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What attracts people is the subject matter, but what retains people is the details. The main plot is very clear and encourages people to keep watching. The character design and performance are not like those of a novice. The fighting scenes are not perfect but sufficient. It can be seen that a lot of care has been taken to shape the world and the history of the world. The world view is not big but the plot is compact. Killing monsters and upgrading is not a grind, having potential and bloodline can be activated quickly, and bloodline activation is not monotonous and has foreshadowing, which makes it reasonable. A short preparation, and it is expected to go directly to the high speed. Very well written [like]

The writing is very good. I really like the heroine Bai Yueguang. I look forward to when Bai Yueguang is caught and dyed into other colors! ! !

It's a very good book, except that few people have read it [laughs] Will the author plan to write about the heartwarming daily life of Ella and Aya gradually corrupting Nora, or will she write about chasing his wife in the crematorium [laughter]

It's beautiful, a Western fantasy lily, so rare, and it's still a sandwich biscuit (original, with a black belly and a white nun). Delicious pinch. Then I ask 2 questions and hope the author can help clarify the doubts. 1. Is it Shuangjie (I hope the author doesn't mind, I've been disgusted before) 2. He or be @pick up summer glutinous rice balls

Hmm~ It's very delicious. It gives me the feeling of watching a dark alternate world drama. The heroine is kind but not a virgin. She is powerful (so much so that the enemies are afraid of her near-death counterattack) and thoughtful. The two daughters also become lovers as they wish (heroine:?)

Personally, I think the writing is good, the emotional description is a bit lacking, the twists are a bit stiff, the world setting has foreshadowing, and it revolves around the changes of the protagonist. The story is relatively clear, and I have the desire to read on.

The psychological description is very good. I look forward to the nun being brutally raped.

The worldview is small but detailed, the text is delicate and engaging, and the rhythm is smooth and silky. These are the uncompromising advantages of this book. But the most attractive thing is the characters and the subject matter. The angel who is imprisoned by the dense darkness blooms the glory of the saint in the dilemma; the witch who is twisted by selfish desires and worldly oppression creates a heavy but sincere love... Kougua, I want to see this Kouya!

The author is really full of energy [face covering] can write so well [love] [like] I have read three chapters of this book, after all, there are not many chapters yet, but I still feel it is quite good. The writing makes people look forward to the plot behind it.

This book has a complete world view, and the three-dimensional and emotional descriptions of the characters are delicate. Fight when you need to fight, and talk about love when you need to talk about love. This shows that the author has a good grasp of the balance between fighting and daily life. Send a five-star review to encourage the author It's so beautiful, good luck to the author. (The following is a complaint) I don't know what the reviewer had in mind. Is the plot of this book very explicit? No, it's much better than the book I read, The Scumbag Succubus. The author's other works are also very good and a potential stock, but for some reason it's not popular. Even if it's not popular, the reviewer still puts this book in a dark room. Doesn't this make things worse? This book is already the one with the best data among all the author's works. Please don't mess with the review. I really don't want to see such a high-quality author and book die suddenly.

Okay, okay, I haven't written a book review for a long time, but there is one part that really made me applaud. When I was replaced by Nora during the reunion, I really didn't like the feeling of coercion and "betrayal". It was very uncomfortable to read, but I didn't expect it later. The story is drawn from the bond between the mother of two little cats and Nora. It is cleverly written that Nora's subsequent passion is voluntary, not hypnotic. It is very good. I am very happy to watch it [Adoration] [Adoration] [Like] [Like] It makes the grudge in my heart disappear. And I originally thought about how to write just this little, but this writing style is indeed right in terms of update speed and quality. It's okay.

It's this kind of plot, it's so delicious😋 I like watching this feeling of discovering a problem but not being able to look back! Also, being active as an author can indeed increase readers' interest in reading. I hope the author won't write too big a break. After all, it is a bad deed [shy]

It's very delicious, full of details, I can't get enough of it. A full-level boss has come to Tomato to open a new fish account [laughing]

This is a work that left a deep impression on me, but it's a pity that it was forced to end. When the two little cats had to leave Nora and flee to Brookwood Town, the people who helped along the way may have been because of Seraphina, but I was deeply impressed by Aunt Martha, the drunken Roy in the tavern, and other guests who were unwilling to betray information. When being chased by the Holy See, President Raymond could actually be said to have done his best to help them as much as he could. Roy and Hank, who appeared when they were escaping again, had nothing to do with the matter but still stood up for the weak. Even Uncle Balk in the end was willing to use himself to deflect danger and protect the two little ones. The work was forced to end. Maybe these supporting characters who only appeared in a few chapters have died, or there may be a description of them in chapters that cannot be updated, but the appearance of these passing heroes left a sincere monologue in my heart about this work.

After reading it, I felt that it was very, very, very good to read. The only question is, can the author update 100 chapters a day?

The writing is very good, I like Western fantasy themes

The overall writing style is good, the logic of the storyline generally makes sense, and the wording and sentence construction are relatively good, but some content such as the change of scenes is a bit stiff, and the protagonist's behavior of adopting two sisters is a bit abrupt. The source of the twisted emotions of the two sisters towards the protagonist is logically reasonable, but the description is too little and seems a bit abrupt. More descriptions of the twisted emotions can be used to make it appear more real. There is a relatively complete line of emotional improvement. It can be said that the future is promising, and I hope the author will write more and more in the future (personal opinion)

Although I don't know if other readers have read better books, among the novels I have read, it is a book that is very careful about the integration of two-way redemption and yandere. It may not be detailed about the battle, but the transition is comfortable and the emotional line is clearly focused. It is worth looking forward to.

It's so delicious, why don't you just like it?

Originating on December 12, 2025 and ending on January 16, 2026.

I just entered the dark room too many times and was forced to finish it early.

It's a pity, it's rare to read a book about Lily Harem

It's super beautiful and touching. Please give me a lot of support from the author and keep updating ᖰ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ᖳ

Fried Chicken is great to watch, and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot.

It's so delicious, I would rate this book as a fairy tale. As evidenced by my reading time on Yangshizi, the time I spent reading on other platforms in the past was neither high nor low. This book definitely ranks in the top ten. Very comfortable character naming, ups and downs of the plot... Etc. In every sense of the word, this is "my novel in mind" Please come on!

It's fun to watch, the plot is not draggy, the characters are likable, and the plot is all there is to it.

Will the mothers of the two heroines in the back be resurrected [laughing]

A rare subject matter, but very beautiful. The heroine has top-notch fighting skills, and each chapter of the author has about 4,000 words. Such good books are rare anymore, and it is still a hundred years old. I hope it will not be banned😋😋😋

The writing is very delicate and beautiful

Beautiful, the writing is natural and smooth