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I saw Chapter 116. This is a very good HP fanfic. The protagonist has been growing and improving. Currently, there is no ambiguity or cp direction. The protagonist is obsessed with magic and becoming stronger. The only thing that makes me relieved is that the protagonist is not as disgusting as the introduction. Dumbledore and other professors are relatively good to the protagonist, Snake Pu Lili's attitude toward the protagonist is much better than at the beginning, but the protagonist's daily life, both at the beginning and now, gave me a very lonely and helpless feeling. However, the feeling of not being accepted and excluded when I first entered school basically disappeared in the later years. Overall, this is a very good book! Big cheers for the author! [Send heart][Send heart] (I really recommend the author to change the introduction a lot, because when I first saw this book, I stopped reading it because of the introduction. I read it later after seeing others recommend it. The introduction really gives people the feeling that the protagonist is rejected by everyone, and is not trusted and recognized. It will be more uncomfortable to read...)

The book is quite interesting. The author may not be familiar with the Harry Potter book, because there are many details in it that are inconsistent with the original book.

I'm going to put my armor first, maybe because I've read too many AI books recently, and I'm already at a loss for words. I'm sorry if I made a misjudgment. But when I really read it, I can feel that it feels a bit edited by AI, with many unnecessary turns, such as "..., It's not..., It's... But..." And many times the same chapter has many similar sentence patterns that AI likes to use. In one chapter, "but..." Is even used several times in a row without more than three paragraphs. I have no objection to AI writing or assisted writing. I don't think this is a bad thing. The tools are used to assist, not to mention the books are free to read, but I personally am not very comfortable with this kind of AI. Of course, maybe it's just that the author's choice of words and sentences is purely in this style, which is my misjudgment. And overall, apart from this point, it is actually of a completely good level, so I give it 4 stars. After all, this style is a bit uncomfortable for me personally. Deducting this 1 star is just my personal perception.

Yes, there are occasional twists and turns in the past that are strange. For example, in the past, I said not to let myself stand out too much for fear of attracting danger. Later, I said it didn't matter after I entered school for a long time. But there may have been a few days in the middle, and my thoughts may have changed. It's just that there is no foreshadowing in the middle, which makes people feel strange, but the plot in the end is still very good.

Like. The beginning is a bit like a flashback, and the writing is very good.

The protagonist is controllable! The whole text does not deliberately criticize any character! The reading experience is quite comfortable. I didn't want to click in when I saw the rating, but Shuhuang chose to give it a try. It was surprisingly good! The overall logic is clear, and there is no choice to blindly follow the plot. The protagonist's personal growth line and story line are independent and complete, but they do not break away from the whole. The entire integration cycle is gradual. It is a good book that was delayed by ratings. I look forward to the follow-up plot!

It's okay, but the main character doesn't have too many roles at the moment

The author's writing is very good and could have more personal settings

Overall, it's very good. I finished it in two days. The action scenes and foreshadowing are both good. The IQs of the protagonist and the villain are basically online. The shortcoming is the eunuch. If you just look at the synopsis, it doesn't seem to be a problem. I originally wanted to deduct 1 star, but considering that this book was read to my liking, and that the protagonist of this book and the other HP book I followed are both named Thorne, I reluctantly gave it five stars.

Nice looking, well set up

Very beautiful, sad

I've been looking for a lot of fanfics, and they're all exhausted. This one is really good.

It combines the setting of Hogwarts Legacy very well, and the protagonist's character is also good.

I really like the character of the protagonist, he is aloof! ! ! The golden finger is opening up just right and is currently relatively slow to gain steam. I'm looking forward to the follow-up performance! ! ! The setting of traveling through time and space is also very interesting! It's a bit like it was polished with AI (if not, I'm very sorry). There are a lot of repeated adjectives. You can pay attention to it later. I'm looking forward to the interaction with Deng Xiao in the future @Brown Sugar c

It looks good, cheers for the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Nice. Worth a visit

It's okay. I agree. It's just a little lacking.

The AI ​​article should be given an outline and let AI generate it independently, and then be polished a little manually. It's a good idea, it would be better if it was written by a real person I'm very sorry if I misjudged

I just read Chapter 13 and it feels very good. I will try it later when I go back.

The content is pretty good so far, very interesting.

I read 188 chapters in one go. I haven't seen a novel that I can read like this for a long time. It's really well written.

The writing style is relatively mature, and the content can be said to be a completely new chapter in the Harry Potter world. It's very interesting.

It's nice to look at, but sometimes you can lose your mind. The setting is also very interesting, I like the lone wolf protagonist