A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Became Zhang Tie

Has the author read the original work? The Order of Ascension to Immortality belongs to Master Jinguang, not Doctor Mo. Zhang Tie has the three spiritual roots of gold, fire and earth, so he abandoned it.

Can you still cooperate in front of Xuan Gu if you practice Xuan Yin Jue? I forgot that in the original novel, Wu Chou was crushed to death by the roadside. It didn't matter. In Tomato, he would be carried away sooner or later.

When I saw the elixir formation, I couldn't stand it anymore. It took Han Li sixty years to form the elixir, and Zhang Tie's twenty years to do it. The two of them retreated together. What Zhang Tie did in the forty years after he formed the elixir was completely unclear in the article. It felt like Zhang Tie's forty years after he formed the elixir were eaten away.

The plot foreshadowing is okay and worth watching. Since it combines the prehistoric consciousness of Blue Star in the previous life with modern knowledge, the creation of skills can be said to be a new approach. However, the protagonist's supernatural powers can also be created based on Tiangang Disha. Secondly, the details of the key plots can be written a little slower. The writing speed is still a bit fast throughout the day. If you don't make the protagonist special, it will appear that your article is ordinary and uninteresting. I don't recommend that you consider taking one as a disciple. In short, if you are not too busy to go to the fairy world, you can consider it. You must know that the plot of going to the fairy world is relatively reluctant, and Han Li can write it in detail. Add a bit of humanity, storytelling, etc. Come on, author 🤭🤭🤭[licking screen]🤦

Who is the protagonist? How is it different from the original novel? There is no foreshadowing or main plot. Can you simply tell the original novel? Those who have not read the original work will not be able to understand it.

The author just wrote it after reading a few fanfics.

You're welcome. .

Yes, the pace is fast and the thinking is clear.

If you really love this novel, stick to it!

Here, Doctor Mo, give it a little bit. Towering fortune dew.