I'm Just an Angel Who Comforts You, Not Your Wife

I have to say that the writing is very good and creative, but the second female lead is indeed quite unpleasant. If this book was about the heroine gradually meeting different people (the beautiful girl Bushi) in the process of comforting others and gaining kindness, and then gradually grew into an angel in the world. In this process, the heroine can become an angel and redeem the people she meets. You can also become everyone, the angel of the world, the true God. In the end, different people with different problems meet each other because of the heroine, solve each other's problems, and then intersperse some heart-warming daily moments and stickers. How delicious it would be. The villain in the traditional sense can even be omitted, the main focus is the angel's development (debut?) Plan

..., Although but..., I can't stand it any longer. Although it may not be appropriate to post such remarks in a book, I still want to say that to be honest, I would regret meeting such a person for the rest of my life. It is more uncomfortable than a simple Zhiyu. Anyway, I don't think it is that painful. This could have been Maybe they are both rejected for the ending. The heroine's character is indeed an angel, and I completely agree with other people's comments that the second heroine is CS. It's okay, but it's too much. It obviously crosses the line. She's too sick. Others are yandere. At least she should show off her coquettishness first to make people like her. , This one only saw illness from the beginning, only the twisted desire for control and the arrogance of treating the heroine as a personal property. To be honest, the latest ending I saw was the wife-chasing crematorium. Literally, the damage can never be repaired, and a broken heart cannot return to the original state. They shouldn't be together, well, maybe to put it seriously, it may be stressful or even extreme. She should be allowed to die in despair, so that the protagonist can find a new life, meet someone new who loves her, and the two of them can be happy, so that she tries her best to destroy but fails and finally dies in pain in the abyss of despair. This kind of person is much scarier than just hurting you. He uses false things to give you extreme love, making you rely on him, then drives you into the abyss, gives you false beauty, and then makes you fall into despair. All the hopes in the past are false. My evaluation is very zhiyu. Anyway, I only see crazy women who play with their feelings, and angels who are irreparably hurt by "love". What is even more painful is that the heroine's character will definitely forgive her. The more she talks, the more she wants to be sexually aroused... I can't stand it anymore. Although I'm sorry, this is how I feel about this book now. After beautiful things are destroyed, the destroyed people are falsely bonded together and then tied up for life. I am not sad, but angry. I'm sorry, the author is great, the writing is still good, and the sense of immersion is indeed achieved, please come on. Why.

The writing style is very good, with non-obtrusive descriptions of appearance, a perfect introduction to the world view integrated into the narrative, rich and delicate movements and expressions, various environments and modifiers stacked together without being bloated (this is something that Xiaoluo Shiye will also make mistakes in), this book should not be a work that appears on the Tomato platform at all. The rhythm of the narrative is so perfect. When I read the fourth chapter, I seemed to have experienced the protagonist's entire life and experienced the protagonist's helplessness and pity. This is something that online writing and even most published novels cannot do. The first few novels that gave me a strong sense of immersion were the "Three-Body" series and a novel on Tomato with the protagonist named Zhou Ruoling (unfortunately it was unfinished and not recommended). Although I have only read the first four chapters, this book is definitely in the top five on my bookshelf! Five stars just because the limit is five stars. Oh my god, this is a work of art.

Human desires may sometimes not be like rolling stones on the mountain. When the yandere imprisoned the protagonist, my xp reached the highest value. Well, my xp was like a bird in a cage. The bird that wanted to escape could never escape. The more I thought about it, the more excited I became. I gave the bird hope and then gave it endless despair. But when your desires fill your entire mind, you will only be left with endless emptiness. Looking back, you will find that you are just a body driven by desires. When I saw that the yandere can start to create separation anxiety for the protagonist, I began to feel that it was a bit too much. The above are some of my thoughts.

I want to see God's world-destruction branch after the angels die, and Su Minyao survives and becomes Lucifer in hell, forever looking up and longing for the angels in heaven who fall but can't get the world-destruction branch and then create the world again. But the author doesn't seem to know how to write (눈‸눈) (look into my eyes, author, don't you feel guilty?)

