Who Is the Sword Man? Don't Make Your Husband Laugh

I feel it is better than Big Tank. It is not the kind of delicate writing, but the kind of lightness hidden in the words that collides with people's hearts, making people deeply aware of the vividness of the characters in the novel. The author must stick to it, the route of driving low and walking high is very suitable for you!

It's my first time for a newbie to post a long comment, so please bear with me. First of all, let me put it in perspective: The following is just my personal opinion. A thousand readers will have a thousand Hamlets, and each person will have a different idea. There may be minor spoilers. First of all, let's briefly talk about the general situation. The author's writing style does not pursue the rhetoric too much, but it can still be beautiful, such as: "Although the sycamore tree is standing, its heart is empty, waiting to bloom in spring, but it is buried in winter." Secondly, the settings of the male and female protagonists are very interesting and it is not a traditional post-marital romance. The male protagonist's three views on being a good person are well established, the female protagonist's character is also very full, and the author's psychological description is very interesting, which adds color to the portrayal of the character. Let's talk about it in detail below (there will be spoilers) The male and female protagonists got to know each other through constant blind dates, and then the two gods immediately got married, one to get rid of the painful life now and the other to draw material for the novel, yes! Yes, it was such a magical development [laughing] but it attracted me deeply. Currently, all the reviews I read from book friends are talking about raising a dog and the portrayal of the character Bobby. The plot of the dog may be to highlight the kindness of the male and female protagonists, but some readers are concerned about Teddy, which I don't quite understand why the review is negative. Then there is the shaping of Bobby as a person. Do you think he was born? He is very new, and there is no shortage of such irresponsible people in real life, which makes people disgusted and despised. But the author must have his reasons for writing this character in such a big way (he doesn't mean to whitewash Bobby, he will be beaten if he does something wrong, which cannot be changed). The male protagonist's complicated feelings for him bring people back to reality. This is not a youth romantic comedy. Everyone has their own life, and it is also to illustrate the complexity of the emotional behavior of human beings. The plot that impresses me the most now is the coldness between the male and female protagonists after they hugged each other. I think it was really well written. The male and female protagonists had a flash marriage with no emotional basis. The male protagonist felt that he had offended the female protagonist and didn't know how to speak. He thought that she was probably in love and wanted a divorce and was very uneasy. The female protagonist is too shy to speak, and is waiting for the male protagonist to sort out the situation and talk to her. Both parties are waiting for the other's action. Some people may think that the male protagonist is so scumbag and doesn't communicate. Wouldn't this trivial matter be solved? From the perspective of the male protagonist, a person who has never been in love suddenly gets married. She is very nice and treats you well, but she suddenly becomes cold to you the next day because of a hug from you. The most difficult thing for a couple is the cold period. How many couples can't get through this, hoping to wait for each other to speak, but it always backfires. If they can't take this step, they end up breaking up, not to mention the newlyweds of a man and a woman? People who have feelings can't let go, and people who don't have feelings can't be liked no matter what. As the author said, "They already have an agreement, it's just a legal agreement; they don't have an emotional agreement, this is the puzzle they must complete." I feel that the author handled it really well, and I haven't seen a novel with a love view that is so consistent with mine in a long time. If you have finished reading, thank you very much for your willingness to listen to my thoughts here. Looking forward to the author's subsequent chapters. Come on and write a book, meow~ A good book always shines when it shines~ By then, I will be a big old fan of the author, meow~ Please give the author more praise [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]

The narrative structure is good, and the colloquial dialogue and inner monologue are very comfortable to read. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. I am afraid that after staying up late to read it, I will writhe in bed and turn into a maggot.

Wow, the writing is really good. I haven't read such a touching book for a long time. Maybe its sentences are not amazing, but when I read it, I can taste a feeling, a unique taste. I like it very much. Let's put it this way, this story is like being told slowly by a half-drunk young man beside a glass of wine. It is fascinating. In short, good luck to the author. I hope you can still read such good-looking books in the future. I hope your career will go well. Suddenly I discovered that it was the author of a book I read before. Your last book was also pretty good.

