Mortal Girl Cultivating Immortality: I Raise My Proficiency

It's okay, most of the female characters are quite satisfactory. There is a paragraph about two men, which is mixed with some corruption. The author said it is just gossip and will not appear in the rest of the article. It depends on whether the author is willing to change it. After all, it is just one or two sentences. Deleting it will not affect it. The author has his own ideas. If you think it's harmless, you can continue watching. If you don't want to watch something with a bit of rotten gossip, you don't have to watch it.

The main characters are basically female, and they are well portrayed. There are two men serving in the US military. [Like] But the male is a boy, and the female sect master is called master by his male disciples. In order to show that the gender of the cultivator is not important, the gossip is mixed with corruption... [Smile] It's like a pot of good rice with a few mouse droppings in it.

The look and feel is very good, a very orthodox cub upgrade flow. There is no slap-in-the-face plot full of negative emotions, and the writing style is positive and uplifting, which is really rare. Although the protagonist of this type of novel is generally talented, he often consumes his talent due to certain things, or is constantly being chased by powerful enemies, or the world is particularly chaotic, and everyone is a hypocrite and a villain who kills and seizes treasures, or the world has a particularly malicious intention towards the protagonist... There is an air of hostility in the writing style. I really like this sense of steady improvement. After reading it, I feel motivated to work hard.

It's particularly beautiful. It's really all-female supporting each other. There are more female roles. The heroine gradually becomes stronger. Anyway, it looks like a down-to-earth feeling. Practice makes perfect. And the tricks are not too big. It's beautiful and beautiful.

It's well written, but it's a pity that there are too few of them. It's a tie. The author's writing is very good and very delicate. Especially at the beginning, everyone is very young. Sometimes they are as responsible as young adults and sometimes they are innocent as children. It is handled very well. The interactions between these little sisters easily remind me of playing with my little sisters when I was a kid [face covering], it's so sweet, hahahaha. The proportion of female characters is comfortable, there are excellent female monks in various fields, and the plot is also very attractive. I really finished it without realizing it. I look forward to the author's follow-up updates.

Now I have read the more complete part. It is a very beautiful article about cultivating immortals. There is no cruelty to women, there is no inexplicable lucky girl, there is no vengeance in the past and present life, there is no broken family, no father, no love for the mother, no love for the sect, who favors so and so. The elders of the sect are also very good. From the deacon teacher she met at the beginning, to the senior brother who gave her advice in the library, to the powerful senior sister, the old naughty old man who bickered, the people she met when doing tasks may have had some minor conflicts at first, but later they were talked about and resolved. The friends also help each other and come from the village to share experiences and work hard to grow together. They also have cute spiritual pets to spice up their lives. The boss who sells things is also very nice. When writing about children, I write very carefully. The childlike speech that belongs to a child of this age, and the crooked eyebrows of a child who drinks sweetly are really vivid and real. Senior Sister Yu and Senior Sister Pei made my aunt laugh and suddenly got it. It won't be boring to practice. It's really gratifying to watch her grow slowly. I look forward to the follow-up (⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝)

Finished Chapter 87 Daily coming-of-age novels have a positive overall atmosphere and mostly describe daily life. I personally like the process of the heroine growing up step by step and slowly reaping rewards. It can be clearly seen that the heroine's mentality changes as she grows up. There are many female characters, and the companions help and support each other. I especially like the author's description of the friendship between the two girls. I will always firmly choose you. This is the greatest friendship in the world. Hope there will be exciting adventure and fighting process.

It is a particularly interesting novel that depicts women in a normal way. There is no enemy honey... There is no malicious female rivalry. The strong-willed one is Nan (the male baby), which is very realistic. Girls help each other, and everyone has their own shining points and "talents". Come on, author! I will keep following for updates!

Very good! There are so many female characters! ! I love love love the female group portraits! The bad characters are also released very quickly (as of now, I don't know if they will appear in the future). I look forward to the subsequent story of entering Futian Cave! ! [Love]

It's okay, I've read more than 30 chapters so far. Looking at the title, I thought the heroine was very, very hard-working. But the main text is more like a warm cub-raising story, which is a bit different from what I imagined. I don't really like reading this. For fairy tales to gain proficiency, I like to read heroines who learn to the point of death and are more cruel to themselves than to others.

