Starting from the Deputy Commander of the Soldier Assault

Very good, the descriptions are quite good. Except for a little bit of criticism, there are some people in the comment area who are not very smart. They say that technical talents should go to the field army. Isn't this a soldier assault fan novel? Then why don't they go to Steel 7th Company? Don't go to Lao A. He writes chicken-feather soldier assault fan novels. There are too many bad reviews because of joining the special forces. I would like to ask him here if he writes soldier assault fan fiction. If he doesn't join the Seventh Steel Company and doesn't join Lao A, then what's the point of reading soldier assault fan fiction? If you write a fanfic and then don't interact with the protagonist or even be in the same place with the protagonist, what's the point of this fanfic? If you want to read about military officers so much, why don't you just read military stories instead of reading fan fiction instead of Lao A's?

4 Stars. The overall writing is quite good, but there is too much popular science. I always look for the main text in the popular science. It is good to have popular science, but there is too much popular science about certain institutions and units. One popular science chapter only has 2 or 3 chapters, and as many as 5 or 6 chapters. It's so uncomfortable to listen to the book.

It looks good, but you can only watch it while jumping! In this fast-paced life, I wanted to read a book to relax, but the author added a lot of popular science stuff in it, trying to teach me something! If I had the patience to study, I wouldn't be sitting here reading novels!

Nice! ! The writing is really good. It's right not to write about emotional drama. People come to Soldier Assault fan fiction because they want to read the military life related to the TV series. It's really good to read the latest chapters in one go. Please keep updating the author! !

It's very beautiful, but I think the rating is low. The male protagonist has a likable image, and is rare to be the deputy company commander from the beginning. The setting of Old A is also very good, mainly in the form of advanced blue army, which is used for military exercises to promote military reform. Some articles are not dedicated to special forces. After reading this update in the morning, I found another one with high ratings. That one is too cool. The protagonist is also from Old A, and several people They directly wiped out the Lone Wolf AB team on Xiaozhuang's side. The difference between the two special operations teams was too great, and Old A was from the Beijing area. After receiving the order, he took a helicopter for more than an hour to the border to support Xiaozhuang and the others who were surrounded by poisonous shells in some village. This should be the southwest border. It was like rubbing the little brain that was left after being stored. I couldn't watch anymore. This book is still good to read, but it's a pity that it's not enough to read!

This book has a female protagonist! ! ! In about 400 chapters, her name is Gu Xiaonan. Apart from the heroine, everything else is great. This book doesn't have many cheats for the male protagonist, and overall it doesn't seem very brainless or slap-in-the-face plot, which makes the reader feel comfortable. However, after more than 400 chapters, it starts to become uninteresting, because now I have read 511 chapters, and I have read every chapter or so. After listening to the book, the first 400 or so chapters mainly revolve around the 7th Steel Company and the special forces, which is very interesting, but starting from around 450 chapters, the female protagonist appears. Although the emotional scenes are not particularly big, there are quite a few, and during this period, the male protagonist also began to become a civilian officer. The promotion was over-promoted, and I felt a bit bored anyway. I think the later chapters may not have the same passionate and warm feeling as before, so I am planning to abandon the novel now, but if there is a shortage of books in the future, I will still come back and pick up some chapters without emotional scenes to continue reading. However, I still sincerely recommend everyone to read this book. At least there is no trace of the heroine in the first four hundred chapters. The author's portrayal of the Seventh Steel Company is really good, whether it is the portrayal of the Seventh Steel Company's spirit of never giving up or the interpretation of this spirit by Xu Sanduo, Wu Liuyi and Gaocheng. I feel that it will be difficult for me to find such delicious military literature in the future [face covering]

It's very close to the actual writing, not that outrageous, and it's very nice.

After reading it for so long, the book is very normal. Those who have watched the soldiers attack will miss it even more. The writing style is humorous and interesting, not stiff. I originally reserved 93 chapters for further development, but I am afraid that I will run out of them. The author must promise us that no matter what the results of this book will be later, you will continue to write like this. To the end, don't end it hastily. If you take it with your heart, it will definitely reward you. After all, you have fulfilled my regret. Shi Jin, I also cried when I saw Gao Cheng gave him a white rabbit to see Tiananmen. Xu Mumu is really useless as a squad leader, but he is still a good squad leader [crying]

The rating is indeed low! The writing is very good, but there are a lot of vernacular (annotations) that have nothing to do with the plot. Most of the readers on Tomato still read cool articles and have little patience. Five stars are given, cheers for the author! ! !

