I Am Cultivating Immortality in the Wasteland Fairyland

The author must keep writing! ! It's really good to watch, the pacing is well controlled, and there's no boring part along the way. At present, I have read Chapter 63. It is not easy for Qinghe to go all the way. She is completely trying her best to improve her strength. No matter how hard it is, she never thinks of giving up. Many times I marveled at how tough Qinghe was, and I felt sorry for her at the age of fifteen when she was forced to enter this world of cannibalism. Qinghe, with this hard work you will definitely succeed [cry][cry][cry]. The new seedlings will produce the most dazzling fruits.

The writing was very messy at the beginning... First of all, the opening scene of relatives on fire was very flat. Although it took two chapters to foreshadow the protagonist's feelings, it felt a bit awkward. The layers of emotional rendering were not in place. Killing the immortals was messy and easy to kill. Secondly, the events encountered during the escape were very superficial. Characters from the mist jumped out of the clouds. Some semi-good people gave gifts out of nowhere... It started to feel unique and interesting as I wrote it. The protagonist became a corpse collector, and there were actually pubic areas on the corpse that could store things and be used by others. It can be seen that the world constructed is very cruel. You must find treasures after killing people and destroying corpses. Unlike the fairy tales I have read before, they usually have storage bags and need to go through spiritual consciousness and so on. This article feels more like a dark wizard system. I feel that the author may like to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, always pretending to be the first or second level of Qi Lian. In fact, I feel that this kind of cultivation is more eye-catching, plus her characteristics of being lame... The disguise is more conspicuous. Fortunately, I met the master wife later to make up for this (although I don't know why no one noticed it before) After the secret realm, we can see that the author's writing skills are getting better and better. Friends who want to read it can insist on reading the chapters after the secret realm. The heroine's character is gradually being written. It is a very interesting orthodox fairy tale. Chapter 126 has been read so far

There is a sense of elegance and elegance in reading early fairy tales. It is very realistic, not sloppy, the plot is very tight, and the heroine has a strong sense of being. She is describing an ordinary person's struggle to survive and to let himself know that there is such a place in the Zaoyuan, because when his hometown was destroyed, he was still a junior in the countryside. Children who have grown up and have not experienced too many evil things are still kind and honest in their inner nature, and cannot completely ignore some things. Even if they keep describing the cruelty of cultivating immortals, between common people and monks, between casual cultivators and sect monks, they can still see the goodness between human nature. There is a sense of fighting against injustice, a bottom line, sympathy and empathy for the weak, but he does not act blindly, he has a brain, and a clear growth path, and he is not invincible or extremely vulnerable. The descriptions of everyone in it are very three-dimensional. There are no pure good people and no pure evil people. The complex three-dimensionality of people is clearly written.

Beautiful! It's a rare female channel to watch the dark fairy tale. I feel that the heroine's family and family are destroyed and her struggle to survive is very similar to that of the male channel's ancient fairy tales. It is rare to see such a cruel and real world of immortality, but I feel that the writing is right, and it gives the feeling of the jungle being eaten by the strong! It should be a long story! Come on! Oh, yes, the author is a man who writes about teenage boys, so he pays great attention to these things! Fine! Those who were insulted were also men ( The descriptions of those sect disciples who are arrogant are really arrogant. They do not treat other people as human beings... They treat others as ants, and the following are ants themselves. The description is very real...

It's very nice to watch. Although the front is a bit boring, the back, after arriving at Black Rock City, is particularly beautiful. The main characters are all female, and the descriptions of the characters are very good, and the plot is compact and interesting. The characters are not described in a too stereotyped manner, and in many places I thought they were men but they were clearly written as women. It is a very friendly book. I don't know if there are any recommendations for this type of book. I haven't been able to find it on Tomato.

Very good, keep writing. Nowadays, most of the female videos on cultivating immortality are cool and funny, and too stereotyped. This book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air. The plot arrangement is very good and can arouse the readers' interest. As long as you refine it more, there is basically no problem. However, I feel that the first few chapters are a bit too thin. I feel that the protagonist's childhood can be detailed. It may also be that the author is afraid that readers will not be able to read it. The main reason is that you write later. The protagonist has a certain understanding of the world of immortality. You can also add a little teaching from the protagonist's mother to her in the front. Also, in the previous battle between the two immortal cultivators, the details of their fight should be described more, because the protagonist can kill them, which shows that he is already very weak. (Maybe I wrote a little too much in the review) Later on, I think the plot arrangement is quite good, except for the part about breaking into the secret realm. The group of geniuses are a bit stupid. Logically speaking, they shouldn't be. They were raised by a sect family since they were young, so they have to have some brains. Unless the world view is quite big, this is just a corner of the world of cultivating immortals. Later, as for Elder Jindan, even if his cultivation level is almost gone, he should still have some fatal methods. Okay, this book actually has many advantages. It is a good book that I came across after reading the book "I Caught the Whole Realm of Cultivation to Cry". Check it out and cheers for the author.