How should I put it, this book has very obvious advantages and disadvantages, but it is indeed worth reading for those who like pure love. The advantage is that the whole book has clear logic, clear main and sub-lines, and creates a very perfect image for the male protagonist, so perfect that it is almost noble. Moreover, the description of the branch plots of Meng Yun and Bobby in the article is full of unknowns and reversals, with a touch of O. Henry. There are also some minor drawbacks. One is that both the male and female protagonists are overly idealized, which leads to a lack of immersion when reading. The male protagonist has a lot of peach blossoms. Although there are hints of giving up or something, some female supporting characters have little effect on promoting the plot of the story. On the contrary, they appear redundant and troublesome. Of course, this is also caused by the image of the male protagonist being created too well, so the problem is not too big. Finally, the article contains a lot of foreshadowing, and it is winding and convoluted. Sometimes it seems rather abrupt, and sometimes you can't react when the story ends. Generally speaking, this is an article suitable for pure lovers and idealists. It can be regarded as a small utopian world. I hope the author can keep updating and look forward to this book having a grand and perfect ending [Thoughts]

The flash marriage of the male and female protagonists is just like my attitude towards this novel. The brain waves resonate at the same frequency and it won my heart. If I could write a novel, I hope it would be like this. There is no deliberate routine, and the truth is revealed in the plainness. It's very difficult to create a sense of reality, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists does give me a real sense of "living people" (hahahaha, that's how the word should be used) Among the somewhat good male-female novels I have read recently, I like this one the most [like]

It's a very heartwarming story, two people who are very similar to each other, and a very sweet daily life, which makes my lips curl up. As I said earlier, I felt that the two people's speaking styles and ways of thinking are somewhat similar. I clicked on the homepage and saw the author of Narcissus, a master writer: This is not surprising [laughter]

After the masterpiece "Meeting the Sexually Transformed Me", DaDaDa presents a new masterpiece that can be expected in the future. Although the subject matter is not new and the main theme is to get married first and then fall in love, the sentences and plot still retain the style of the old book and have the shadow of the old book. The plot is exciting enough without dragging on. As a fellow author, I sincerely recommend this book! ! !

Marry first, fall in love later, the plot is very sweet and the author's writing is also good. If you like this style, you can read it. In short, it is very cute and sweet, and it is also so sweet that it makes people sour. Finally, I want to complain about why this kind of love story must have dogs and cats. The formula is so formulaic that I get annoyed when I see it.

The writing is very good, quite sweet, and the writing is very romantic. Alas, I never thought that the reason why I couldn't read this novel is because I don't like dogs like Teddy. But it is very good and well written, except for this dog.

Don't poke me, idealism really pokes at me, because I am also an idealistic person. The male and female protagonists are innocent and sweet, and the supporting characters are a bit sharp. The male protagonist has very upright views (really upright), which is why he is idealistic. How should I put it? The origin is a bit ideal, but the process is very real. (Definitely not AI, the author's writing style is a bit special) You know my vision clearly. [Eat melon]

It's very beautiful, with rich characters, delicate writing, and warm daily life. Come on! Two people on the same frequency are attached to each other and take care of each other. The most ideal life is like this. A steady flow of water is the foundation of life. [Admiration][Like]

It's very sweet and beautiful. It's a pity that as a mouse in the gutter, I can't read such a beautiful story. I yearn for it and am jealous, but I always remind myself that I don't deserve this kind of happiness. Come on, write their story well and make it more beautiful [laughs]

I think what attracts me most about this book is that it has a very correct outlook on life! This book is not like the sweet pure love on the market, this pure love has more of a feeling of integrating love into life. I feel that as a student who has not yet entered society, I can learn a lot from it, such as love, marriage, work, social interaction or life skills. Compared to those full-sugar daily routines, I prefer this kind of daily routine with a stronger flavor of life. Good looking This book makes me feel more happy than sweet [laughing]

Let me first say a big thank you to the author for bringing me such an excellent novel. Lu Chen and Xi Muxue got married unexpectedly. The author controlled this very well. The relationship between the two did not arrive at the first step. Instead, after the two people had friction and resolved their knots, their emotions gradually sublimated (including Lu Chen's confusion and Xi Muxue's inner fear). The male protagonist, Lu Chen, has a very upright outlook on life (highly recommend reading the conversation with Bobby), but also has low self-esteem and confusion (the conversation with Xi Muxue, if there are similarities in the male protagonist's personality, it will really resonate). The female chairwoman, Mu Xue, is strong and gentle at the same time, with a high emotional intelligence, but because of the original family picture, she has low self-esteem and weakness. The author is very careful in shaping the male and female protagonists. I am very grateful to the author for letting me see what the characters I pursue in my dreams look like. . The author's writing style is also very good. Generally speaking, the plot is smooth and basically non-toxic. I highly recommend it.

The author writes really well and the writing style is excellent [laughs]. But because it was well written, the writing in Sister Meng's book was so harsh that I really didn't recover for half an hour after reading the abortion [face covering]. After reading this book, it really gave me a heavy blow to my view of love. It was too real to be fake. As a result, when I watch the love between the male and female protagonists, I think it is very fake and not something that can happen in reality [crying]. It's so brutal that I can't stand it anymore. It's not your fault, author. I came to the novel to find solace. I have never been in love, and I don't really want to do it after reading it. The author's writing is really good. I just need some time to accept that I can't see the end with the author. That's it.

