So What If You Are Greedy for Fame and Fortune?

Infinite Flow has a strong taste, and the writing style is unquestionable. The words and pictures are intertwined and always make me immersed in the scene, delicate and real. (☆^ー^☆) Emotional penetration and connection (water droplets), the opening of emotions from scratch (source), the pulling of emotions by will (reverse rain)... The multi-element composite scene makes me want to stop! The relationship between Luo Cheng, Ai Wen, and the many different selves of Xiao Jiujiu is also worth savoring... Only by returning to the source of trauma can we recover. There have been some running stories since Chapter 8! It's not as brilliant as the previous one, with many repeated sentences and white drawings, which makes it very boring to read! I hope that while the quantity is large and the management is full, the quality will not be abandoned!ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ It was a product of fantasy from the beginning, was it just the medicine that was thrown away...? The intention is very good, I hope it can be improved upon a lot, Shark Man! Cool! It was okay to start chasing, but it got worse and worse. . The narrative has no priority, long paragraphs, a stiff rhythm, a pile of empty words, and loose logic. "It's not... It's..." "No... No... No..." These sentence patterns are used as commas, which makes me feel sad... I'm going to lie to you. In fact, commas are rarely used after each sentence. There are periods in each sentence and no paragraphs. The long paragraphs are piled together and really affect the viewing experience... It has a strong AI flavor, but after watching it for a while, I feel that AI will not be like this. . . The following chapters begin with "When the system panel pops up...", I wonder if writing like this will make you tired or boring. ? The suggestions I gave were only words to change, but no action... I still have patience, but I just like the story very much, so I have hope, but after dozens of W words, it is no different from the previous one... Is the first few chapters of eight chapters already the limit...? Alvin x Luo x Cheng x Dry Bones, I like the sandwich biscuits very much, and so does Narcissus... It's a pity that the water is not smooth, you prefer Alvin, and the emotional line is also very rough. It can be seen that you want to create an ambiguous atmosphere but are unable to do so. Only a few interactions and dialogues can reveal the emotions of the characters, and the psychological description is almost non-existent... I just like your little thoughts and your whimsical thoughts, so I will stay. Keep these ideas alive, see you in the world! (Seeing that you are about to write 521,000 words, I can't hold on anymore...) --5.31