Conquest of the Villain? I Turn Around and Become His Mother

Hello author The subject matter and creativity of your work are very novel. It is no longer the same scenario where the male protagonist conquers the early villain female protagonist, but the female protagonist becomes the mother of the male villain to protect the male villain and increase the capture value. It is really good. However, there are too many bugs in the text, including but not limited to: wrong names, sentences I don't know whose mouth it is, remarks that are inconsistent with the characters, and the mood of the villain family in the book is a bit too unstable; Although the subject matter and creativity are very good, in terms of plot, there is no big difference from ordinary slap-in-the-face stories. From what I have seen so far, I feel that the author is creative but there are some problems with his writing style. Whether it is AI or handwritten, please be sure to read it before posting. Thank you to the author and everyone who sees this

I have read a lot of articles, and this article gave me the feeling that the themes and plots are good, but the writing style is too immature, and the characters in it are a little too brainless and immature. Some of the characters in it are obviously in high positions but have no corresponding brains and plans and will only be incompetent and furious when things happen. For the heroine of the original text, I hope she can be an independent individual, not the woman of so-and-so, the heroine of so-and-so. I hope she is herself, not someone's accessory. As for the name, I suggest the author choose it casually, not like it is now, read It's awkward. I'm listening to the book, and it's even more awkward. I'm not the only one who feels this way. I don't know if it's the first time for the author to write a book. It's a pity to use this theme to connect the lines. I really think that the divine novel + system + family redemption + true and false young master is quite novel, maybe for me It's relatively new 😄. The redemption novel is finally not about love, and it's not about slowly making money on your own. It's too laborious, and the ink is stained, so overall I give it four stars. I hope the author will work hard to make his writing better and better. I look forward to your next book. I've been reading for almost 20 hours, do you know how I got here 🤦

It's okay, but I think the storyline about the family review can be deleted. It's completely unnecessary. A person who has experienced those things in his previous life has absolutely no chance of having that kind of hope after being reborn. Except for this paragraph, everything is good so far and the plot is interesting.

Not bad, not bad. It's good if the heroine is rich. She has raised a protagonist for the villain's child. Who wouldn't want to recognize the heroine as a mother [laughter]

It's so beautiful, and she doesn't feel aggrieved. When the Gu family didn't celebrate the male protagonist's birthday, the female protagonist directly covered that layer for the male protagonist, and also gave over 50% of the Gu family's shares to the male protagonist. It's so cool, ouch!

It seems okay so far. I hope that family affection will not turn into love. If it turns into love, I will retreat. He likes to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger so much. There are a lot of places where the male protagonist moans for no reason when he is reincarnated.

It feels like reading a contemporary novel written in the 1980s. Sometimes I get carried away by the plot and forget that this is a novel written in the 1980s 😳. So don't take it seriously when watching it. So far, overall it's pretty good!

The author is really good at writing, both the characters and the storyline are very delicate and real [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

☀️The heroine; Jiang Yue [Shenhao, eighty. 🌹Let's talk about the advantages first: the subject matter is really amazing! Who can refuse to be a great hero in the 1980s and train Jiang Yunqing, the sinister villain, into an obedient little tail? The plot of the heroine directly acquiring a company and acquiring the group's beloved cub is beyond fascinating, and the redemption line is finally not about love. I really love this! 🌹The shortcomings are also obvious. The plot behind it is a bit templated, and the slap-in-the-face scenes can be guessed at a glance. Moreover, the characters are written a little brainlessly. The design of the Gu family has nothing to do with the status of the wealthy family, which makes it a bit awkward to watch. There are also some small bugs that occasionally cause problems when reading. 🌹Overall, this is a fun article that can be followed. I just hope that the author can polish his writing and not waste such good ideas!

From the beginning of the short video push, the subject matter of the author is really eye-catching. I have been slowly reading the book since last year, and I have been watching the finale. The point of view this novel gave me is indeed not bad, but as one of the book friends above said, the writing style is indeed a bit immature, and many adjectives are mentioned repeatedly, and there is Jiang Yue. Many times, I feel that the love for Qingyun is either too strong or too dull. Even sometimes, I feel that the conversation is not between mother and child. However, Dada's ideas are really admirable. The general system is in the form of CP. This kind of parent-child relationship is really eye-catching. I look forward to Dada's next book. Come on!