Mortal********

Yes, the pace is fast and the thinking is clear.

The natal magic weapon is too weak and needs to be strengthened

It's okay but the pace is too fast!

If you really love this novel, stick to it!

I think it's okay. The pace is a bit fast, but I don't like it. Anyway, the world view is big enough.

Okay, find a new way and a different perspective, no sense of conflict

The pace is fast, and most of it follows the original work, which is quite good.