A Wealthy Family in the 1980S Exchanged Sons, but the Richest Man's Adoptive Mother Protected Him to the End

Hello author The subject matter and creativity of your work are very novel. It is no longer the same scenario where the male protagonist conquers the early villain female protagonist, but the female protagonist becomes the mother of the male villain to protect the male villain and increase the capture value. It is really good. However, there are too many bugs in the text, including but not limited to: wrong names, sentences I don't know whose mouth it is, remarks that are inconsistent with the characters, and the mood of the villain family in the book is a bit too unstable; Although the subject matter and creativity are very good, in terms of plot, there is no big difference from ordinary slap-in-the-face stories. From what I have seen so far, I feel that the author is creative but there are some problems with his writing style. Whether it is AI or handwritten, please be sure to read it before posting. Thank you to the author and everyone who sees this

I have read a lot of articles, and this article gave me the feeling that the themes and plots are good, but the writing style is too immature, and the characters in it are a little too brainless and immature. Some of the characters in it are obviously in high positions but have no corresponding brains and plans and will only be incompetent and furious when things happen. For the heroine of the original text, I hope she can be an independent individual, not the woman of so-and-so, the heroine of so-and-so. I hope she is herself, not someone's accessory. As for the name, I suggest the author choose it casually, not like it is now, read It's awkward. I'm listening to the book, and it's even more awkward. I'm not the only one who feels this way. I don't know if it's the first time for the author to write a book. It's a pity to use this theme to connect the lines. I really think that the divine novel + system + family redemption + true and false young master is quite novel, maybe for me It's relatively new [laughs]. The redemption novel is finally not about love, and it's not about slowly making money on your own. It's too laborious, and the ink is stained, so overall I give it four stars. I hope the author will work hard to make his writing better and better. I look forward to your next book. I've been reading for almost 20 hours, do you know how I got here [face covering]

It's okay, but I think the storyline about the family review can be deleted. It's completely unnecessary. A person who has experienced those things in his previous life has absolutely no chance of having that kind of hope after being reborn. Except for this paragraph, everything is good so far and the plot is interesting.

Not bad, not bad. It's good if the heroine is rich. She has raised a protagonist for the villain's child. Who wouldn't want to recognize the heroine as a mother [laughter]

It's so beautiful, and she doesn't feel aggrieved. When the Gu family didn't celebrate the male protagonist's birthday, the female protagonist directly covered that layer for the male protagonist, and also gave over 50% of the Gu family's shares to the male protagonist. It's so cool, ouch!

It seems okay so far. I hope that family affection will not turn into love. If it turns into love, I will retreat. He likes to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger so much. There are a lot of places where the male protagonist moans for no reason when he is reincarnated.

It feels like reading a contemporary novel written in the 1980s. Sometimes I get carried away by the plot and forget that this is a novel written in the 1980s [shy]. So don't take it seriously when watching it. So far, overall it's pretty good!

The author is really good at writing, both the characters and the storyline are very delicate and real [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

☀️The heroine; Jiang Yue [Shenhao, eighty. 🌹Let's talk about the advantages first: the subject matter is really amazing! Who can refuse to be a great hero in the 1980s and train Jiang Yunqing, the sinister villain, into an obedient little tail? The plot of the heroine directly acquiring a company and acquiring the group's beloved cub is beyond fascinating, and the redemption line is finally not about love. I really love this! 🌹The shortcomings are also obvious. The plot behind it is a bit templated, and the slap-in-the-face scenes can be guessed at a glance. Moreover, the characters are written a little brainlessly. The design of the Gu family has nothing to do with the status of the wealthy family, which makes it a bit awkward to watch. There are also some small bugs that occasionally cause problems when reading. 🌹Overall, this is a fun article that can be followed. I just hope that the author can polish his writing and not waste such good ideas!

Hello author, your book is very good. The subject matter is very new. The only flaw is that the errors were not corrected in time. I saw some readers pointed out the errors in the author's article, and the author also responded, but did not correct them, which affected the perception a little.

From the beginning of the short video push, the subject matter of the author is really eye-catching. I have been slowly reading the book since last year, and I have been watching the finale. The point of view this novel gave me is indeed not bad, but as one of the book friends above said, the writing style is indeed a bit immature, and many adjectives are mentioned repeatedly, and there is Jiang Yue. Many times, I feel that the love for Qingyun is either too strong or too dull. Even sometimes, I feel that the conversation is not between mother and child. However, Dada's ideas are really admirable. The general system is in the form of CP. This kind of parent-child relationship is really eye-catching. I look forward to Dada's next book. Come on!

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It's quite good-looking. It would be even better if the heroine Jiang Yue could be given a role!

Just wait and see It feels like AI in the back, which is very strange. Just looking at it without looking at the details is okay. Three stars is pretty good.

The heroine and the villain must not have cps, and they must not have love.

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I feel that the subject matter is quite new, but the author may be writing a book for the first time and the writing style is not very mature, and some aspects are not so thoughtful. I suggest you watch a few more period films before writing about the period. In terms of prices, and some common sense of that era, the author is not clear about it, but overall it is good.

I think this book is quite good. There are no twists and turns. The story is pleasant. It just needs more details. I don't read novels. I came here directly after reading the tweet [crying] [crying] [crying] Please update soon.

It's really good to read, but unfortunately it's a new book and it's not finished yet. And I don't know if Jiang Yue has CP? But I hope not. In the future, I will have a few male pets to keep, and I will have money and leisure. It wouldn't be great! As for the protagonist, I think it can be done with or without cp. Most people still like to see the cute and cute look next to Jiang Yue, the warm scenes of the two of them being parents. It's not finished yet. The last star will be added when it's finished.

Dear author, can you correct some of the mistakes in the book? It affects the perception a bit.

I don't know what to say [laughing and crying] but there are too many boring things, just visiting the house is a lot of things, and it still feels a bit aggrieved to say that it is a refreshing article.

Brother author, can you tell me when I will stop being so frustrated and just kill that Gu Chen? Which episode should I skip to? Has it come out yet? I've already seen episode 61 and I still feel frustrated. Can you go faster, faster, faster?

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is a bit lame (it looks like it was modified by AI), and the people in the article speak like humans and machines.

It's finished. The whole story is very good. The male protagonist has no emotional line, only a family line. The female protagonist also has no emotional line, only a family line. The female protagonist has been raising the male protagonist very well. The male protagonist is very good, not crooked, not darkened, or Yandere is the relationship between mother and son. The female protagonist starts a business and the male protagonist inherits and starts the business. The male protagonist is also a good companion to start the business. The male protagonist has no emotional line. There is no vulgar plot in the whole story. Only the male protagonist's biological parents are terrible. There is no female protagonist to steal the male protagonist's drama.

In fact, the content is very good, but the language lacks vividness and there are no big ups and downs or touching moments.

The creativity is novel and very good. I like to read it.

Not bad, the plot progresses well

These 4 stars are for your writing style before the male protagonist awakens. This star is for the late-stage AI, the plot is messy, and the description of the male protagonist is messy. That's it, I can't stand it anymore when I see it in the middle and later stages

The author's writing is very detailed and beautiful. I highly recommend it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It looks good. I want to ask, will the male protagonist have cp? Can he not have cp?