Wait, I Came to Ancient Times to Make Entertainment?

There's really a lot of nonsense

When I saw Chapter 9, I didn't want to read on. From the rest of the chapters, I could roughly guess the plot by looking at the chapter names. Four stars, just average. It's like reading a food article, cooking a new dish, the first thing you taste is amazing, and writing down your thoughts after eating it. Write down the feeling of eating the next one, and the next one... The plot will be exactly the same. Furthermore, I always feel that this is written by a female author, who is said to have delicate writing style. Anyway, I can't appreciate this kind of thing. I always describe the changes in the facial features like a statistical chart, and the expression is a bit xx and a bit xx. There are also various inadvertent body movements. There are some bright spots, at least I haven't found any obvious poison points. All in all, it's generally bland as a romance novel, and the plot is too idealistic in my personal opinion. It's no different from the worldview perspective in women's novels.

I've only read Chapter 2. I don't know if the author doesn't understand the defense between men and women in ancient times, or if it's to pave the way for Xiaoman's future identity. In short, the maid Xiaoman can grab the prince's sleeve and beg him to sing a song if he doesn't want to sing. The Crown Prince who combines ancient and modern memories After Xiaoman was moved to tears by listening to the music, she would wipe her tears with her sleeves in distress, and then Xiaoman would pull the prince's sleeves and ask the prince to teach him the music. In the end, the writing style is quite similar to AI

Still pretty good-looking! However, I would like to make a small comment. Sometimes there is too much content in a large paragraph. The author should consider dividing the long content into two or three paragraphs, otherwise it will look a bit confusing hahaha.

This book is so elegant that we, the common people, cannot appreciate it 🤦

Let me rate it first, it's really well written. The author has his own ideas.

It looks so good. It sounds great! Come on, author.

For the appetite! If the writing is good, you will feel less regretful when the book is used, it can only be awesome!

Si Ma Shu, 3 accounts are written in a happy way

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