Shangxian 1: This Brother Is Too Difficult to Be a Brother.

The plot is good and the writing is good, but some settings are not right. Yuanyi is not the successor of Sun Breath, but the founder of Sun Breath. All breathing methods are derived from Sun Breath. Enichi only taught everyone the breathing technique after joining the Demon Slayer Squad, so the chapter mentioned that if Yan Sheng's master also used the breathing technique, he would be invincible, which is wrong. There is also the mother of the step brothers, who seems to have been forgotten, but this role is quite important in the story line of the step brothers. Yan Sheng knew that his mother died of illness in the end, and he should save his mother after rebirth.

The teacher's writing is very good, the characters are not very OOC, the written life is very ordinary and sweet, Jiguo Yansheng is not so paranoid in this article, this is really the lifestyle that I want Jiguo Yansheng and Jiguo Enichi, the sun and the moon should shine together [love] [cry]

The writing is very good and sweet, and it made my body feel warm after reading it. Although I am looking forward to the plot of the Infernal Affairs Plan later, the author should have a reason for ending it like this. Maybe this ending where everyone knows that they will win is the best ending? (PS: There is no malice, no planned plot, I am actually relieved. Although I know it is fake, the two little bitter gourds, the original work is so bitter, let me read some fan fiction to sweeten it!!!)

It's good to read, but I feel like it's impossible to put Yan Sheng down or look away, so I always feel weird when reading the article.

The writing is very good, but the main thing is that some parts may not be consistent with the original series (if you don't mind, you can read it). In addition, the ending is a very open oe (the subsequent plot is not written, it is very open oe) and Yan Sheng really let go of his obsession in this book (it is very open, and he can even be proud of his younger brother). The two brothers live happily like this. (A very good brotherly love makes me spin) There is a love line, but it is secondary, maybe a little more passionate...? (Forgive me for being uneducated and can't describe it) There is a self-created breathing method Yan Sheng used in order to cooperate with Yuanyi's battle. The breath of the moon is almost never used in the article, and the self-created breathing method is mostly used (maybe it means that Yan Sheng has truly transformed and let go of his obsession...?) Overall, it is a very healing article. If you want to see the two brothers reconcile, you can read it, but the main thing is the ending. If you mind the open ending, it is best not to read it (in fact, I feel that the ending is a bit too open... But the author should have his own reasons for writing this). There are a lot of fighting scenes in the plot, and those who prefer to watch fighting scenes can also try it (top-level wits...?) (Maybe the description is not very accurate...)

The step country brothers finally no longer understand each other's thoughts. The step country leader is the most human-like person I have seen so far. Yuanyi has a tendency to enlighten people, and Yan Sheng's second episode made up for a lot of regrets I had when watching the original work. It's sweet [laughing]

The plot is good, but a bit OOC

The spots on the corpse have faded, these two super cute little ones

Still looking forward to the next content I am still looking forward to the following content. However, I feel that Yan Sheng and Yuanyi in the book are a bit weak and not as strong as in the original work [currently in development]

Really, this book perfectly captured the atmosphere that the two brothers should have in my heart. Looking forward to looking forward to~

Good, it looks good. I agree.

Very interesting but why no one watches qwq

Teacher, I will always follow you [Admiration]

The author writes well

So pretty, so pretty 😄

The writing is very good, but the timeline is a bit messed up.

Not bad, but it ended too early

Very beautiful, highly recommend this book

The teacher wrote it very well, and the plot is very novel and unique, but why did it end so suddenly? I also want to watch the plot of Iwakatsu's betrayal...

Beautiful, highly recommended. I just worked on it for more than ten days and then finished it.

The plot is too smooth and the step-king brotherhood is written very delicately! (Eat it😋)

Yeah, it's very nice and well organized.