The non-time-travel heroine has no CP, but there are many female supporting characters. Although he said he can learn swordsmanship, he still specializes in refining alchemy. Let me briefly introduce the sword alchemy talisman. In fact, it should be alchemy > sword ≈ talisman. Zongmen is very good, the overall plot is on the light side, not a serious style of writing. There are not many words and the protagonist is young and non-travelling, so sometimes it seems childish.

Let's put it this way, this is the only book where the protagonist takes the initiative to share the fruits, but we won't feel bad because the protagonist and the good sisters are both good people. The protagonist has been in seclusion alone in the secret realm for half a year. The good sisters have been waiting for the protagonist in the secret realm since they were separated from the protagonist for half a year. They left a herb for the protagonist and waited for the protagonist until the protagonist came out. Wow! The sisterly love is touching. Very good! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰Both of them are good babies, good babies. The protagonist is a pure mortal, not a time traveler. It would be great if I could also have a panel of the protagonist. I really like having this kind of positive feedback!

Judging from the results so far, the world view is complete, and the system of cultivating immortals has its own characteristics and is very rigorous. The overall atmosphere is by far warm and lively. It's been a long time since I've read a sane fairy tale. (But Hong Kong, why are so many people talking about the plot between men and women?) It's so good, I hope it doesn't collapse in the later stages. . . (After reading for so long, I finally found a normal article on cultivating immortality) All in all, five stars and highly recommended. Good-looking [admiration] [admiration] [love] [love] [like] [like]

Okay, so far it seems to be quite good, and the author's writing is also very good. The most important thing is that the setting of the heroine is very novel. Finally, it is not some time travel and rebirth. It is a story about a local child getting a panel and then upgrading. You can really read it, and the author's writing about children is really not obtrusive at all. It is very interesting, and the world of immortality written by the author is not the kind of dark immortality. It is a relatively normal world of immortality. Of course, it is also a jungle. Okay, let's not talk about the fact that the heroine's friend is suspected of liking the third uncle, but there is no result yet, but it seems that the heroine's friend is not a love brain. When I see this, I feel that each of the heroine's friends are better than her. The heroine's friends have the same physique and are born with each other. The boss can do anything. After planting it, he can feed it back to himself. He is suspected of cultivating immortals. There is no bottleneck and it is also very fast. He makes more money than the heroine making alchemy. He can also write a single book and be the protagonist. Even the protagonist of the farming novel has more tricks than the protagonist of the farming novel. Another friend is suspected to be born with a sword bone. , Someone is talking about it in the comment section, but I don't know if it's true, it feels like the system is a bit broken. These three are not geniuses. If they don't enter the inner sect immediately, I don't even know how powerful their inner sect disciples are. Hey, let's see what is written later.

I think this rating is not worthy of this book. This book is simply too good to read. There are also quite a few female characters, and then the heroine is upgraded and upgraded. I feel very comfortable watching it. This is how I want to upgrade. As a female audience member, there are no swear words or insults about women, and there are also female lords of the ancestral family. Moreover, among the few monsters I met, the heroine's monsters were also female. The two demon clans are also matriarchal societies, and the Supreme Elder is also a woman. The heroine's upgrade is quite stable because it has a panel. Then, the experience was quite interesting. There are also fun things to do in several secret areas. Highly recommended. If you like the heroine Golden Finger and have a better chance, you can watch it. And there are many female characters. There is only one senior sister

It's very good-looking, very good-looking, with many wonderful female characters. It's a novel about girls, not to be missed.

Give it a five-star review, it looks great, it looks great. The proficiency is only added when it reaches the threshold. It is not added by meaningless repetition. This setting is very good. In this way, the progress of the heroine is real progress, not just progress with the blessing of the system. There is no female competition in it, and boy is a neutral word. This is a very, very plus point.

I've caught up to the latest update, which is less than 70 chapters. It seems pretty good at first glance. The girls help each other really well, and it's Saturday every day recently. I'll give you five stars and keep up the good work~(‾⌣‾~)

The author is very clever in writing the protagonists. They look like children at first glance. They feel so cute and the plot is smooth. It is a great upgrade story. Although there are cheats, the efforts of the protagonists make people feel very comfortable!

