Liu Mang opened his eyes and saw a “stunning beauty” with “irresistible sex appeal” leaning over his bed. Truly, she was “so beautiful fish would sink and geese would fall,” “so lovely the moon would hide and flowers would blush”...
Tears of genuine happiness streamed down his stone-still face.
P.S. This is my first novel! I won’t get upset over criticism, so please be blunt! I’ll keep improving! I promise it’s worth trusting and investing in!
P.S. 2: I hope I can save up some money to treat my mom’s back. She works night shifts at a factory far away, and I’m not very capable... I can’t make big money, so I just hope to earn a little from writing, something I love.
