The Night Before the Collapse of Teyvat: Before the Dawn

Looks familiar, really looks familiar! I promise, I have a successor [face covering] [laughing evilly]

Good looking. It raises the possibility of a brand new Teyvat, and the plot is very tense. Every time I see a familiar and unfamiliar character being knifed, my heart always trembles. I suggest the author take a look at Honkai Impact: Can you tell me that the difficulty level is Honkai Impact Level 3? ! , The style is slightly similar, but it is also an excellent work

It's really beautiful, it's the first level among Genshin Impact fanfics! If you continue to write at this level, if there is no eunuch, it will definitely be the highest level of Genshin Impact fan fiction on all platforms.

After reading this article, I feel like watching the new rocks breaking through the ground in Liyue, which is new and refreshing. The writing is calm and solid, the idea is unconventional, and it takes a new approach among ordinary stories, seeing what no one has seen before, and thinking what ordinary people have never thought of. The words are elegant and the charm is simple. It has the warmth of earthly fireworks and the vastness of mountains and seas. The cleverness of the conception is like a piece of uncut jade, with new ideas coming out one after another; the stability of the narrative is like a rock to stabilize the flow, and the organization is well organized. Looking at Teyvat's thousands of pens and inks, this work is also a rare masterpiece, which shows the author's ingenuity and talent. As time goes by and everything changes, it is really a pleasure to have such a novel and unique article. It can be read, tasted, and kept in the heart for a long time.

The writing of this book is good, and the plot is very similar to "You Tell Me This Difficulty Is Honkai Impact 3" (it should be called that). The content is also related to the savior. The protagonist is the savior and saves the world. Anyway, I personally feel pretty good about it.

Although the character has been changed, I feel that it is more reasonable in this environment and background. The relationship between the characters is also very clear. The independent evolution also prevents the collapse of the combat power. However, the follow-up is not clear. So far, the writing is very good.

--Right! That's the look! ——Li Ming, what I have always wanted to see is your expression now! ——The face that was extremely angry but forced to endure it! ——It really makes me... ——It's so exciting!

The writing of this book is quite good, and it can be considered average in terms of the description of the emotions of the plot characters and the battle plot. But after talking about the advantages, I have to talk about the disadvantages. Although this book has the word "Genshin Impact", when reading it, it is better to treat it as another independent world. It also overlaps with the personalities of some game characters. Other aspects can be said to have been drastically changed based on the author's imagination. However, this book is still an indispensable masterpiece, and I hope the author will never discontinue it or leave it unfinished! Please, please don't! ! In tomatoes, it is difficult to make money from shit! ! !

It's very good, it's a fanfic that writes its own thing. This type of novel will look good as long as it's not just a joke, but sometimes the more heated scenes may be a little awkward (perhaps because of the style of the novel), but it doesn't hurt.

It feels like a youth version, but, Haixing, I hope the author writes better and better

It's good-looking, and overall it's a salvation type. The protagonist's Tarot card ability and the power of various demons are very distinctive, especially the top-level battle of wits between Liyue and Morax [laughs]. Except for the major demons (all the demons are evil), there is no OOC. Although there is a harem, I haven't seen it yet. The author's writing is very good, and the protagonist is the type who is reliable at critical moments and very happy at non-critical moments (the bread given to Ying is mixed with wine and cephalosporins [laughs]). In summary, it is good-looking, I love watching it. This book deserves a score of 9.0 Or above, so good luck to the author [laughs]

A potential new book. If it can introduce reflection and reflection on reality like Lao Xu does, this book will rise to another level.

The book is a good book, well written, both in terms of content and creativity, but I really can't stand the tomato style during this period, either weird and struggling, or crashing to survive! Really, the book is a good book, but I can't stand it! I just want to read something light-hearted, not necessarily exciting! I'm in a better mood. This is too depressing. I didn't say the writing was bad. I'll read it again in a few days. It's best to say, it's not that the article is bad, I just don't like this depressing style! Give me a few days to rest!

