Please Clear the White Text Quickly! It's Best Not to Collapse the Character.
As the title says, it's best not to ruin the character. If it's really good-looking, it's okay to break the character design. Both men and women are welcome. It doesn't matter if you have CP or not, but it doesn't have to be all about love. Family, friends, country, passers-by who were deceived by the original person, etc.
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The author's writing is beautiful, the emotional line is not abrupt, it is a kind of long-term flow, and you can really feel the love between each other from the words. I personally think the author's emotional line is very good, mainly because I like this kind of subject. I like this kind of article written by the author. This is the first time I have seen this kind of system that has a retrospective effect. The text does not mention [shy] too much. I really like this setting. Then the author's introduction said it is fine-tuning. Actually, I didn't see it. I don't know if the article has been changed. Of course, the writing is generally very good. The author must not stop updating o>_<o! ! !
The five-star rating is because I think it is not easy for the author to write. But the first world looked really good at first, but then I always felt very uncomfortable. The uncomfortable point is because I really don't understand that the first world has been mainly writing about cooking and staying at home. It feels very boring and has no other occasions. It also feels like there is no work to do. It feels strange. In the end, I explained a little but very little, and the author did not write too much. Generally speaking, it is a story about chasing a wife in the crematorium. I looked at the label and focused on it. The writing is good if you come here with the tags of "mutual love" and "main focus", but you should read it carefully. If you like chasing your wife in the crematorium, you can rush it without thinking! I wish you the better as you write [Like]
Just for World 2, I give it 5 stars. Redemption is always a depressing topic. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to describe ordinary but warm daily life, interspersed with regrets from the past life, regrets about the fall of genius, and silence in despair and madness. The companion's lack of regrets leaves a strong mark, but it cannot save the dead soul, and the love is obscure, resulting in a lose-lose outcome for both parties. So the reborn person has an epiphany and gets a new life. The person who loves deeply is not weak. The two hearts finally get closer and return their love. Even if I was unhappy in my previous life, I don't regret loving you. Dr. Song's tolerant and selfless love healed the scarred Shen Yanren. I really burst into tears when I saw Shen Yanren's new life later. Love is really great.
There may be some shortcomings, but they can be ignored. Both Ranran and Xiaoxian are two very good babies. Both parties are working hard in their own way. I have just finished reading the first plane and I think it is very good. The main emotional line is very delicate in some places and is quite tear-jerking. If you don't hit the right mark or don't love the baby, please treat it rationally and quit by yourself. Keep up the good work, baby. [Sending heartfelt messages] [Blowing kisses]
The author's writing is excellent. And I also like the writing. It's very bland, but I can't explain it. Anyway, it's very interesting.
I might want to ask, are the protagonists the same in all worlds, and what will the final ending be like?
It looks really good, but the result is gone [crying] The author will update soon!
The author's writing is excellent! ! !
Very beautiful, great
The world of Butler is very beautiful.
Not bad, the water flows slowly
So beautiful, I like it very much
This book is really well written, better than some of the Tomato articles. The author has his own writing style, and the story is well narrated and very interesting!
The author's writing style is quite good, and the flow is long and smooth. However, every time he does not introduce what happened in his previous life at the beginning, he has to read and piece together the story by himself. I don't like this very much. The writing is good and the characters are okay, but it seems a bit frustrating to watch.
Every world is beautiful. I have a lot to say but don't know how to express it. I hope it will be updated soon. I really like it. 🥳
The writing is pretty good, but not many people read it. Come on!