After Taking Supplements and Criticizing the Villain, He Ran Away with His Son

It made me cry. Although some aspects of the plot are very abrupt, there are also some remarkable aspects. They are good sisters who will never leave! Long live sisterhood

It's really beautiful! It's just too short. I feel sorry for the heroine so much. There are some chapters that made me cry for no reason. It's written about abuse. In fact, I can see that Jin Ye is a very good person. I hope he won't abuse her too hard.

This book is so over the top, the plot is classic but also novel [Adoration]. The heroine dresses up as a dastardly female partner and doesn't follow the script. She wants to secretly pick up the crazy villain but is later discovered. The heroine's boldness in teasing the villain is very sexy, and the villain's crazy and lustful possessiveness is very exciting. The two of them had a strong sense of tension, the plot was dense but not sluggish, the characters in the book were vivid and interesting, and watching the heroine figure out the villain was sweet and exciting, and it wasn't too sadistic but the more you read, the more you get addicted.

It has the feeling of early immortality novels without overly pursuing the immortality setting and focusing on romance. I have always liked this kind of simple style of novels. The characters are very realistic, entangled and brave. You will feel worried about misunderstandings, and you will never look back because you are sure. The pace is very fast. I stayed up all night to finish it. Marriage first, love later is really what I have always liked.

It turns out that after all these years, I still prefer the plot of this kind of ancient novel. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] It's pretty good-looking and not very sad. They haven't spoken to each other, and there must be misunderstandings. The author has written all the behaviors of both parties very clearly. The male and female protagonists are worried about different things. The female protagonist is afraid of cheating him and losing her life, and the male protagonist is afraid that the female protagonist will not love him. I feel like it's impossible not to guess when someone is so smart. I really want to see the plot behind it. The author will update it soon [laughing]

It's really good to watch. The previous plot is very attractive. This kind of pretense turns into true love is really good to watch. It's sour yet sweet. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very well developed. It's the only one among the Tomato movies that I cried while watching. This rating must be higher! ! ! Maybe I like to read this type of novel. I haven't read many Tomato novels before. I think it's really good. I think the author's writing style is also very good.

Not sweet, not loving, either cheating or killing, irritating

At the beginning of the time travel, the heroine disguised herself as another person she had been with for ten years to accompany the hero. Because the other person ran away and the heroine had already cooked rice when she crossed over. Isn't it the fault of the time travel girl? Later on, the hero and heroine also had feelings for each other. Later on, the heroine was discovered and ran away. To be honest, I skipped the whole time. The hero didn't do anything wrong. The heroine kept avoiding the hero. The heroine always thought that the hero didn't like the other person. It was quite annoying after almost 20 chapters. The theme of this article is novel at the beginning. The male protagonist wants revenge or something, but then the female protagonist does not trust the male protagonist. Fortunately, the misunderstanding is resolved later! I don't know if the author is a newbie. I think I can write a great story later and remove the misunderstandings in the middle. Many people will read it. Come on, baby! ! I really like your subject matter I read it a second time and the writing was good, but the writing fell apart in the middle.

I stayed up all night and watched the latest chapter without skipping a chapter. Even though it was an old-fashioned fake white moonlight setting, I still read it all without skipping. There were many parts in the movie that made me cry, such as the heroine's pregnancy and her friend's escape from the sect. This kind of sincere and simple emotion between the girls even transcended friendship, which always moved me. For example, after the heroine gave birth, she discovered that the child was stillborn and later recognized the child. Although I am still a woman who has never given birth, I can understand the mother's emotions towards her children, because my mother is such a person and will never let go of her children because of her soft heart. In addition, I also like the setting of the male protagonist, an innocent little bitter melon. The heroine is also very clear-headed. It is written in the beginning that the heroine does not want to be reduced to a reproductive tool, but later she cannot bear to have an abortion, maybe for the needs of the plot, and later on she has to choose between the right path and the male protagonist. I can't say which approach is good for her, but the heroine is very individual. The various sour little emotions of the male and female protagonists are also well described in the middle. But I feel very tired after watching the later part. I have been looking forward to the male and female protagonists burying the hatchet and getting back together, but I haven't seen the latest chapter yet! Hope it will be updated soon. [Blowing kiss]

Although I read a lot of negative reviews, I still stayed with the author Baobao's writing style. Overall, it is still very interesting, although the emotional part is a bit tangled. In short, readers only see that the heroine has suffered a lot. The different identities of the male and female protagonists make us subconsciously ignore this and only see the suffering of the heroine. I hope that the hero will be more kind to the heroine. My eyes were swollen in the afternoon when I cried. I hope they can reconcile quickly! The most important thing is to explain clearly how the hero's feelings for the heroine changed after his identity was exposed. I don't want to be misunderstood and pretend to be Bai Yueguang!

