Senior Brother, How Could He Be a Girl?

Although there are obvious transition problems with routines in the middle chapters, such as Elder Zhou giving gifts and being pursued, the plot itself is exciting and the use of routines does not affect the perception of the story. The rhythm is also well controlled. It will not make people want to watch or skip watching because of the high-intensity narrative or extremely slow pace. The template of cultivating immortals is very traditional, but the story is unexpectedly very unique. The character creation is okay. It does create the image of a genius who has lived for 600 years but has never been exposed to the world. However, some are too versatile. As a result, the subsequent promotion path has begun to become linear, just to achieve something and then be promoted, etc. If it is not handled well, it will be boring in the later stage, but I am not sure what the author will do in the later stage. To deal with it, the story of the first 150,000 words is above 4 stars. The only plot problem so far is the part with Zhao. I don't understand why he wants to mess with the protagonist. It is obvious that he can't beat the 37-win protagonist at the time, and the opponent is also a popular person in the eyes of the elders and disciples. Although it can be explained by jealousy, but This kind of conflict is too cliche, but fortunately, this problem is not committed later. At present, it seems that the author's funny and dramatic writing style is better than creating too many conflicts. Let's stick to the humorous daily style. Also, it seems that Lin Wan'er should be the main character, but how does the main character change from Wei Wei who just joined the sect? There is no description of one of Nuonuo's stronger characters. Was it possessed by the soul from another world after Lin Wan'er joined the sect, or was it a reincarnated person who awakened the memory of his past life? How many reincarnated people are there are good pitfalls, and there are also problems with skills... And if these pitfalls are not handled well, the game will basically be over. To sum up, the early stage writing is very good, but writing the later stage according to the current development of the story requires strong story writing ability. I hope the author can work hard. Some advice to the author is to grasp the promotion of the protagonist. Take Su Xiaoxiao as an example. The foundation stage is fine at present. If he reaches a later stage, he can no longer hang out with Su Xiaoxiao, right? One or more characters need to be created. Every time you advance to one or two ranks, you have to rewrite the role of the protagonist. First of all, there are not so many people. If I were to write it for you, it would be bad to repeat it, and the characters would not be three-dimensional or make the readers feel emotional. If I help Su Xiaoxiao and help her get promoted quickly, it will become a pendant. This problem has appeared some times now. The characters that have been created in the past will not show their faces in the future, such as Shi Jian. If he is not used, why should he be portrayed? It will only make the plot appear crowded and the characters lose their vitality. Add some growth to other characters, don't spend ink describing insignificant characters, and adjust the rhythm of the protagonist's invincibility flow.

I hope it's a large-scale, CP-free article. I feel pretty good. Cheers to the author🥰

The subject matter is novel, and although the logic is slightly lacking, it is completely fine to read without thinking. The protagonist has a sense of justice in everything he does, and he also manages to be cool and slap in the face, describing the discomfort he feels after gender change. The relationship between male and female bodies after the boy is restored in the later period and the logic of continuing to maintain the female body should be more interesting. The biggest problem is that only two chapters a day are really not enough to read, which is a pity.

I'm reading everyone's suggestions, and I'm slowly learning and accumulating. At present, it is not possible to satisfy everyone, and there are many unreasonable things. Next, I will try my best to be the best I can be. Finally, thank you for leaving valuable suggestions.

The old monster is still the same as the ZB slap in the face. It is not as cunning and insidious as the hundreds of years old monster. It has been a waste of 600 years.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a serious fairy tale. Now I'm really looking forward to the scenes between the protagonist and Lin Wan. I hope the follow-up won't be about getting married or getting married.

Reading about a place where the main character is forced to join a fellowship is okay so far There are many books to read. Make a mark. I'm just a little speechless about those outer disciples who are full of love and love. I feel that not many of them are serious about cultivating immortality. Of course, very few people write about serious cultivation of immortality now. They are basically just piling up numerical values. The author's description of the sword moves is very graphic. The soul is male and he uses a female body to become stronger from scratch. It is inevitable to face some troubles that female immortal cultivators will encounter. Of course, this is most likely the author's plot arrangement. After all, those who cannot keep up with their mentality will not improve their cultivation. There are no fools among people with high cultivation level. They live clearly. It's rare to read transgender genres. This book was quite comfortable to read. Five-star praise, give the author a shot of chicken blood, and give it to Ollie [laughing evilly]

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So far, it's pretty good. The plot isn't great, and it's certainly not bad. It's still quite novel to me. Just don't make the transformation into a man permanent, just make it a costly switch. The main body of the narrative is still in a female body. That's what I came for [laughs] I don't know what other people think, but for me it's really good. You can look at my bookshelf. Most of the rated novels about Tomato Transformation are on my bookshelf. There are quite a lot of them. I'm afraid the author will finish them hastily if the data is not good.

It's pretty good-looking, but it's pretty invincible. It's a brainless and cool article.

It's okay. In fact, it feels a bit like reading a female magazine, and the cover looks like a male magazine (I don't know which category this book belongs to).

So far, everything looks good, but I feel that the story line is a bit single. Secondly, I am curious about whether the protagonist has a love line🤔 (I want to see the protagonist reveal his identity more than this hhh)

This book is really beautiful, I couldn't stop reading it in one sitting. The plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and every chapter makes people want to read on. The author's writing style is smooth, the details are handled well, and the sense of substitution is strong. After reading it, I felt warm in my heart and couldn't help but recommend it to my friends📖✨✨

Very few, there are some logical errors in the writing. I like the protagonist very much. He doesn't talk too much and has a strong purpose. It's wonderful. At present, the world view has not been developed yet. In more than two hundred chapters, the highest combat power is the golden elixir, and Yuanying has only mentioned it once. I hope you can learn more about it later. So far, they are single and have no emotional line. There is a system, but it is not on the protagonist, which is relatively counter-conventional. After returning from school, I am tired of traveling and traveling. I hope to update more as I read.

The plot is delicate and smooth. It is really one of the few transformation novels that I can read every plot word for word. The author is very careful. It is a good article. I really think it is good.

The content is novel and eye-catching

Looks great, looking forward to the follow-up

The foundation is built in one year, and 600 years of golden elixir feels like a long span of time. The other things are quite interesting.

The author must not go to CP, you can, but don't be together😢😢 Please update the author soon. In order not to finish reading your book all at once, I have been reading other books for a long time [face covering] [face covering]

I'm not a buddy, why did I stop updating? [Crying] Come back soon~

It's good to read. Many other books of the same genre can't stand it after reading it for a while. This one is okay so far.

As you said, I think this subject matter is really novel. This is really pretty, to be honest.

Okay, okay, the plot is quite interesting, I feel good

The structure is very clear, not cliche or formulaic

Good job, author, I hope the protagonist never changes back.

It looks great, but I would like to ask if you know if CP will develop in the later stage or if there will be no CP ending. Personally, I still hope it would be better to have CP [Love]

It has the feel of a fairy tale written before I started, but now the number of words is too small, so I read it in a while

Yeah, generally speaking, it's okay. I feel like my writing skills are lacking in some places, but I'm more of a light-hearted person, so I can still understand it.

It would be better if the conflicts between the characters don't look like an assembly line. The whole thing is more relaxed and enjoyable, and the protagonist is also very responsible.

Beautiful, love watching it! I've never written a book review before so I don't know how to write one, but it's really good and I hope to update more~