Many Children, Many Blessings, I Gave Birth to Gods and Demons Wildly on the Front Line

It's okay, but the plot is a little draggy, and the character of the protagonist makes me like it sometimes and dislike it, which is quite complicated. Generally speaking, it should be that in the process of shaping the protagonist, the protagonist's behavior often reveals an image, which is very similar to the comments section of some Internet sisters in the videos I watched. They are full of emotions, have no baggage, and speak freely. I can't say that this kind of character is bad, but it just gives people the impression that it has no depth and no connotation. Moreover, as soon as the idea comes up, I start to let myself go, and then I firmly believe in my idea and make up my mind. This will give people a bad feeling such as impetuousness, thoughts coming out all at once, three-minute heat, and uncoordinated speech, etc., And I really despise some people around me. It's not that the protagonist is poorly portrayed, there are good points, but the bad feelings are a bit distracting. There is not much else to say. This is the only thing that personally makes me feel the most. The writing is quite good. The subject is childbirth. You can focus more on the attraction of men to the protagonist and the personal growth of the protagonist. As for children, try to portray them in a way that is beneficial to the protagonist. If the plot always writes about children It is difficult for readers to like this kind of child if the character causes trouble, and it is also difficult to agree with the protagonist's approach of patting the butt every time and forgetting it. If the phantom bear child and the bear parent insist on adding a child role, then teach them well, rather than obeying with the excuse of overflowing emotional love for the child and motherly love. The above are just suggestions, not a writing guide, just personal feelings about the article.

It's a very interesting story about cultivating immortals and giving birth to children. The heroine is so strong that she won't be abused very much. I hope I won't abuse the heroine in the future, and let the heroine keep doing this all the time. There's also a male protagonist named Quan Jie.

There is no need to deliberately highlight the importance of the heroine, it is better to be plain. According to the previous description, Zifujing is very powerful and can be used as a clone. Why does the heroine need to be asked to look at the station when going to find the junior sister? Isn't there someone in such a big sword pavilion who is in the early stage of the Golden Core?

Looks better than expected! My imagination is so wide open that I can't imagine how it will develop next. The plot is written with great care and it's so smooth that I can't stop watching it. It has been on the bookshelf for a long time and I read it when I got the chance. I was afraid that the author would cheat me and I quickly reviewed it. [Make faces] I wonder if there will be a Shura field later, and the male protagonists will know Zaizai's reaction! I feel like I could write a long story, and it's very immersive to level up and fight monsters all the way. I'll save it and look forward to the next one! [Blowing kiss]

I really like this article. The heroine does things neatly, at least as far as I can see now. I hope she will be like this in the future without being disturbed. Emotions and other things are just floating clouds. Strength comes first. I am fascinated by those tool men [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's very interesting and a relatively new novel about cultivating immortals and giving birth to children. Please keep updating.

It looks good, the heroine is very smart, I hope the heroine will become strong and take revenge soon

Updates are a bit slow. There are no emotional scenes, and there are very few plots about babies. Most of them are about the heroine upgrading, fighting monsters, and being in danger, just like watching male videos about cultivating immortals [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Looks good, but not enough to read

It's a nice and comfortable article [blowing kiss]

It's the one with the Pisces jade pendant, it makes people laugh non-stop, hahahaha, the author is very talented.

It's worth watching, nothing bad about it

Good looking author, cheers!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Faster, faster, faster, faster

It's too short. It's so short that it's shocking.

It's very good, but the word count is too few now, so I have to keep it up

It's cool, but I haven't updated it even though I have a lot of rest time.

It looks good, but updates are too slow. [Like this post] [Like this post] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

The story has a natural rhythm and is not pieced together or dragged out.

The expression is smooth, the plot is compact, and it doesn't feel like the word count is crammed. It's good.

The plot has ups and downs, is relatively novel, and integrates multiple elements. It is quite interesting among childbirth novels.

The writing has a few minor flaws, but overall it's pretty good, and there's nothing too bad about it.

It's beautiful and very enjoyable. Everyone gave it 5 stars! ! ! ! !

A very good article about Xiuxian Shengzi.

The plot in the book is fast-paced and the story is rich in content.

So far it looks pretty good, it doesn't feel too exaggerated or boring.