This is a book that I like very much. The person who read it was squirming and squirming on the bed, shaking very badly. You asked me what I was doing. Of course I was laughing, but it was a bit short, just like this comment. After reading it, I beg you, please have more.

The writing is really awesome, the writing style is very good, and the description of emotions is also very good. I can feel the feeling of true love. Good luck, author.

For me personally, I think it's still very interesting to watch. I've watched too many fantasy-type movies, and suddenly seeing something so realistic makes me a little uncomfortable. Everyone is not perfect and has flaws. I've watched too many perfectionist movies. You can check this out.

Yes, the writing style is very natural and unobtrusive when narrating emotions, and it can describe the transformation of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. The most good thing about this book for me is that it has fixed a small problem, which is the matter of finding someone to marry and write novel material. In other novels, you may not pay attention to this kind of thing. , Or forget it after writing it, but this novel has been restored, and I think it is pretty good. It was restored by a niece who I thought was very typical. It is not out of the ordinary, but the niece is not that typical. She saw that the male protagonist was good to the female protagonist (cleared the keyboard gray) and accepted the male protagonist.

I really like this sense of reality, the flavor of life, and no routine. The heroine is very mature and loves life. As the article says, she is very romantic. Come on, author, I really like this style and hope to see more excellent works.

The plot is very heartwarming, the relationship between the two people is very sweet, and there are normal people's noises. It is not divorced from reality and has a real life atmosphere. This is my dream love, highly recommended! ୧•̀ꇴ•૭

It's well written, ordinary people, not high-ranking officials, wealthy businessmen, or reborn CEOs. The language is good, the storyline is compact, and the story line is clear.

You know, when I first started watching it, I felt that the male protagonist really looked like me. Although I am not as literary as the male protagonist, we all have the same views on the problem. We have the same correct three views, so it was very immersive at first. Later, I understood that this is the first time I have seen the emotions of similar people in this world, in this big dyeing vat, so the author really wrote it very well.

Marriage first, love later, two online article authors, one from Xi'an and one from Wuhan. The author's writing style is very good, with a poetic feel, and it reads like a ballad, slow and sweet. The author will bring some of his own ideas and perspectives on things. There are career lines but relatively few. A flash marriage but very logical and realistic.

As a novel about marriage first and love later, personally I am quite interested in this subject, and I have caught up with the latest chapter. Generally speaking, the beginning of the story is about meeting in a coffee shop, and the name of dog and the subsequent return also correspond to each other. It can be seen that the author is very Good, Xi Muxue and Lu Chen are still young, and there are still many things to face in the future. It is understandable that there will be some bumps along the way. As long as the young couple live a sweet and happy life, I hope their relationship will get better and better, and I also hope the author can insist on updating.

I don't know when AI started to spread. Internet articles are no longer the same as before, but they are slowly becoming more and more engrossed, as if they are completing a work to complete a task. This is the first time I want to review a work. For the marriage of Lu Chen and Xi Muxue, the pace is very fast, but the pace is very slow. The pace is fast enough to be realistic, but the pace is slow enough to be real. The feelings, dialogues, character descriptions and characters are really well written. The collision of emotions, the tangle, but calm acceptance of everything that happens. The writing style is not delicate and has no deliberate embellishments, but it has more of a flavor of life and a living emotion, as if you are experiencing it yourself. I hope the author will work hard and I hope he can give you spiritual support.

It's quite good. The author expressed his beautiful view of love and also showed his fantasy about his future writing career. The article is not an industrial saccharine, it also depicts the difficulty of reality. After all, people will remember the things they cannot obtain throughout their lives. [Blowing kiss]

Let's look at it from the beginning: The emotions are delicate. Although the flash marriage between the two people has no emotional basis, it is more based on mutual attraction and a little bit of the author's power of heaven. But the protagonist is too perfect, which is not good. There are good people, but too good people are too idealistic. Maybe there will be something different later? Looking forward to the follow-up ~ I will continue to read it It's the middle stage: the author should be a bit autobiographical. The relationship between husband and wife is like this. They compromise with each other and tolerate each other. It's a bit like looking in the mirror. Unlike previous sweet articles, there will be conflicts and misunderstandings, and it is not just about sweetness. This is the first time I have found a sense of immersion in a novel, hehe.

Thank you to the author for writing a great book. It's very beautiful and sweet. It's so sweet to me. [Blows a kiss] However, I may have a different understanding. I agree with Lu Chen more about the theoretical part in the article. I think that kind of thing should be left for a longer time in the future instead of now. I look forward to the author writing a more perfect ending (to be honest, I don't think this book ends well)