The character of the heroine is well portrayed. She is very resolute and brave. It may be because of the early period. Her life was too hard. I hope there will be some opportunities to change the heroine's current situation in the future. Don't be too cheating.

It's very interesting. Every aspect of the heroine is so appealing to me. The author's clever ideas in the article are also very good (such as "heroine"). I really like this book. I hope the author can keep writing [Sending Hearts]

Xu Qinghe, the protagonist of Grass Roots, is a green grass that can thrive even in mud. This is not an assembly line cool article. There was no protection from the sect, no chance from heaven, and he was on the run all the way, picking up corpses to collect spiritual stones to find treasures, and leveling up step by step, everyone went from chasing and killing to fawning and vying for them. This kind of resilience that does not rely on plug-ins and relies on one's own efforts is more addictive than reading a cool article with golden fingers all the way.

It's nice to read. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is very smooth. The heroine is very three-dimensional. She is strong and brave, kind but not cowardly, smart but not cunning. However, some of the content made my eyes sore. Those heavy pasts are too painful and painful, but I don't think it's not good to write like this. , This past period also allows us to look at the so-called cultivating immortals from the perspective of some real mortals. The current score is too low (how come such a good article is only 6.9 Now), so I will rate it after reading part of it. I hope everyone can read it and read it.

Just casually, I found a new book. It's really good. Come and read it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] The heroine is so miserable. This book opens up the cruel side of the world of immortality from another angle. It's so bitter. He He [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

Very well written! It's not a noob, and the writing is very concise, without any nonsense. Finally, I found a book that didn't go into too many verbose words to explain how awesome the heroine is! Moreover, the ups and downs of the plot seemed to me very reasonable and not abrupt at all. There is no sensational plot that only makes the author "bloody" and makes people get goosebumps. I am very optimistic about the author of this book, come on, come on, come on, please don't finish [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's so good. When I first read it, I felt like the kind of last generation cultivator whose cultivation level is not easy to improve. Now I read the latest chapter. The setting is very special and novel. There are also some foreshadowings in the previous chapters that can be matched. Qinghe gave me the impression of tenacity. I gradually realized that she is very good. She is smart and sharp, and the characters are well created. Despite the hardships in the beginning, what attracted me to keep reading was her determination. Moreover, the author wrote the novel with a female focus, but it was not meant to be like this. There are many female characters, the characters are well created, and the other characters are also very full. The rhythm is also very good, and there are tears. Especially when it describes Qinghe's home being burned down and his relatives dying tragically in front of his eyes, the scene is particularly well written (I actually cried while watching it). It's also refreshing. I've read The Difficulties Before Me again and again in Qinghe, and I feel happy for her. It's well written. Finished spreading flowers ✩*:.˶˃ ᵕ ˂˵ .:*✩ I feel like this book should be considered a low start and a high end. Because when I wrote Ye Xuanji at the beginning, my focus was not right. As I wrote it later, it became more and more exciting and mature. At the beginning, the small events felt not smooth enough. I relied on the author to explain the ending in paragraphs and comments to make it smoother. Later, it got better. This happened rarely and the readability was very strong. Moreover, the characters are very rich, and I really like the feeling that the characters in the novel have flesh and blood.

It's not a brainless piece of writing, and the overall writing style of the article isn't very cheerful either. First of all, Qinghe's character is well drawn, but it may be a bit stiff in the early stages. But the author writes better and better. In thinking again and again, after hesitation again and again, and in making choices again and again, Qinghe's character background is vividly described. Maybe there are people who are like Shisheng who feel that Qinghe is not rational enough and his character is a little flawed. But I think it is precisely Qinghe's longing for his hometown and his trust in his fellow villagers that makes the character "Qinghe" fully appear before our eyes. After all, the original intention of Qinghe Avenue is to survive and take revenge. Secondly, in terms of plot, according to my personal opinion, the plot is not fascinating, but it is worth savoring, like a long stream of water. Her name is Qing He. She is a happy girl, but her hometown was turned into ruins because of the "prodigy". A fire ignited the heart of revenge and lit the lamp that changed the world. We are like the closest people around her who accompany her as she grows up, watching her experience betrayal and still maintain the sincerity in her heart. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I hope Qinghe will go well. I hope the author will also go well.

This book is really about cultivating immortals. The heroine has the desperate and ruthless attitude of the protagonists of ancient immortal novels. Although the characters and plot are very ancient and orthodox, the writing style is not ancient at all and is quite mature. It is worth reading. Although I don't quite agree with some of the author's remarks, pain cannot be compared. There is no need to use some male supporting characters to suffer more than the female protagonist to prove that this article does not abuse women. Whether it is an abuse of the main character or a growth story, everyone can tell with their eyes. I don't understand why the heroine is so afraid and still wants to keep those things. Can't we just deal with them as before? And the code washing water has also been soaked. It can only be understood as memorizing the enemy's token for future confrontation. By the way, it really looks much better after entering the secret realm, Top Wisdom said so. Even though I don't quite understand the heroine's decision-making, I feel that many of the plot twists in this article are a bit blunt.

