After Time Travel, I Criticized the Whole Internet and Became the Movie King Bai Yueguang

The writing is very good (¯▽¯)👍. The emotional development between the two protagonists is very natural, but there are a few things that I am confused about. One is why Chenxing knew that a person with similar characteristics to him would come, and what is the connection between the two? The second is that some descriptions make me feel This is a throwback article. For example, since the original owner's eldest brother had arranged for people to protect him over the years, why did the original owner suffer such serious injuries that he died? Logically speaking, the original owner's body should have been injured and died in the alley instead of returning to the apartment. Who cured him and sent him back? Why is it said that Shen Chunian is a "lost and found" treasure? Of course, the author finally explained that Shen Xunian and the original owner are two people, but the above is what I am more confused about; the third thing is why Shen Xunian traveled through time, whether it was caused by Lu, a coincidence or something else, I don't know. Is the similar traits between Shen Xunian and Chen Xing a coincidence or premeditated? There are many parts in the article that need to be read carefully, which are quite brain-burning and require careful consideration. I don't know why, but few people have rated it, but I think it's still worth a look. There is also the feeling that the author may not have explained some of the contents of the outline in the text during the writing process, or may have forgotten it while writing, which makes some places seem sudden. Of course, this may also be deliberately designed by the author to give readers room for their own imagination. In short, after reading the whole book, there are still many unanswered questions. If the author can read my comments, I hope he can answer them🙏｡I am really curious [sending my heart]. I like to use keywords when reading articles, which are more realistic. If I don't understand, it will be very uncomfortable🥹. If possible, the author can also write a prequel about Chen Xing's story, Shen Xinian's background before the time travel, the reason for the time travel, etc. If it was the Shen family who brought Shen Xunian back to the apartment from the alley, I guess his eldest brother and grandfather might have roughly guessed that he had a different core, but accepted him after time travel. After all, his temperament has changed so much and he has gained many more skills. The Shen family must have known about their concern for the original owner. If it was Lu Xingzhou who brought him back to the apartment, then this time travel might also be related to Lu. Another thing I forgot to mention is whether Lu's research on Chen Xing contributed to Shen Shen's time travel to a certain extent. In other words, has Chenxing merged with the original owner? Afterwards, Shen Xi Nian was formed, creating what he considered to be this time-travelling. After all, the two of them have very similar traits, and Shen also has the memory of the original owner. But in this case, some of my previous guesses will be overturned [laughing and crying]. All in all, it is really brain-burning and got me involved.

The author's writing is very vivid, and he follows the characters and plot step by step. It's very sweet, but I feel that the ending is a bit incomplete. I'm still curious about the relationship between Chenxing's death and the original owner? Although inside, they felt it didn't matter anymore. However, I'm curious.

I would like to give this book a good review. Although it is confusing to read through many pits and the confusing timeline is a bit confusing, the storyline is relatively novel and very interesting. If this book had half more words and filled in the pitfalls of cause and effect, it would be perfect.

Very nice! Be sure to come and see it! I really like the author's writing style! I really like these words written by the author: "Because of you, the white night can see eternal day." [Some encounters are already destined] [We didn't know at the time that this encounter would change everything] [Under the eternal daylight, the starlight will never die—dedicated to the banquet and the year of silence] When you think you are walking alone in the dark, there is actually another star shining in sync with you. It just takes time for you to see each other's light. Under the eternal daylight, the starlight is immortal.

