The Red Mansion: the Social Terror Traveler and the Twelve Beauties of Jinling

The idea is good, novel enough [laughing] But are you sure your male protagonist is afraid of society? Even if he becomes bold after drinking, it feels like Long Aotian is collecting the gold hairpin in his harem. He speaks clearly and well, and arranges it well. He is not afraid of society at all.

The writing is quite interesting. His surname is neither Jia nor Lin, and he doesn't have to be the emperor's dog. The protagonist can do whatever he wants and go wherever he wants. One point will be deducted for updates that are too slow and too infrequent.

I like solipsism very much. I like the type of solipsism. There are too few of them. It's very cool and the details in some books are also well written. For example, the description of clothes is directly generated by AI using the author's description because the description is in place and it is particularly restored.

Be quick and ruthless towards Jia Baoyu. Give it five stars. Some books like the plot of Jia Baoyu's flirting and flirting.

What should I say? The feeling of being alone is very well written. I have also seen other people's bad reviews. There is a bit too much pulling and pulling about Baoyu and should be deleted. About Daiyu, what should I say? Maybe the author's filter is too thick and he is too kind and doting on her. I can accept it and treat her so well when we get along later, but I can't accept the filter of the book to treat her inexplicably.

12 Golden Hairpin Judgment Lin Daiyu/Xue Baochai: It's a pity that the virtue of stopping is pity for Yongxu's talent. Jade belts hang in the forest, gold hairpins are buried in the snow. Jia Yuanchun: After twenty years of distinguishing right from wrong, the pomegranate blossoms illuminate the palace. The three springs are competing for the first spring scene, and the tiger and the tiger meet and return to the big dream. Jia Tanchun: Talent comes from being shrewd and ambition comes from being high, and he was born in the last days when his luck has declined. I shed tears on the Qingming Festival and look out to the riverside. The east wind thousands of miles away is just a dream away. Shi Xiangyun: What's the point of wealth and honor? Parents disobey them when they are still young. Open your eyes and hang the slanting light, the water of Xiangjiang River passes by and Chu Yunfei flies away. Miaoyu: If you want to be clean, you will never be clean. The clouds are not necessarily empty. Poor gold and jade, eventually sinking into the mud. Jia Yingchun: My son is a Zhongshan wolf, and he will run rampant when he succeeds. The golden boudoir flower and willow quality will last for a long time. Jia Xichun: It has been discovered that the spring scenery does not last long, and the clothes suddenly change from the makeup of the past. Poor embroidered household girl, lying alone next to the ancient Buddha with a green lantern. Wang Xifeng: All birds come from the end of the world, and they all know how to admire this talent. One follower and two people make three people dead, crying to Jinling is even more sad. Sister Jia Qiao: If the situation is defeated, leave Yungui. If the family is destroyed, don't talk about relatives. Occasionally, I met a benefactor due to the help of the Liu family. Li Wan: The spring breeze of peaches and plums has finished bearing fruit, but in the end they are like a pot of orchids. Like ice water, it is empty and jealous, and it is useless to joke with others. Qin Keqing: Love in the sky, love in the sea, and love in the body, when love meets, it will lead to lust. Even if you gossip and dishonor, you will be honored, but the beginning of the quarrel is actually peaceful.

It's okay and quite novel, but there's no need to hit Lin Daiyu so hard [face covering] [OK].

It's fun, it looks good, and it's so rare. Author, please update. Have you considered developing it in the direction of Harem Grand View Garden?

The writing is pretty good, and I probably guessed that the author probably wanted to focus on conquering Lin Daiyu as the main plot, and the other golden hairpins as branch plots. Mainly if I want to capture Lin Daiyu, and if I have a mutual affection for Jia Baoyu, it is basically impossible to get her to be full of affection. Of course, if you don't care about your heart, that's a different matter. In fact, it is still very well-written, and I am looking forward to the author's follow-up. I just hope that the protagonist can have more roles, so that there will be a better sense of immersion.

I like the theme of the Fourth Natural Disaster, which is about doing whatever they want. However, in the middle period, the male protagonist's appearance rate is not high, the male protagonist's tolerance is too high, Daiyu Taizuo, Wang Xifeng is hard to describe, and other small points can be tolerated. After all, this is the first time I have seen this kind of plot.

The writing is quite good, but a little lacking.

In line with the thinking of a normal time traveler, he is submissive even if he has the ability. What do you need ability for? Collection addiction +1

So far I feel pretty good, except for some awkward places, but it's really novel. Your plot is too confusing later on. How did you do it? The number of chapters is correct, but your plot is very confusing and the plot doesn't match up. The AI is confused, right?

I'm curious about how the author will write [what] in the future

The needle didn't poke. I thought it was AI at first, but it turned out it wasn't, and it was just a little short and weak. The author started to argue [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Okay, okay, you can do whatever you want, don't be a dog and don't scheming.

There are currently 46 chapters, everything is fine, but if you, Ldy, can't do it well, you'll either have to stop thinking about it or kill it. I'll leave a comment after I finish reading it. The protagonist's role is a little less. Although the blood is drunk, I suggest that it is better to give it up and kill him.

It's good to watch. I've seen too many stories about climbing from the bottom or about becoming an official. This kind of story about the backyard is very good. After all, isn't this what the fans of The Red Mansion are about, changing their bad tragedies?

Very perverted. It was so funny. It was so fun to watch it at night. The author should feel comfortable writing about himself. It's a pity that it turned into AI later. It's so wrong and I don't know how to adjust the AI ​​properly.

🐮, First time seeing this kind of creativity

It is simply full of secular authority. Everyone yearns for this but hates it, because the person involved is not me.

Tomato Red Mansion has not been written from this point of view, and the characters' personalities are basically right. It's fun to watch.

I've never seen Red Mansions written like this, but it's quite cool.

It's okay to write, I hope you can maintain continuity and quality. I'll keep reading this book first

Updates are too slow. The writing is very beautiful. It is rare to have the power of an immortal but not to be a dog to the emperor. It is very rare not to be polite when meeting the emperor!

Goldfinger is unparalleled and decisive in his actions. The supporting role of Qingwen is outstanding.

The subject matter is very interesting and the writing is very interesting, but there is a problem with the update. If you spend three days fishing and two days surfing the Internet, one point will be deducted [Thinking]

It feels like it was written by a female author. All kinds of emotions are so delicate. N. B.

Okay, I've never seen this written before

Very nice. Love it. Super nice.