perfect that it is almost noble. Moreover, the description of the branch plots of Meng Yun and Bobby in the article is full of unknowns and reversals, with a touch of O. Henry. There are also some minor drawbacks. One is that both the male and female protagonists are overly idealized, which leads to a lack of immersion when reading. The male protagonist has a lot of peach blossoms. Although there are hints of giving up or something, some female supporting characters have little effect on promoting the plot of the story. On the contrary, they appear redundant and troublesome. Of course, this is also caused by the image of the male protagonist being created too well, so the problem is not too big. Finally, the article contains a lot of foreshadowing, and it is winding and convoluted. Sometimes it seems rather abrupt, and sometimes you can't react when the story ends. Generally speaking, this is an article suitable for pure lovers and idealists. It can be regarded as a small utopian world. I hope the author can keep updating and look forward to this book having a grand and perfect ending [Thoughts]

The flash marriage of the male and female protagonists is just like my attitude towards this novel. The brain waves resonate at the same frequency and it won my heart. If I could write a novel, I hope it would be like this. There is no deliberate routine, and the truth is revealed in the plainness. It's very difficult to create a sense of reality, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists does give me a real sense of "living people" (hahahaha, that's how the word should be used) Among the somewhat good male-female novels I have read recently, I like this one the most [like]

After the masterpiece "Meeting the Sexually Transformed Me", DaDaDa presents a new masterpiece that can be expected in the future. Although the subject matter is not new and the main theme is to get married first and then fall in love, the sentences and plot still retain the style of the old book and have the shadow of the old book. The plot is exciting enough without dragging on. As a fellow author, I sincerely recommend this book! ! !

It's a very heartwarming story, two people who are very similar to each other, and a very sweet daily life, which makes my lips curl up. As I said earlier, I felt that the two people's speaking styles and ways of thinking are somewhat similar. I clicked on the homepage and saw the author of Narcissus, a master writer: This is not surprising [laughter]

The writing is very good, quite sweet, and the writing is very romantic. Alas, I never thought that the reason why I couldn't read this novel is because I don't like dogs like Teddy. But it is very good and well written, except for this dog.

Marry first, fall in love later, the plot is very sweet and the author's writing is also good. If you like this style, you can read it. In short, it is very cute and sweet, and it is also so sweet that it makes people sour. Finally, I want to complain about why this kind of love story must have dogs and cats. The formula is so formulaic that I get annoyed when I see it.