The author's imagination is so powerful that the world view and spiritual root system are both novel and complete. The overall tone is that of a dark style of cultivating immortals. But in fact, it is closer to a wizard novel under the system of cultivating immortals than a traditional novel about cultivating immortals. People who like the wizard style will most likely like this book.

The heroine is bold and cautious, cautious in doing things, and dares to take risks in difficult situations (I seem to be writing about reading comprehension). The writing is very good, and the emotions are delicate. She does not cheat Kuku from the beginning and reaches an unrivaled state. I look forward to seeing the heroine become bigger and stronger. At present, it seems that there are no clues. It is not a loss to invest in the growth department [love] [full]

It's super good-looking, but it has a cp-less heroine who practices fairy literature. The heroine grows up slowly and becomes stronger along the way. When I first saw that the heroine was lame, I thought it was a bit strange, but later on the foot will gradually improve. The heroine had a hard time in the past, but she gradually got on the right track and matured slowly. Well, I want to continue to see the author maintain the quality and writing. . Super recommended~[shy][shy]

The heroine described by the author has a full personality. Qinghe is a tough person with courage and courage. The teacher's wife is also very good. Although she doesn't show much on her face, she guides Qinghe when she is helpless and confused. Is she a cold-faced and warm-hearted person? I feel that the women in this book are all very good, and I hope the author can finish writing their stories.

This article is about a rising school in the world of immortality. Qinghe was miserable in the early stage, but she grew up a little bit later. Every time she made a mistake, she would fall into eternal disaster. Qinghe survived with only one breath and intelligence. I have to admire her strength and ability to grow in hardships. The master is also very gentle, which warms your heart!

Please read this humiliating poem about women, the author really listens to his advice. Changed some male-oriented words [send heart] [send heart]

Great, the heroine is growing up along the way. It's delicious. I also met a very good friend, Xiao Yue, and a new character. The heroine has a very strong desire to survive. Anyway, the writing is very good. I highly recommend it!

It's been a long time since I've read such an unconventional and refreshing novel. The frame of the story is very large. The heroine slowly cultivates from an ordinary person in a small village to touch the truth and is hurt at the same time. It realistically depicts the cruelty of the world of cultivation, the oppression of large sects, and the sadness of ordinary people. It's really well written, and it's a work that can stand up to careful scrutiny.

From my point of view, there is currently a problem with the male-female ratio in more than 40 chapters. The heroine has a younger brother, and she has more positive feelings for the younger brother. She has a lot of recognition for the male characters in the same village, and she has to admit her relatives even if she takes risks. The writing is good.

It's different from previous articles about cultivating immortals, but it's more relevant and realistic to the world of cultivating immortals I imagined. I might give it a try. I really like this book, so much so that I can't read any other books now, I just want to follow it

Tie—— After reading this book, I read it for two days in a row. I have to say that cultivating immortality is actually a poorly written subject, so I was really surprised when I read this book. I like the author's description of female friendship, and the way the heroine works hard for all fairness in the world after cultivating immortality. It reminded me of a sentence: When a woman has the right to speak, she will not speak just for herself. I hope the author writes better and better! [Blowing kiss]

It's tied. The author's writing is very good and the plot is not laggy. The heroine grows up step by step from Xiaobai and gradually becomes stronger. On the way of growth, she does not forget her true heart and persists in her original determination to become an immortal. Although she had a hard time at the beginning, it did not affect the heroine's original intention to become stronger. She did not collapse when she found out that she was being used as a pawn, and she used the resources around her as much as possible to become stronger. Looking forward to the day when the heroine kills a god, there are only a few good articles in 🍅[Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

A rare writing style among foreign persimmons. The words are gorgeous and he is good at describing the environment to highlight the character. The sense of immersion is very strong. The protagonist's growth path is difficult and tortuous, which is very consistent with the logic of character development. There are reasons for her joys, sorrows and joys. The concept is also great, the protagonist is unyielding and has desires as high as the sky. A man with a heart of stone can also have a heart of chivalry. When describing the heroine's unwillingness to give in, the author is very restrained and rarely gives a positive description. Instead, he allows readers to perceive it through the unfolding of the story.

It's really, really good-looking, but I don't know why it's not popular. It's really hard to watch Qinghe come all the way. She's tough, brave, and kind-hearted. I like her more and more. Falling in love with Qinghe is my destiny.

Simply delicious! Ｏ(≧▽≦)O The heroine is really very real and lovely, with flesh and blood. The little bitter melon heroine, even if life hits her again and again, she still lives as tenaciously as a weed.