World One: “My homophobic classmate keeps saying there’s something weird about the way I look at her.”
Until she came down with a high fever and I took her home.
Half-asleep, she nibbled my collarbone. “This kind of scene in a yuri novel… Next, you’re supposed to take my temperature.” I raised an eyebrow, thermometer in hand. “Oh? So that’s what you are?”
World Two: Lin Wan and Su Xiao had been rivals for ten years, competing from school all the way into their careers.
Until one day, Lin Wan got drunk and was “taken home” by Su Xiao.
When she woke up, she found her nemesis wearing an apron and making hangover soup. She sneered, “Trying to poison me?”
Su Xiao pinched her chin and made her drink it. “That’s right. Arsenic with honey, specially made for that mouth of yours.”
Later, when Lin Wan curled up with a stomachache, it was Su Xiao’s hand that warmed her.
“Don’t get the wrong idea,” her rival said, the tips of her ears bright red. “I just don’t want you dying in my house and bringing bad luck.”
Then why was her hand trembling?
World Three: The night my family cast me out, the rain poured down in torrents.
I knelt outside the ancestral hall and laughed three times, then turned and stumbled under the umbrella of my nemesis, Su Xiao.
She raised an eyebrow. “So even Miss Lin has fallen this low?”
Later, I became her sharpest blade, until one day I overheard her on the phone with a friend:
“When you’re raising a dog, of course you pick an aggressive breed.” Silently, I wiped the blood from my blade and pushed open her bedroom door.
World Four: In the fifth year of the apocalypse, Lin Wan exhausted her powers amid a tide of corpses and collapsed in the ruins. When she opened her eyes, iron chains bound her ankles.
Crouching in front of her was Su Xiao in a white coat: the rival who had taken her recommendation slot in high school and blown up her shelter after the apocalypse.
“Welcome home.” Su Xiao wiped her scalpel with a smile. “Your healing ability… belongs to me now.”
The subject matter of the novel is very attractive, but the details are not in place, making it a bit tiring to read. There is nothing wrong with the suddenness of the first chapter. After all, it is the golden chapter that needs to attract readers. However, the subsequent causes and consequences of the relationship between the two protagonists are very strange. The scene changes are also very abrupt. Taking out a homework and whipping it repeatedly will increase the plot. Why not try to interact with NPCs to increase the plot? If you want to highlight the activities between the protagonists but don't know what to write, you can try external intervention (that is, interacting with supporting characters) to promote the development of the plot. Once again, the subject matter is really beautiful and attractive ❤️
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