My Adopted Sister Went from Being Angry to Falling in Love with Me

It is still a masterpiece of tomatoes that no one knows about. The author uses a plain language to describe the daily interactions between many brothers and sisters, and lovingly describes the love between relatives. During the reading process, people will unconsciously think of the relationship between themselves and their family members. It is so affectionate that it is difficult to let go.

It's okay, but it's easy to get discouraged in the first chapter, and then you'll slowly become addicted. Especially the younger sister began to gradually accept her brother and family, and she couldn't stop at all. Come on, author [Admiration][Admiration] Author, I feel so bad [crying][crying], the title of the book is so annoying that I like the end and it's just the beginning. Can I open a volume and write a college chapter [crying][crying][crying]

First of all, I commend the author for being able to maintain a clear stream among so many demons and ghosts in tomatoes. Some people say it is watery and artificial, but it is actually the author's gradual progress of emotions. However, the author is still quite literary. If you don't read this book slowly, you won't be able to feel the author's feelings. So I hope the author can describe less emotional details. Some people can accept the author's writing style, but there are still some people who can't accept it. The author describes the psychological activities of the heroine in too much detail. I can only see the attitude of the hero from the perspective of the heroine. This reading mode is too uncomfortable. When reading this book, you really have to think about what kind of person the male protagonist is and what his attitude towards the female protagonist is like doing reading comprehension. However, I really can't bring in the female protagonist because this is a male-oriented book, and the male protagonist should lead the emotional details of the female protagonist. I hope the author can add more feelings about the male protagonist, instead of part of it being all male protagonists, and then part of it being all female protagonists. It seems to be very balanced, but it is too deliberately balanced. It is a good book, but it is not suitable for fast-food reading. The author's writing is very good, but it must be received where it should be received, otherwise it will be difficult to retain readers in Tomato.

Terribly sorry! ! The first volume brought a bad reading experience to readers. I have made adjustments in the following volumes. Please support me! Must! Must! Please keep reading to the end, please please QAQ

It's good, but the foreshadowing is too long. Very few people in Tomato watch such long foreshadowing.

Ya, the advantages are Ya, the shortcomings are also Ya The advantage is that the details are very well described, the psychological description is very good, and the writing is elegant and elegant. The shortcoming is that it is too elegant. The first part and the first half of the second part are too boring due to the overly elegant description and lack of some intense interactions. But as a new author, I feel that I have already written very well. I hope the author can optimize his writing style and produce better works! [Blowing kiss] Well, what can I say? I have also read the epilogue and the entire book. There are good and bad points. The good thing is that it is detailed. The bad point is that compared to traditional Japanese light novels and traditional online novels like Tomato, it is a kind of mixture but not thorough. It is a little awkward to read. Although I can understand the ending and agree with the author's ending, in my heart I still want to see an ending that determines the relationship. Even if you don't write about the experience, only the result. Summary, good book, recommended!

It is really a good book, very delicate, just like Japanese light novels. The changes in emotions and the connections between people are not superficial. Each of the first 7 chapters is more than 10,000 words, and it is very immersive when reading. The author has to do a big job. The number of words in each subsequent chapter is only three or four thousand. It may be that long chapters are not popular on the platform. I really recommend everyone to read it. Slow down and read it bit by bit.

The description is very delicate and very real. If there are contradictions, I can tell them directly without any stomachache. This is my favorite type. Come on, the author [laughing] [laughing]

Beautiful, detailed description

The author is so strong, each page contains so many words