Douluo*****

So far, it seems to be quite good, the content is quite good, and it is very serious. Maybe it's because I've read too many books about life, but I always think about the protagonist absorbing the fire from the earth that collapsed next door, or absorbing the king of earth beasts to make a soul ring, or becoming an [immortal] dragonborn or something. I don't know how the author will write in the future, but please keep writing and stop being like this. By the way, I wish the author and all book friends a happy new year, good health and all the best, and that I can still be nagged by my parents when I am a hundred years old.

The writing is quite good, although the early plot progress is slow, but the writing is very detailed. I have read too many cookie-cutter fast-forward versions of fics, and this one is still very good, and the combat power is not broken, but the protagonist has too few offensive methods in the early stage. I hope this aspect can be refined later. The mid-term competition was written much faster than the previous Notting City plot. It was a bit rushed and had a sense of separation from the previous detailed writing, but fortunately, the online writing style is still at a high level.

The author's writing style is too delicate, which makes the adaptation of Douluo's fast-paced novel a bit verbose. However, among many novels that only pursue pleasure, I think this is quite unique and good. I hope the author's writing style can improve even more! Find the right angle between delicacy and simplicity. I am also very grateful to the author for bringing us great works! Great author, can this book be reborn?

It's okay. It's better than the others. The first one is okay. Please write more other lines. If you write it according to the original text, it feels boring. For example, write more about life, adventure and the like. It's also okay to interact more with the heroine. Thank you, the author. It's great.

The writing is good. [Like] [Like] [Like] Come on💪 Now I hope it will be a single heroine

Most of the plots are good, but sometimes the characters have the same names, and the number of souls to fight is eight in Shrek, but seven on the other side.

Come on, come on, come on Come on, come on, come on

Very nice! The author must persevere, come on!

The five-star review is very good. Come on, author! [Praise]

It seems pretty good so far

It looks okay, but I can't understand it. It feels a bit uncomfortable. I know it sometimes and don't know it sometimes.

Very well written! The author has been waiting for me for a while. I will definitely give you a big sword (gift) after I send it out🥰🥰🥰

Invincible, the writing is exquisite, the plot logic is very good, you must read it

Very good, very good, very good

Very good writing

Very well written, detailed

Being carried away, fellow Douluo people are in great fear, so please don't ascend.

Still worth a look. Sometimes a lot of details are lacking. I wish I was more careful. I see that in many places in the article, the details are not handled very well.

It's in line with what I thought, but it's more detailed and slower-paced than the average fighting derivatives... It's very interesting, so please give it a thumbs up, author!

Despite its shortcomings, it is a brand new Wuhun after all, so it is somewhat difficult to write. How should I put it, there are some logic problems in some places. For example, Shao Xin and other teachers who did not come to Tiandou City with him in the previous article appear in the later article. Moreover, Xiao Wu's soul beast identity was only mentioned in the first few chapters, and was not mentioned in detail after that. Moreover, he was not afraid of seeing a titled Douluo. This is wrong, very wrong.

The book is quite good, but maybe it's because the Douluo theme is a bit unpopular, so the rating isn't that great.

The delicate writing style makes you feel like reading a book about celebrity stories.

It is considered a high-quality product among Douluo fans. I just don't know when the author will bring up Zhuanwu [eat melon]

No, to be honest, the more I look at it, the more I feel like it is created by AI?