Bilan: Refuse the Shura Field and Start with the Royal Family

Finally, I have a book that looks like a man. Nowadays, I don't know why I always like to take the innocent route when writing about shipgirls. It feels like I can't write without turning into a little bit of meat. I don't even dare to hold hands or anything like that, I have to be polite when talking. It feels like there is no way to write about a shipgirl without turning into a bitch, so a man is forced to become a fake girl. Don't tell me. Respect or something? Respect allows you to protect her and trust her, not to be her sister. This book is very good. It has its own style and charm, or it can be said that it expresses the charm that a man should have.

This book is pretty good and has no poisonous points. It doesn't have too many cuckold settings. The plot is also smooth. It has a guaranteed score of eight or more and has a chance to compete for nine points. However, the number of words is too small and there is no tomato push. I remember it seems that the push started at 100,000 words. It is recommended that the author update the new book more to get tomato push. If the time is too long, he will not get the push, and the promotion will be very slow in the later stage.

It's a good-looking, one-fingered, non-traveling game that travels through my own port area. The protagonist doesn't feel like a loser, and the description is good, so I won't feel uncomfortable.

To be honest, Lao Zhi is simply a superman. The last one who clearly remembered everything from preferences to habits to emotions, cared for and protected every girlfriend meticulously, and even let the girls take the initiative to accept the harem was the invincible Rentaro's "100 Girlfriends Who Like You Super, Super, Super, Super, Super, Super, Super, Super, Super, Super, Super Like You". It even doubled here several times. Author, well done! This is the everyday old couple in Minato that I want to see! Ps: How about you also make a huge confession [laughing evilly]

It's too righteous, it's too pure, this is Azur Lane. [Full] [full] [full]

I have only read 5 chapters so far. Anyway, on Tomato I found Ship B's article with over a million words. There are only 3 good ones. One is the one that relies on summons to push the main plot, which is very interesting. The other one is more based on the original plot. As for this one, from the introduction, it should be more daily. But for his daily life, the five pictures I took are basically all retouched and have a very strong AI flavor. The real plot is compared with the progress of the two I mentioned. The 10,000 words here are not as good as the 2,000 words of other people's progress. They are all daily comparisons. I can only say, let's take a look. If a small plot drags on forty or fifty chapters like Gu Changge's Destiny Villain in the middle and later stages, then he can only run away. After watching it for a while, there was no improvement. Water is water. This daily shield is not that easy to use. Let alone the delicate description of emotions. It is nothing more than water with sugar or salt. So many people have done this over and over again, and it will take forever to write.

Among the more than 100 blue fan novels I have read, this one can be considered top-notch. The author still pays great attention to the readers' feelings. At the same time, the descriptions are very detailed. I think the control of the plot may be superb. They also try their best to restore the personality characteristics of each character. Overall, it is still worth reading and there are no poisonous points. Finally, cheers to the author! A few more chapters [blowing kiss]

This blue book is one of the few that I have left after reading many blue books. Anyway, the blue books I read before were either about summoning or darkness. This one is very good. At least the character of the male protagonist is okay. And the ship girl is not a particularly extreme character. It is very beautiful!

It only means good reviews, but even more so if the protagonist eats something! Compared to other authors, the book has been completed without even a wedding ship, and it is in the same port area as other male fingers. It is much better [like][like][like] 5-star follow-up review. The author who just read the book Qidian said that it was not a multi-pointed novel, but turned around and wrote other plots in the article. Moreover, the issue of clothes was only mentioned in Chapter 44, and after the completion, he never wrote in detail about the plot of the ship girl wearing more clothes when there are outsiders. The same is true in the process of looking for the protagonist [cover face], it's so green [cover face].

A very good new blue book, highly recommended

As long as it is a single finger on Bilanwen, it will always be supported by 5 stars.

