Double Penetration: Diaosi Evolves into a Lone Wolf

It was okay in the early stage, but collapsed in the middle stage; in a feudal dynasty, trying to use scarce prescriptions to make deals with the government [laughing and crying] No one told you that the only point of the transaction is not to be cheated by the other party.

The writing style [Like] - The concept is rigorous (too cautious). I feel that the author has taken on the role of the protagonist and wrote his own mental journey very realistically. Modeling according to the three-D area is excellent. But this is an online article, and the slow pace is poison to many people who follow the update. Many people say that the turn-based system and changing maps are too old-fashioned, but they are indeed the best monetization methods at this stage. The author can code quickly and does not need to use too much brains. The author's method of writing is not only taxing, but also suppresses the climax. He should speed up the character development appropriately. If the author sees the comments, please support me. Love your book.

A hidden gem! Almost missed it! ! ! Reality! This is the most rigorous double penetration article I have ever seen! There is no logical flaw at all! This should be the most realistic appearance of an ordinary person when encountering a double-passing golden finger! I almost missed it when I saw the rating of 5.9! The actual rating should be at least 8.5! But there are several problems 1. The title is not attractive! Lone wolf or something, people have no desire to click on it! 2. The pace in the early stage is a little slower and more rigorous, which is very reasonable! In the later period, the protagonist developed the golden finger so well that it was easy to write off! The whole map is invincible. The protagonist has no pressure and will be very lonely and bored! 3. Follow-up suggestions: Either change the map, or rewrite daily articles about life in another world! The latter is a test of writing skills, the former requires natural transitions, and the two are a test of the author's strength!

It has reached a level where you can sign a contract at the starting point. The writing is very good. The protagonist is not mentally retarded, and the supporting characters are not mentally retarded either. It belongs to the flow of life. I have read the latest chapter, but I don't know when I can truly cultivate immortality.

Such a protagonist looks like a normal person. Although it is a fantasy novel, it describes the living conditions of ordinary people and is not so obscene and fantasy.

As of the latest chapter 103, it's still okay, and there's no obvious poisonous point. Later, the plot where the protagonist gets some armor to threaten people becomes more and more awkward. Author, have you ever re-read the book you wrote?

This is really beautiful. It's delicate and not brainless. The front looks good, but the back is so boring that I don't want to follow it.

I have been reading the online novel for more than 10 years. It is completely different from other novels. It's not like the author is telling you a story, it's more like you are playing a game where you don't know the goal, the level boss, and a completely unknown world.

It's really good. I've been a bookworm for more than ten years and thought it was good. That means it's really good. Thank you, the author. Please keep updating.

It's a bit frustrating, but it's really thoughtful. It's more than 2 million times better than the dog-licking article, and tens of thousands of times better than the mentally retarded question. It's a great book. It only got 5.2 Points because of who hacked it. This book deserves 9.99999 Points.

Based on Ben Laden's twenty-six years of experience, this book is as good as the first few chapters of Sherlock Holmes. The character of trying one step at a time and never taking risks is really to my liking. Thanks to the author for the practical guide to time travel.

The writing is very good, and it looks good, but readers must think long enough to read it. If you are mature and have a complete outlook on life and values, you can have fun watching it. If you are too young, you will easily be trafficked. The protagonist has delusions of being persecuted and has double standards. You must not imitate him. The rest is pretty good. I give it five stars for the author's writing. It is not easy to create and it is difficult to make money. Come on!

It's pretty good, the setting is rigorous and the identity is well represented. But you still have to make money, exchange silver for gold, modern crafts, artificial diamonds, glassware, exchange for gold, exchange for jade, exchange for jade, exchange for traditional Chinese medicine, exchange for high-end wood. It's necessary. Now that I don't have around 100 million in money, I still feel anxious.

Not bad, so far it's quite smooth, and it can attract people to read on, but it's just a little short of a click and it's all over.

It's not a cool novel, but it's a travelogue from another world. Its advantages are that it's not an AI novel, it has a strong sense of reality, the characters are well created, and the plot is not clichéd. The shortcomings are that the author has too many personal stories, too many descriptions of psychological activities, and the plot jumps and the main line is unclear. It is suitable for old readers. Normally I would rate it 8 points and give it a five-star encouragement.

You can find this kind of intelligent and logical writing in Tomato, which is like finding gold in the pit. Give it a 5-star review. The pace is slow, but the details are very engaging. An old bookworm like me is tired of reading fast-paced, brainless and cool writing. It's not easy to read this kind of writing. Come on, author.

This book can be read with your mind! Book reviews that are true and objective, with multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structure, and substantial content can help more book lovers.

Found a treasure! I haven't finished reading Chapter 3 yet, so I can't help but comment! The key is only 5.8 Points now! There is a feeling of being discerning [laughing] You must leave a mark when the high-scoring essay is still low-scoring [laughing].

I finished reading it in one go. The title is not very attractive, but everything else is good. Although the plot unfolds slowly, the setting logic is reasonable, it becomes stronger step by step, and there is a sense of growth. The subsequent development of plug-ins is directly invincible. It is not a virgin, it is not kneeling and licking, building a tree house, camping on the cliff top, and building a base in Juemei Cave. I really like these.

After reading so many novels for so many years, there are only a few protagonists with normal IQs and supporting characters who are not mentally retarded.

The writing is quite good, but don't be too eunuch. Support ratings

It's very interesting, like a travel novel to another world, a scene where a modern person travels to ancient times The protagonist in the front has a certain weakness when he first enters the other world, but he gradually grows up later on. This is a good article.

IQ is online, and the details are interesting and exciting.

It's very interesting, and the character of the ordinary protagonist is well described.

Logical and thoughtful

The author's writing is actually very good, but he doesn't foreshadow the world view too much, which makes me feel very bad. You will feel uncomfortable in a world with low martial arts. What are your thoughts after reading Chapter 81?

Going on adventures and exploring the world is the most interesting. It is recommended not to increase your power too quickly.

Um! Anyway, I like it very much so far [OK] It's just that the dialect is hard to understand [laughs awkwardly]

I suspect that the author really has a double portal. The writing feels very real. People in other worlds just have less knowledge and not less curtness. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

Love it. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs.