Elf: Rewrite the Script, This Time I Want It All

It's very interesting to watch, the main plot follows the plot, the plug-ins are pretty good, qsqc, the protagonist is not super supervised. Alas, I bought a second-hand one later, and the speed was much slower.

The plot module of the game is just that the main line of the plot is based on Xiaozhi's adventure. How can I put it... For the time being, it is worth reading, it is Liu Bei. Of course, there is also a plot of Elf battle, but it feels less. I think it will be more comfortable to watch it as an adult version of Pokémon. As for the poison points, there are too few now and it is hard to see anything. If I want to say it, in Chapter 17 or 18, the plot of Hanako and the protagonist discussing how to pick up Misty is a bit... Evil? However, if you have read the author's previous fairy tales of desire, you will feel that the protagonist is obviously much more straight this time [face covering], so if you feel uncomfortable reading this chapter, you can skip it. There is not much else to say. But I sincerely advise you that if you want to read it, just read it as a dark fairy tale or the Liu Bei you read elsewhere. If you insist on pursuing the elf battle to be exciting, you should read other fan fiction, such as the Chi Ye template. I only advise you to read this book as a Liu Bei cool article [Chigua]

Well, it's not that good, but I can watch it. Come on, write about Liu Bei's big brother.

Alas, as I get older, I still like to order directly, such as Tiankuang Legend [Eating Melon]

I have seen the plot on the website. The first one was at my aunt's house with both hands broken. [Smiling evilly] There are also a lot of Pokémon, and there is also a new generation Pokémon, which is as long as a butter cake. That one is not bad, it is fragrant, soft, smooth and tender. I just don't know if the author has arranged it. It can be read as a Tomato novel, but the character of the protagonist is really hard to judge.

Except for the Liu Bei part, the author's writing style is also very good, and the Liu Bei part is even more exciting. If it is maintained later, I think it should be 8 points

By the way, how do the authors Lusamine and Lillie plan to write it? Also, do you accept Yuto Sundae?

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! Update soon! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's beautiful and the narration is very natural. And although it is the Xiaozhi template, there will be some differences, and it is not a watery plot. At the same time, it also makes up for a lot of Xiaozhi's regrets. But I don't dare to give it 5 stars, because I'm afraid that the score will be too high and it will be blocked directly.

Hello author, I am the parent of this account. Recently, my child has been refusing to eat. Fan didn't speak, didn't show any anger, and didn't have any expression on his face. But I found that he only laughed and looked interesting when he was reading Tomato novels. After getting angry, I opened her mobile phone and found her while she was going to the toilet. I have been reading your novel recently, and I also found it in her cabinet She received a diagnosis of depression and she is depressed every day. I hope she can get better. Come, but I don't know what I can do for her. The only thing I can do is to pray for help. It's not too much to update more than a dozen chapters in one day. I hope you can bring her hope Hope, don't make her depressed every day, please. What do you mean, there are 100 chapters, only 2 of them. One of them has not been eaten yet, and it keeps being ambiguous.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

The writing is good, there are no bad points, but the pace is a bit slow and does not match the introduction. Except for the girl at the beginning, there are more than 100,000 words and I am still trying to conquer the second one. I haven't conquered it yet... I feel something is going on, and I am heading towards a few million words, but I can't complain. But there will be updates for a certain game now. Tomato updates are so slow and the pace is slow. I really don't have the motivation to catch up on updates.

In a multi-female Pokémon novel, the protagonist's character is honestly not particularly decent, but it's okay. The plot is still reasonable so far, I just want to stop being lazy and update it more. Fishing during the day is not enough [covering face]

This book is suitable for newbie Pokémon. It has a system and multiple female protagonists. The main thing is that each time the system talks about things, it can significantly improve itself or the pet. The battle aspect should be more game-oriented. It is not a skill restriction, but a way to use the skills. When he releases skills here, he is not particularly flexible. There is no such thing as a gorgeous contest, where one skill and one skill are used to react, or Talking about the environment, such as spinning silk, sticking to the branches and rotating, but this tells us a kind of numerical comfort. In combat, it basically means dodging, and then attacking in various ways. It is simple and crude, and it is more enjoyable when combined with the system. There is basically no need to describe the environment, such as what kind of environmental changes are caused by the effects of certain skills. I saw Chapter 38

It looks very good so far. I just hope that items between regions can be distributed reasonably between regions, and that the attributes of fairies and evil steel that will be unlocked one by one can be reasonably distributed. After watching 93, I felt it was a bit too much, because it was sewn with anime and it seemed to be mainly anime. Does Ma Zhishi become a pervert but degrade his character? I haven't seen the comic version here, but it's not like this. It doesn't feel like strength is supreme.

I can only say that the author is worthy of being the author of Liu Bei's book. I hope that the author will have any side projects besides the heroines of the original novels and the heroines of the games. Accept all the female supporting characters, the Queen's Sister Champion, the King of Heaven and the gym trainers, as well as another wife, Gardevoir, and so on!

Not bad, nothing poisonous. I have collected 4 of them so far and have eaten them all. I think there is one more that is about to be released soon. Then I also ate another one that I don't know how many times I bought. It's just that I don't count it as a collection. There are too few updates. Generally speaking, it is a high-quality product.

Did he only collect the elves that Ash collected in the original novel? Don't follow the rules step by step. Do you have any new elves that you like? There are too many flaws, they slipped away [face covering]

Come on! Write about the big brother of the emperor's uncle [send heartfelt messages][send heartfelt messages]

The content is perfect, the characters are good, and the emotions are full of emotions. The plot development is progressing very well now. I hope it will be continued.

Reading this novel is like looking for Pokémon learning materials. What you want to read about Pokémon are actually mostly characters. There are very few elf battles, elf cultivation, and daily elf life. It's all about daily life with my wives.

It's a good book. Suitable for watching under the covers

I took the initiative to read the first few chapters, and almost a hundred chapters into the second one. It's suitable for watching three or two female protagonists, but it doesn't look like they can take all of them.

A good Pokémon article, it made me, a seasoned reader, excited.

It's very good, very exciting, and the plot is very powerful [laughing], but it's still too slow to collect, and the author needs to speed up the update. It's too little, and it's not enough to listen to. This book is one of the best among Pokémon fans. It's very top-notch and highly recommended.

A book I like very much, Liu Bei and the plot is quite exciting.

It's nice to watch, not pretentious, and you eat what you need to eat, unlike some people who don't do it and only get drool all over them.

It's okay, there's basically no magic plot (personal opinion)

Chapter 90 Xiaoxia finally confesses her love successfully After finishing Red Lotus Island, I started to procrastinate about the word count of water.

It's good to read. If you like it, cheers for the author! [Blowing kiss]