My Teammates Are All Making Moves on Me

It's super beautiful. So far, every emotional line is relatively clear. However, some emotional lines may be a little confusing. It may be that I didn't read the book too carefully and I didn't notice some details, which makes it feel a bit strange. But some parts are repeated twice, which is a bit too cumbersome in terms of language. The most important point is that I don't know how some people fall in love with the protagonist, such as Boss Gu, who kissed him without any warning. If these are slightly changed, the whole plot line is still very good.

It's a good subject matter. There are some problems with the expression of the text, and the lack of expression of appearance and clothes. I can use words to imagine the content in my mind, but there are some contents that I can't imagine, and it will also make the readers feel physically and mentally tired. I don't know what you want to express, because there is a lack of analysis and expression of the appearance and clothes. The rest is very good and detailed, but the author can understand it even if he has just started writing, and it is already very good. Other novice authors rely on AI to write [awkward laugh] It's fake at first glance. I also wish the author a good rest and better things in the future! (๑>ڡ<)☆

Although I haven't read much, I can already tell from my many years of experience in reviewing and reading books that the author's emotional descriptions, environmental descriptions and writing style are very good. I'm really looking forward to reading more, but I've read less now and will come back to review when I've read more! Such gentle writing style, the description is very comfortable.

Very beautiful, the subject matter is very novel

I like it very much!!! The plot inside is also very interesting. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, update soon

Xiangyang's story, keep persevering and leave no regrets

Please read more. I love reading it. It's beautiful and well-written.

I really like stars

It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

I like it very much, I like it very much