Hey hey hey hey hey, as a Rubik's Cube master, are there no harmful substances in food? You can safely and boldly appreciate the various delicacies. When comparing the porridge, other aspects such as shape, size, etc. Are perfect. There should be only two differences. First, if you like safety, look at the blue one. Second, if you like the flavor, look at the porridge. Blue is a Rubik's Cube and should have no taste or hazards. Porridge is a real person, so it has taste and hazards. Both have their own flavors and emphases. It depends on which one you like. It's perfect [Like]

Come on, author, I have read dozens of Tomato's blue books so far, and none of them respect the game settings as much as you do (not referring to the cuckold and the ship of the same name). The writing is good, and you will get good results even if you let the hedgehog cat out. @ The avatar is Musashi Mama, cute [admiration]

The multi-finger flow is only suitable for ships R and C, because there are such things as prototype ships and sibling ships, and sibling ships will grow into existences that are different from the prototypes based on their own commanders. Blue is still better with one finger.

So far it looks pretty good [like]

Among the many blue fanfics I have seen, this one still feels very good to me. It does not have so many poisonous points. The shaping of the characters and the characters is quite good. It can be seen that the author has spent a lot of effort on it. I feel that it is worth the 5 stars! In addition, I would like to thank the author for allowing me to read such a good fanfic. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you [blowing kiss] ps: The author had to update me at 11 o'clock in the middle of the night. He really made me cry to death [shy] More mom ships! [Almost crying]

It's pretty good, he has a capable and responsible boss, and he's never ambiguous when it's time to eat. There is no particularly clear main line, and it is more inclined to the bits and pieces of daily life. Author! Can you write more stories about boats? Most of the ones appearing now are royal boats. Lolita and girl-shaped ones are basically "dead" [crying] We don't need you to eat the small boats, but can you show the faces of those energetic children? Most of the people appearing now are big boats. The whole story really lacks a bit of "vitality". And I don't believe that when I see Lao Zhi coming back, there will be no movement on those boats [face covering]

I read the latest chapter in one go, but I have a suggestion for the author, which is that Musashi's catchphrase should be different from that of the emperor. Although they are both Minato's mom ships, her lines feel more like a big-picture plan and she stands firmly behind the blame officer to strongly support this ()

It is a very good book. Even if you are not familiar with Azur Lane and just read it as a harem novel, it is very good and highly recommended.

A very good daily sweet story, hmm... There are a lot of things I want to say but can't say them. The military commander is not good at words. Anyway, this is a beautiful story about love and being loved, daily life and Shura field (hee hee) (Personal feeling, for reference only, I am right for you if you criticize me without thinking, mainly because I don't have time to line up with you) Although I have never been exposed to Azur Lane before, I am very happy to encounter such a beautiful world in the author's writing, in every sense... (PS: Lao Zhi is a true Superman... In every sense)

I have read so many Azur fanfics that it can get 4 stars, but this is Tomato, and there is no doubt that it can get 5 stars in Tomato's fanfics😋 (Single finger, the world view conforms to the setting of Granblue Origin, no OOC has been found yet, and the most important battle is fun😋)

It's so exciting😋🥰🤗 Really delicious The author is so powerful, you must continue to work hard.

Okay, it's too late to give you five stars, otherwise you would get five stars twice and the large size would be lost.

The look and feel is average, but the best thing is that there is no thunder. Now I always look at the harem text and suddenly give you a green hundred, or the route text stuffs you with multiple commanders. This book does not have the following problems, so go to the author.

It's very well written, keep it up.

It's not bad, it's just that I smile bitterly every now and then, which makes me feel really uncomfortable.

The book is a good book, but there are too few people. Haji, do you have any clue? Can you write more about 2233? Not enough [smile]

It's very nice. You can also see the picture I posted in the comment section. The picture I found from Doubao is very confusing, or if you find it wrong, don't blame me. ( ´••` ) Each ship girl has a picture (provided I have to see it), and it's all in the commentary of the ship girl's first appearance.

666, I almost thought it was just a knife without sweetness.

This is what I like to watch!