Naruto: Turning Naruto into Naruko from the Start

Do a task to get a score. If you score it by yourself, it will definitely be a five point score. However, I really put my heart into this book. Although the writing is not that good, and it is still a bit verbose, I will try to be more concise when I revise it later. The protagonist of this book is a flower-growing family who is deeply influenced by Chinese culture. When watching Naruto, the biggest feeling is the intrigue, bloody cruelty. If possible, bring them a glimmer of life and make up for some regrets. At least, let those kind people live happily and calmly. In the follow-up, if you think my writing is bad, you can point it out. I would like to thank you all for your support and help. For me, the greatest wealth in writing a book is meeting everyone.

Not for anything else, just for Naruko 😏

Good-looking, good-looking [Admiration] What kind of magic is this! I like the portrayal of this protagonist

It looks good, but the main reason is that the main character has not been strengthened 🤦 If possible, it could be improved, such as adding more change options 🤦 😏 Bring up the bad taste It's a very good book. I definitely recommend this book to bookworms who like to read. [Sending my heart to you]

Clear ideas, detailed writing, and detailed descriptions

Very very beautiful, highly recommended

666, I said this in the middle of the night, thinking that my life was over, but when I looked carefully, I found that it was quite beautiful.

The description and details are well done, and the main character is also well designed. Great work for the author. I always think that the best thing about the author's writing is that he will not say that a person is good or bad, he will say that person has advantages and disadvantages, and he writes about human nature. Although maybe for most people, his novels are not that exciting and sometimes are verbose, but I am still willing to give him high marks because he deserves it.

The author writes more about the plot and less about digressions. The amount of information about the plot in each paragraph is very low. The character dialogue should be streamlined to reduce some meaningless descriptions.

It's just that Tomato doesn't promote it. If the author writes more, it should be fine.