"Because of you, the white night can see eternal day." ——Yan Wan "Yanwang, you are my glory and my return." ——Shen Xunian From now on, there will be light in the white night and a home in the daytime. To be honest, it's quite shocking. I originally read it as a Ma Jiawen. The characters' emotions are so natural [Like]

The writing is really good. The author has the most powerful brain. He knows a lot. I seriously doubt that the author has written infinite flow before. The plot is very well written [like] [like], but it is too hot and burned my brain [Petrified]

The author's description is really good. The early content is really brain-consuming. The author is very powerful [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss] I watched it one night, and I always felt like someone was staring at me when I was sleeping [Hold my face][Hold my face] In the later stage, maybe my brain was not enough, and I felt a bit confused, but it was really good to watch [Adoration][Adoration]

The plot is rich and the characters are vivid. Some parts gave me a feeling of infinite flow. Overall, it is a novel worth watching. The plot introduction is also very attractive. Although the score is not high, it is only a matter of time. Excellent authors and excellent novels deserve to be known.

Although I haven't finished it yet, I've read more than half of it. I feel that the writing style of the author is really good. It's very suitable for writing unlimited flow. The level in the castle part in front of me makes me hairy. It's really super smooth and very brainstorming. But our teacher Yan is really awesome. It seems that Yong Zhou is so busy and can be the best actor in the entertainment industry. You are indeed worthy of you, hahaha. Little couple 99999999999 hehe. But I still look forward to the author writing a two-men unlimited flow. The designation is very exciting!

A particularly perfect book... A very interesting subject matter. The mutual testing at the beginning was full of tension. The tacit understanding in every action, the gradually revealed mystery, and the perfect ending. The plot became more and more exciting as it went on. Although there were ups and downs, it still gave me a long-lasting feeling. Finally, I was very lucky to read this book by accident. I pray and be happy. Congratulations on the completion. May all readers, friends and authors have a good life, and wish everyone peace and success. 2026.2.27 Wrong word omg... It's a baby

In the first half, I was very happy to watch Nian Nian quarrel with others. Every time, he gave a wonderful performance. Shining Liang refreshed the bad reviews in the past. He cooperated with Teacher Yan to overcome the enemy and went through the level together to find out the villain's minions. In the second half, he battled wits with the medical madman and captured this extreme madman. The sound is very sweet, and it is the kind of marriage I long for. There is no noise, no fuss, tacit understanding and communication, occasional surprises, and sharing of wonderful moments in life. But it is really difficult to achieve that state in reality. After all, life after having a baby and life after the baby goes to school... Sigh~ The author is very attentive, including the intellectual decryption environment, which is really brain-burning, and the details such as science and technology and military are in place. The relationship with the teacher who receives the banquet every year is also a matter of course, without any twists and turns. It is very good. I have also received blessings on engagements, proposals, and marriages. It is very warm and heartwarming [Love]

Generally speaking, it's pretty good to watch, but the part about Chenxing and the original author seemed to me because I didn't read it very carefully, and there was a bit of jump in the reading. I don't know if it was my problem or the author didn't write it. Well, what was their relationship with me in the last wave, and whether the overseas organization said they wanted to investigate that, but he didn't. Is this a uniform? Didn't he say there are still ones outside the country? I kept looking at him, but there was nothing more to do later. Just these two minor issues, it's equivalent to not filling in the holes, but overall it's still very, very beautiful.

Reading this novel is like a Russian nesting doll💦I always had the idea that this is a sheep and that is a wolf. Then after reading a few chapters, I realized that I was wrong (the identities of the sheep and the wolf were reversed). There were also a few moments when I realized that I didn't have a God's perspective💦💦💦💦This made me suspect that I had missed it many times😭but there was It's really interesting to read😋Thank you to the author for insisting on updating even though there are not many readers before the completion🥺Because I read the comments generally after 2 months but the completion was 2 months ago, so thank you for your persistence to let me read this beautiful novel😋😋😋[Happy]≧∇≦

It's a really good book. Although the writing style is a bit immature and a bit draggy, it could be more concise, but the logic is clear and the descriptions are also very good. Although I don't know why the rating is so low, I recommend all teachers to read it!

Overall, it's really nice to watch, and the emotions of blitzkrieg and positional warfare are also very enjoyable. The reason why I gave it four stars is because the author has yet to fill in some holes, such as how Chen Xing met Shen Zhunian and how he knew that his soul would change.