The author's writing is quite good. This book belongs to the general public and can be read.

The framework of a film and television drama, but the pattern is very large, which is good

I found a small amount of plots in a large amount of military knowledge.

The framework route is pretty good Every explanation that is interspersed in the middle can be listed in two separate chapters. I often read it off track and how to catch my eye. Equipment data explanation, historical record explanation, position explanation, material explanation, there really is no need to write it like this, you have to skip ahead to read it.

This book is written more realistically without too many distractions. I like it.

It has flesh and blood, a little cheating but not too outrageous, it has ideals and a life, the protagonist has stronger abilities than ordinary people, and there are people in life who can achieve such abilities, which gives people hope! Fine

I deleted the previous comments myself because after seeing the back of the Recruit Company, I found that there were a lot of mistakes in the first part and all the details were inappropriate. However, it started to get better in the second part. The embarrassing and unbearable writing was greatly improved. The writing power suddenly improved. Several characters were created with the flavor of the original work. The original plot design in the later part was also quite reasonable, so I deleted it and re-evaluated it. The first part of "Recruit Company" is indeed rated at 2 and a half stars, but the subsequent plot is worth five stars. The author actually did not follow the trend of Tomatoes. Usually they start to collapse the plot in the second half. I look forward to the follow-up. If the author can delete the previous plot after writing, the score will probably be higher.

This is the least OOC book I have ever read among the Soldier Assault fanfics. The author maintains a relatively calm observation and judgment on all the characters. He is not too personal and has a high level of military literacy. The brotherhood of the Seventh Steel Company is very delicate. All the people who should be saved are saved. However, there is too much science in the later stage. It can be skipped without using so much science and writing in detail.

The analysis is quite reasonable. It can be seen that they are trying to keep Shi Jin alive, not a nanny story. Moreover, fan text is about the interaction with the original characters. If all the original characters are thrown aside, then what else is there to read? Not all eyes are focused on the protagonist. The original characters are still brilliant, and the author has also added some characters that are also distinctive.

Reading the comments, many people said that the protagonist's going to Old A would affect the upper limit. I wasn't planning to read it, but Shuhuang took a look at it. The author's setting is more reasonable. Old A in the book is similar to Zhu Ri and Lan Jun. Old A is the springboard for the protagonist, and he becomes the commander of the synthetic battalion after he comes out.

It's actually pretty good-looking, very real, and not too cumbersome.

I was about to catch up with the update, but I was a little bit reluctant to give it up. Just then, the heroine came out. It seemed that she was going to have a long-form role. It was very good. I can say goodbye with peace of mind.

The writing is very good. They are all interesting things from the time when I was in the army. Please update them quickly. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Full of details! It simply enriches the soldier's assault, makes it more realistic, increases readability, and makes the story more exciting! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I have carefully read the author of "Soldier Assault", and the writing style is good, and there is not much to worry about.

A very good book, adapted from the theme of "Soldier Assault". Very creative and exciting, the author has great ideas, support [like]

The writing is simple and engaging. It's really good. The score is low.

It's a very good military article. I read in the comments that many people don't like to read popular science, but I'm lucky. If I've never been in the military, I'm quite willing to read it so that I don't have to look it up myself. In my opinion, it ranks at the top of the Soldier Assault fan fiction. I don't know why the score is lower, but I personally feel that the score is low. Come on, author, don't be fooled [salute]

After seeing more than 150 pictures, I couldn't help but comment. The author's writing style is very good, and the story he tells is also eloquent. It is not OOC at all and the protagonist is not Xu Sanduo's nanny, although some people say it. There are some areas in this article that are not good, but they are all popular science. I think it is quite interesting and there is no system. All the results are obtained by the protagonist's own test. It is a really interesting article and you can learn a lot of military science in it.

Read slowly, read slowly.

Not bad, the score is too low now