The pretense in the early stage is mixed with sincerity. It is true that the heroine is in a low position, and the conflicts are progressive step by step. It is still very interesting to watch. I look forward to the growth line of the heroine in the later period [please update]

It's quite good. The relationship between Li Li and Jin Ye has been written to the point where they are about to reconcile. I burst into tears [covers face] Not bad, the rating shouldn't be so low.

The writing is okay, and you can watch it if you don't mind if the male protagonist in the middle is confused and drunk, pulling and hugging Bai Yueguang.

Not bad, the story is very coherent, but the emotions are a bit tangled

You can still take a look at it. The front may feel very thin. The emotional lines and daily interactions between the male and female protagonists do not really reflect how their relationship heats up. After all, the female protagonist was someone else's face and identity at that time, so all the feelings the male protagonist had towards the female protagonist at the beginning were based on that identity. The female protagonist was also very aggrieved and had a lot to say but could not say it out. In the end, it led to various misunderstandings and caused their separation for seven years. On the contrary, seven years later, they cleared up all the misunderstandings and liked each other. At this time, it was sweeter, and there were many small details: the male protagonist called the female protagonist by her nickname, the male protagonist called the child by the same name that the female protagonist gave at that time, and the child rushed out and said, mother, don't leave... Overall, you can read it. After all, it is a short article, and the emotional scenes cannot be too detailed. However, I feel that the author can write better. If you are impatient, I think you may not continue reading after seeing the previous content. The beginning should be as attractive as possible to retain readers.

It's super good-looking, but the update is a bit slow and a bit sadistic. The female protagonist is not a virgin, and the male protagonist is a love-minded person, but he doesn't have a long mouth.

I think the setting is quite attractive to me, but the overall rhythm of the article seems a bit uncomfortable for me, so I stopped reading it, but I hope the author can work harder and write better articles.

Shuhuang looks good, but it does have some shortcomings. Come on, author! The male protagonist is a little bitter melon, and the plot is quite fast-paced. Although it is not the forced love feeling I expected, it is not bad so far. Both of them are very good, and so is Xiaobao.

The plot is compact and not procrastinating; the female protagonist has her own ideas and the male protagonist is simple. When can the two little bitter gourds be together?

It's beautiful, Ah Fu is so cute, I hope their family can be happy! Just not enough 😭

An atypical wife-chasing crematorium, it combines the righteous demon sect, Bai Yueguang's stand-in literature, the sweet wife running with the ball, and the cute baby taking over the family early. There are many silly jokes, but it's still very interesting! At the beginning, the heroine pretended to be Bai Yueguang and deceived the hero to come to his bride's house to get married. By the end, she no longer knew who owed whom more. I hope the author can bring the two of them back to a happy ending later.

Although it is a bit sadistic, it is not harmful to the body, and overall it is still sweet. I feel sorry for the male and female protagonists. The ending is a happy ending, but I have to say that it is still quite confusing. The male protagonist belongs to the leader of the demon sect, and the female protagonist takes care of him when he travels through time. In the later period, he is a disciple of the righteous way. There is no balance between good and evil. He does not want the male protagonist to fail, and he does not want the female protagonist to be exterminated. It is very confusing.

The low score is justified. Although overall it is okay, the article contains a lot of feudal dross surrounding children. If these are eliminated, it would still be good.

The writing is very good, the characters are three-dimensional, the author is really great, I hope there will be more [sending my heart]

It's really good. The plot is not draggy and the plot is relatively compact. This is the only book I can calm down and read in the past two months. Some books don't want to be read until you finish the first chapter. But this one won't attract you. Read on. It's really not bad. If the previous content is the content before having children, it would be better if there were more.

It's good-looking, the heroine is smart and has her own ideas. The male protagonist is very protective and easy to coax.

It's so good for me. Every time I see a novel that suits my taste, it's serialized [crying] I originally wanted to read a few chapters to see if I could keep it on my bookshelf, but it turns out it's so good that it's equal [crying] Please update it soon! It's best if I find out tomorrow that hundreds of chapters have been updated and completed [shy]

Looks good! Waiting for the male protagonist to chase his wife at the crematorium haha

It's really good to watch, very good to watch, the plot is novel, it's the routine I want, it's very good to watch, I recommend everyone to read it, I just hope the author can update it faster, I want to read more It's very interesting. I like the plot. I highly recommend it. I hope everyone likes it. Come and watch it.

Very attractive, the plot setting is very novel, the plot is not procrastinating, and there is no nonsense, 😍😍