Subject: No need to explain, you are so awesome Character creation: God level-0.1 Level Storyline: Not even a bite of meat, all relying on daily healing Structure and Narrative: Refreshing Depth of thought and worldview: Nothing Language style and vocabulary richness: Impressive, occasionally new words Readability: High ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ Personal reading experience: Let's talk about the shortcomings – the updates are too slow. I read the articles in half a year and read them in one hour; Meow meow🙀can't just drink sugar water🐸🐱

A new book by a newcomer. In my opinion, it just needs to make readers comfortable to read. This book is fine. The narrative technique is very special, like a light novel. In terms of character design, the angel protagonist can be cute and tempting. The author must teach the other heroine what love is. Don't let down the little angel. Tiebaa

As all the book friends said, it is very immersive. When reading, I also feel like I am being healed by the protagonist. The description is specific but not lengthy. It is a good book. But for the imprisonment part, I personally think that the protagonist is really affected too seriously. In addition, the details of the second female lead being disciplined by her family can be revealed in the early stages to round out why the second female lead has such a big and twisted desire for the protagonist. It feels a little late to add it later. Finally, no spoilers, although I know you want to appease the readers, but spoilers really give me the feeling of breaking the dimensional wall.

I think the writing is quite good. Although the writing style is not particularly good, it is at least average. The most important factor in judging the quality of a work is whether it has a sense of immersion. When I look at this work, I have the feeling of being immersed in it, and I feel that the depiction is quite vivid.

Meow, I will type one too. I changed the previous volume, meow🥹🥹🥹 The changes are almost finished [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The writing is very good and the plot is also good. Let's bring up the little black room section quickly.

It's really delicious. The author promised me to keep writing [laughter]

I think the author should not use "cute" repeatedly when describing Yuxi. It will appear too deliberate and too redundant, which will lead to the loss of the character's characteristics. It can be reflected by describing the character's demeanor, actions and language (of course there are already many languages). All in all the characterization is pretty good.

This is... Honey! Oh, no, no, no, no, damn industrial saccharine, you're actually pretending to be honey! Oh, yes, yes, yes, this is honey, no, no, no, no, damn industrial saccharin! Oh, right, right...

From our current point of view, this book is quite well written, both in terms of plot and characterization of characters. Although it is not as good as those of older writers, it is still acceptable among newcomers. I hope you can persevere and don't give up on books QAQ, we don't want to see the books we like to read discontinued [I'm about to cry]

Messenger of God, Prisoner of Man, Compassionate and Merciless One Although God does not exist, the protagonist is undoubtedly chosen and given to become an angel, carrying the crown called duty; although the protagonist belonged to humans before, she is no longer him. She needs the sincere and pure love of humans as food. The angelic instinct also tied him to the ship called human. From a pessimistic point of view, he is a prisoner. As an angel, he has a high degree of compassion, the ability and courage to reach out to the weak, and at the same time, an angel has the ruthlessness to love the world, but not only love no one (referring to the great love without selflessness).

Watch the update in one go. The previous plot is very innovative and interesting. Su is so perverted, and the setting of the angel becoming stupid when he is full is also very good. You can see the corners of his mouth rising all the way. But it felt a bit boring later on (maybe I've watched too many plots like this)

When I first started watching the plot, I wasn't sure if there were any poisonous points, but I'm sure the writing was quite good. Bro felt like he was about to be purified by an angel. Really, it was quite comfortable anyway.

That's it. Although it was a bit suffocating to play the heroine at first, but when I really saw the angel relying on me, I felt very satisfied. With a few Japanese songs, I was too lazy.

It has potential. At present, it looks like Angel has been re-skinned, but if it is better than the old movie, it will be fun. The classic will be passed down forever. I will give it five stars when the follow-up plot is stable and stable.

Very well written, well written

A very good book, a very novel experience, derived from detailed descriptions and childish and simple characterizations.

Finally found a good book!

Super beautiful, perfect

The person named Su is quite a cs person. Although the author's writing style is good, it seems okay for someone named Su, but in reality it is really illegal and criminal for you to do this. I hope all book friends will remember [code]

I don't think it can be considered as abuse. In short, I feel that Su should be very gentle from Mu's perspective. Compared with other stories, Su is still very gentle in his treatment (forcing the truth).

Except for Su who is a bit unpleasant, the rest of the writing is pretty good.

A+, an absolute fairy, a treasure that appears in the world

It's awesome, the heroine's twisted character is well described, and the writing style is very comfortable.

Wonderful writing style, because the strong sense of déjà vu reminds me of the previous author of Blue P