Almost something is almost something. Just to be clear, I have a bit of a problem. Obviously, you wanted to write about a sense of passion, disdain, and madness. You used... To express it, but I don't think it's enough. Normally, this kind of picture is expressed by animation, which is three-dimensional and real. The dubbing sound can give people a real sense of passion. But there is a sense of distortion in expressing it through words. I know he writes with passion, but I can't read the feeling of passion. It's like looking at a naked old lady who won't react. It satisfies the storyline of passion and greatness, but I can't read the feeling. So, what are the shortcomings of these chapters? Maybe you can find novels with similar plots and study the writing techniques to bring out this feeling. Also, I have read the novel "Honkai..." And it is better written. Of course, I have forgotten whether it has a sense of passion or not, but the sentence "..." Written in it expresses the feeling very well, but yours is not good enough. When I read it, it felt like a blind repetition (it may also be that I am not in a good state recently and cannot concentrate on it). Perhaps, you can try writing slower. Although writing nearly 10,000 words a day is very diligent, it is a bit rough and not good for your health. By the way, there is also the plot. The Barbatos scene is very similar to the concert scene in "Honkai...", But the part he wrote also gave me a feeling at the time, but you didn't. At the same time, there are a lot of similarities. In the next chapter, I hope you can polish the writing and plot, and highlight some philosophical ideas, such as the museum part in "Honkai..." And more ordinary people. Also, the sense of the cage in Barbatos is not strong enough. The most striking impression of the cage on me is that of a large physical cage, rather than concepts such as restraint and restraint. In the next chapter, I can try to express the abstract concept of authority. Let me praise you again. Your ability to control the story frame is better than mine. You are very diligent. These are your advantages. I hope you can stick to it.

A modern Teyvat adventure, a completely different Genshin Impact fanfic. The protagonist actually does not live a good life, often dies, and sometimes suffers a lot of pain. However, many beautiful human qualities are reflected in the story. These excellent qualities allow me to see people's resilience in difficult circumstances, which deeply shocked me.

The story of Teyvat, who has no elemental power and only develops technology, was struck by a disaster and started to fight. It's interesting. Except for the tarot cards, I'm not familiar with them, but the others are all old acquaintances. It's very exciting. The story of the Demon God Euler is so interesting.

To be precise, the overall world view is the same, but the content is different. It does not follow the original main plot, but the plot is still relatively new and interesting. It is a bit similar to the Anti-Stress King, but it is slightly better than the Anti-Stress King next door. Due to the existence of Tarot cards, Tarot here is a setting that can make you extraordinary. As for the overall writing style, well, it still needs to be polished, but the overall content is pretty good. I can give it a 4 points. You can come and taste it. It is a kind of interesting second-generation fan fiction.

This is the first time I have seen this type of Genshin Impact fanfic. The world view is very well created and does not give people a rigid feeling. It can also be ranked at the top of the Genshin Impact fanfic track. I hope the author can stick to it and come on! !

It's really good to watch, but the protagonist is too miserable, and the demons he encounters are all evil. If it weren't for faith and friendship, it would be unplayable. Overall, it's quite good to watch.

24 Types of tarot cards, 24 abilities, good subject matter, the world of science and technology. Although changing the name will have nothing to do with Genshin Impact, maybe the author is best at writing Genshin Impact fanfics. Every book is related to Genshin Impact. I hope the author can improve his writing skills in this book. Don't write about Genshin Impact fanfics in the next book. The traffic given is too little, and it is easy to be blocked. I have read several Genshin Impact fanfics that are above 9:5 and have been banned.

It's really beautiful, and it's one of the few fine grains left now. It's worth a look, but I feel like there are very few people there.

So pretty. This level. It ranks among the top two among the many Genshin Impact fanfics I have seen. Come on, the author must not stop updating. Please. To persevere like the protagonist in the book [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Update quickly, this is enough for anyone, but don't underestimate the reading ability of our readers, 😡 I personally like this book better. Well, those who read book reviews can go ahead and read it. Personally, I don't feel any blocking. If you feel it, it's because you and I have different ideas. Hope the author recovers soon.

The writing is great, but I imagined (watching the movie) the reaction of the characters of Genshin Impact in the main world when they see this world. It must be very interesting~ (Die Jia did not mean to ridicule the tragedy and sacrifice of the world as fun. After all, Haa would also find the fun born from tragedy not funny)

I was amused. I just remembered. This book. It seems that before the score was given to me, the director remembered [smile] [smile] that the writing was quite good, so keep up the good work. I was reading this book as Fantasy III at the time. Now I finally have a soul. I don't know if there will ever be a broken me.

Career is rarely used to describe a fanfic. If God's blackening would not exclude some people, this book would be even more popular. If AI were not used, this would be the fanfic with the largest amount of work I have ever seen on Tomato [Blow a kiss]

It can be called an excellent work and needs popularity

Five stars! The bond between the protagonist and his companions is unstoppable!

It looks good, the protagonist can become sworn sworn friends with the old Xu who was a civilized person before the collapse [laughter]

It's very beautiful, the writing is strong, and the characters are not OOC. I'm curious why no one watched it. The subject matter is obviously not bloody and bizarre. Come on, author, please recommend more books.