I feel like there are still a lot of doubts, ① How did Chenxing know that the protagonist will come ② Why did the original owner's family accept the protagonist all of a sudden ③ How did the protagonist cross over, etc., But overall I feel it's pretty cool, come on [Blow a kiss]

2026.3.24 Seeing this, my body suddenly trembled. Their story continues in the invisible time and space. I am very lucky to have seen this novel, and I am also very glad that I read it without reading a single page. Thank you to our dear author.

As for this article, I can say that it is acceptable in my impression. Because in the first half, my brain and CPU were burned out. Because there are too many problems. Then there are too many things that cannot be connected together. But actually, if I think about it now, there is a connection between every question and every question. So I still feel very good, and in my impression it is still very good. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit immature. But it's still well written and I still like it.

An excellent book, unlike other books, this one is special. There is no such outrageous moment in the face, nor is there such a pretentious side character. Everyone is alive and real. The author's writing style is also great, with brain-burning reasoning and real but heart-touching emotions. Here's wishing our young lovers a long and lasting life after all their hardships! 😘😘

Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very beautiful.

I originally wanted to read it to relax (I read four serialized books [face covering] and three of them were unlimited streams [laughing awkwardly]), but I didn't expect that one about the entertainment industry would include military, technology, time travel, and unlimited streams [Thinking] I read it very quickly, and maybe I don't understand the details, but how can I put it, it must be very careful, everyone has his own characteristics, and some are quite profound, haha

The relationship between Yanwang and the time-traveled Shen Zhunian is very healing. The two powerful characters work together to defeat the biggest enemy. The two achieve mutual success. The setting of Yanwang and the sacrificed comrade is not very happy for me personally. I hope the original owner can find a good ending.

The story is overall good and the plot is engaging. Unfortunately, the plot arrangement in the middle part is confusing and the timeline is blurred, which affects the coherence and immersion during reading.

It's really good to watch [Adoration] I really like this subject matter. The details of the writing, the emotional lines and the plot are all handled very well. Both of them have high IQs, and I enjoyed watching each other by pulling and testing each other [Adoration] [Shy]

Yeah, yeah, the little couple is very sweet, but there are some holes that have not been filled in. For example, why did Chenxing know about the annual meeting and become another person? Go ahead, I really want to know. Author, why don't you finish writing [angry][angry][angry]

The writing is very well written and the plot is exciting, but the pace is a bit fast in the middle. For example, the transition between Xiaonian and his brother and sister from darkness to light is a bit messy, and the change from anonymous vigilance to later acceptance is too fast, but the overall structure is good (my brain is not good enough). It is a unique book [Sending Hearts]

It feels so good when a man looks at menstruation and a woman looks crazy. It is the nemesis of depression. It is a vegetative alarm clock. It is so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It is so beautiful. God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I run away and jump hard. I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It makes me realize that God does exist. I am so beautiful that I can't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water (ง •̀灬•́)ง

Clear organization, beyond previous imagination, careful logical thinking, application of academic knowledge, step-by-step content, and character creation, each has its own characteristics, but when brought together, it creates a different kind of point, which is enough to attract more readers to read. The author's writing style is good, and the writing is also

I just read part of it and started writing a review. We are not from an absolute God's perspective, but from an ever-changing spectator perspective. I don't know what to say about this good comment [Like], but it's really fun, testing each other out, although I still don't understand what it is [Start] It feels like it fits a song very well: Trouble Maker (Trouble Maker) Very good, very good [like] [like] OK, I've finished reading it, brothers (I lied to you, I actually finished it long ago and forgot to comment). To me, this is a good work that is worthy of a second reprint. I am currently planning to reprint it a second time [Admiration] and I don't know what to say. Anyway, it is very good! But if you read the reviews and decide whether you should follow this book, I can tell you clearly: yes. Anyway, the teacher's writing is very, very good [like][like]

So pretty!!! I really like Shen Xunian [laughing]