The heroine's baby is very cute. In this book, I think men and women are equal, that is, strength is respected. Strong women can have polyandries, and strong men can also have multiple wives. Except for the mortal world, which favors boys over girls, the world of immortality is based on strength, which is all sexual orientation. After all, the world is full of wonders, and love has a very small proportion of micro-group portraits. Wen, there are male and female deacon heads. The founder of the sect is a woman. The current head is a narcissistic and uninhibited handsome man. He is not as reliable as the chief disciple, our senior sister. Hahaha [laughing and crying] When the heroine and her senior brothers and sisters go on missions, they can also meet stable and powerful senior sisters and senior brothers who have a brainless personality like Xiong Daxiong Er.

I finished the novel before commenting on it. I really love this kind of long-term fairy tale. There is no time travel and rebirth at the moment, and it is not the kind of invincible and refreshing novel. It is the kind of fairy tale one step at a time. The writing style is not bad. This novel is still a more orthodox cub fairy tale. Unfortunately, it is not enough to read o(╥╥)o , both the plot and the writing style are still good in Red Persimmon. There are no bad points so far. It is worth reading. Finally, I hope more people can discover this novel❤️

Yes, it's a very smooth and heartwarming story about cultivating immortals. The heroine and her friends work hard to cultivate immortality. Each has their own talents. The little sisters help each other. It's not insulting to the heroine.

It's okay, it's more of a daily upgrade, and there are more female characters. The disadvantage is that you can't watch it with your brain, and some settings are not rigorous enough. It can be watched by those who like to watch daily. The heroine has a panel that upgrades quickly, and there are qualification settings, but the heroine's qualifications are average at the beginning and she upgrades too quickly. It feels like a cool writing route, but the writing is too intense. The heroine in the first few chapters has the feeling of a child, but there is no preparation for the introduction of spiritual practice in the later chapters, and it directly becomes an adult's thinking. . . You can probably read this book, but I wouldn't recommend it specifically.

Come on, teacher, I suddenly wanted to check the score today and found that it was already 7.0. The future is promising. I just remembered that I have never written a book review for the novel, so I will make up for it now. So far, this is the most comfortable systematic fairy tale I have read. The female treasures such as Xingyun, Zhou Jing, and Lu Chi all have their own growth paths. The characters have distinct personalities, and the overall rhythm of the novel is also very brisk. I even read this novel and wanted to find something similar to satisfy my craving. After reading it for a while, I still waited for the update, hahahaha.

It's super pretty, so I couldn't help but rate it. The front part is more cozy because the heroine is still relatively young, only seven years old. The characters are also very three-dimensional and seem to be group portraits. I just found out that the score is only a little over 7. I was very surprised. Maybe it's because of the new book. The author writes well and will definitely be able to break the nine. It's just a serialization, it hurts me a little hahaha

Nice! Female-oriented. The heroine is an aborigine, a child, and her childish talk is very cute. There are many women, and they all help each other. The heroine's growth is very solid and can be seen step by step. The heroine's good friends are also very talented and hard-working, and they like to see strong women surrounded by women. This one is relatively warm and daily (from the current perspective) I also like what the author writes. For example, the auctioneer selling meat is a man, which makes me feel so happy. The heroine's senior sister and the beast-controlling senior sister had a good fight... But some of the later words are more masculine-oriented, so I hope the neutral words won't give way. The female-to-male ratio in this book is about 6:4. In the impression of the heroine's close friends, except for the weapon-refining brother, they seem to be surrounded by girls. I also quite like the character of the female friends around me.

Starting from scratch, the heroine who works particularly hard [Adoration] Why do most people around the heroine have to find a partner for them? It doesn't necessarily have to be balanced.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! 0 Insulting words for women, there are so many female characters, I started to praise them after watching it halfway through!

It's particularly nice to watch. It's more of a daily slow-burn in the early stages, but the settings inside are very rigorous and novel. It's also fun to watch as a fast-paced party dance. The latter part is more of a normal pace of cultivating immortals. There are no brainless villains to slap in the face. The heroine and her friends are all very good children, and the writing style is very warm.

It's an article worth reading, and the author is very persuasive! It is definitely worth going into the pit to pursue the book.