Cultivating Immortality in the Wasteland Realm

The author must keep writing!! It's really good to watch, the pacing is well controlled, and there's no boring part along the way. At present, I have read Chapter 63. It is not easy for Qinghe to go all the way. She is completely trying her best to improve her strength. No matter how hard it is, she never thinks of giving up. Many times I marveled at how tough Qinghe was, and I felt sorry for her at the age of fifteen when she was forced to enter this world of cannibalism. Qinghe, with this hard work you will definitely succeed 😢😢😢. The new seedlings will produce the most dazzling fruits.

The writing was very messy at the beginning... First of all, the opening scene of relatives on fire was very flat. Although it took two chapters to foreshadow the protagonist's feelings, it felt a bit awkward. The layers of emotional rendering were not in place. Killing the immortals was messy and easy to kill. Secondly, the events encountered during the escape were very superficial. Characters from the mist jumped out of the clouds. Some semi-good people gave gifts out of nowhere... It started to feel unique and interesting as I wrote it. The protagonist became a corpse collector, and there were actually pubic areas on the corpse that could store things and be used by others. It can be seen that the world constructed is very cruel. You must find treasures after killing people and destroying corpses. Unlike the fairy tales I have read before, they usually have storage bags and need to go through spiritual consciousness and so on. This article feels more like a dark wizard system. I feel that the author may like to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, always pretending to be the first or second level of Qi Lian. In fact, I feel that this kind of cultivation is more eye-catching, plus her characteristics of being lame... The disguise is more conspicuous. Fortunately, I met the master wife later to make up for this (although I don't know why no one noticed it before) After the secret realm, we can see that the author's writing skills are getting better and better. Friends who want to read it can insist on reading the chapters after the secret realm. The heroine's character is gradually being written. It is a very interesting orthodox fairy tale. Chapter 126 has been read so far

There is a sense of elegance and elegance in reading early fairy tales. It is very realistic, not sloppy, the plot is very tight, and the heroine has a strong sense of being. She is describing an ordinary person's struggle to survive and to let himself know that there is such a place in the Zaoyuan, because when his hometown was destroyed, he was still a junior in the countryside. Children who have grown up and have not experienced too many evil things are still kind and honest in their inner nature, and cannot completely ignore some things. Even if they keep describing the cruelty of cultivating immortals, between common people and monks, between casual cultivators and sect monks, they can still see the goodness between human nature. There is a sense of fighting against injustice, a bottom line, sympathy and empathy for the weak, but he does not act blindly, he has a brain, and a clear growth path, and he is not invincible or extremely vulnerable. The descriptions of everyone in it are very three-dimensional. There are no pure good people and no pure evil people. The complex three-dimensionality of people is clearly written.

Beautiful! It's a rare female channel to watch the dark fairy tale. I feel that the heroine's family and family are destroyed and her struggle to survive is very similar to that of the male channel's ancient fairy tales. It is rare to see such a cruel and real world of immortality, but I feel that the writing is right, and it gives the feeling of the jungle being eaten by the strong! It should be a long story! Come on! Oh, yes, the author is a man who writes about teenage boys, so he pays great attention to these things! Fine! Those who were insulted were also men ( The descriptions of those sect disciples who are arrogant are really arrogant. They do not treat other people as human beings... They treat others as ants, and the following are ants themselves. The description is very real...

It's very nice to watch. Although the front is a bit boring, the back, after arriving at Black Rock City, is particularly beautiful. The main characters are all female, and the descriptions of the characters are very good, and the plot is compact and interesting. The characters are not described in a too stereotyped manner, and in many places I thought they were men but they were clearly written as women. It is a very friendly book. I don't know if there are any recommendations for this type of book. I haven't been able to find it on Tomato.

Very good, keep writing. Nowadays, most of the female videos on cultivating immortality are cool and funny, and too stereotyped. This book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air. The plot arrangement is very good and can arouse the readers' interest. As long as you refine it more, there is basically no problem. However, I feel that the first few chapters are a bit too thin. I feel that the protagonist's childhood can be detailed. It may also be that the author is afraid that readers will not be able to read it. The main reason is that you write later. The protagonist has a certain understanding of the world of immortality. You can also add a little teaching from the protagonist's mother to her in the front. Also, in the previous battle between the two immortal cultivators, the details of their fight should be described more, because the protagonist can kill them, which shows that he is already very weak. (Maybe I wrote a little too much in the review) Later on, I think the plot arrangement is quite good, except for the part about breaking into the secret realm. The group of geniuses are a bit stupid. Logically speaking, they shouldn't be. They were raised by a sect family since they were young, so they have to have some brains. Unless the world view is quite big, this is just a corner of the world of cultivating immortals. Later, as for Elder Jindan, even if his cultivation level is almost gone, he should still have some fatal methods. Okay, this book actually has many advantages. It is a good book that I came across after reading the book "I Caught the Whole Realm of Cultivation to Cry". Check it out and cheers for the author.

The character of the heroine is well portrayed. She is very resolute and brave. It may be because of the early period. Her life was too hard. I hope there will be some opportunities to change the heroine's current situation in the future. Don't be too cheating.

It's very interesting. Every aspect of the heroine is so appealing to me. The author's clever ideas in the article are also very good (such as "heroine"). I really like this book. I hope the author can keep writing 💕

Xu Qinghe, the protagonist of Grass Roots, is a green grass that can thrive even in mud. This is not an assembly line cool article. There was no protection from the sect, no chance from heaven, and he was on the run all the way, picking up corpses to collect spiritual stones to find treasures, and leveling up step by step, everyone went from chasing and killing to fawning and vying for them. This kind of resilience that does not rely on plug-ins and relies on one's own efforts is more addictive than reading a cool article with golden fingers all the way.

It's nice to read. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is very smooth. The heroine is very three-dimensional. She is strong and brave, kind but not cowardly, smart but not cunning. However, some of the content made my eyes sore. Those heavy pasts are too painful and painful, but I don't think it's not good to write like this. , This past period also allows us to look at the so-called cultivating immortals from the perspective of some real mortals. The current score is too low (how come such a good article is only 6.9 Now), so I will rate it after reading part of it. I hope everyone can read it and read it.