Quick Transmigration: Sorry, the Male Lead Is Mine

The second volume of progress is completed. In each world, the female protagonist chooses the most powerful attack method to attack the male protagonist. At first I thought it was a bit excessive, but later I found it was unexpectedly appropriate. Personally, I like sick love, so I think The Second World is very well written (the love story of three crazy father-in-laws and wicked women). It can completely fill in the story line and write a story of 200,000 or 300,000 words. Also, make some small comments. ①The author describes the dependence of the second male protagonist on his girlfriend. The method used is that the girlfriend puts together puzzles and makes soup every day. When the hero comes home, he just drinks soup and watches how his girlfriend does the puzzles. It is true that this is a very convenient and fastest way to create a stable [home] for the male protagonist, but it will also make the character look thin. Throughout the story, the girlfriend goes out only a handful of times and spends all day hanging around the stove and puzzles. The first sentence when the male protagonist comes back, the soup is ready 🤦 What readers feel about the male protagonist's favorite home is just that "the male protagonist loves soup" and "my girlfriend can really tolerate it" 🤦 ②The omitted part. Basically, the male protagonist is angry, furious, and aggressive (sometimes gentle), while the female protagonist is provocative (mostly), unable to bear it, and begging for mercy three times in a row, which is a bit homogeneous. But this is not in the text ③I hope the new story won't have the combination of [jigsaw puzzle + puzzle genius male protagonist]. I have used it in both stories. If I use it again... Summary: A good-looking novel that does not hide its flaws. Recommended, don't cheat, don't end it, finish the review 👍

What a cool article, the ultimate in laning and taming Can you not write the heroine in such a humble way? Isn't she training a dog? In the first part of the first world, I feel that the heroine is inferior, both covertly and covertly. I'm not happy, but the heroine in the second world is still not equal, it doesn't feel like dog training at all. It is too easy for the male protagonist to get the female protagonist. Although the female protagonist is a bit despicable, she is not so despicable that she can just forgive her 🤦 A soft bun is not a bad woman, a scumbag is a real scumbag. Sometimes I'm like the heroine's best friend, puzzled, confused, persuasive, and hating the iron. I felt like I was watching the second world in a masochistic way. The heroine is not the original owner, so why should she inherit the emotions of the original owner and choose to stay. The heroine is 100% emotionally invested in every scene, and there is no villainy at all. In the first world, it's hard for a male protagonist to pry into a corner. If he pretends to be like this, he'll come back as soon as the female protagonist pulls away and act like a dog for the female protagonist to trample on.

The writing of the first world was so exciting. The pulling and pulling at the beginning was pretty good, but the heroine felt a little submissive in the back. I hope it ends well in the end and I hope they are happy.

This is a super touching novel. The author is my goddess. She is invincible in the field of evil women training dogs. I really like watching the fight between the male and female protagonists. The settings between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are so touching. It is really refreshing. It makes my scalp numb. It is not a loss if I invest in it. It is really the best among the best. I can read the latest chapters in one breath🥺

The writing is okay, but the ending of the first story is open-ended? Overall, I feel that the male protagonist is more hateful. He is different from the ordinary clean and unclean scum. The female protagonist is difficult to attack. The mood of the original heroine is too little to describe. She is calm and tolerant to deal with any changes, but she is basically transparent. How can I put it? Everyone likes different types of novels. Usually I like the more fast-attack male protagonists, and the main one is the Kurohara heroine type. But apart from that, this novel is just okay. Those who like this type will definitely like to read it.

Wow, I suddenly discovered that World 1 and World 2 are a bit of a positive and negative way of teaching life. The heroine of World 1 is the one who took Bai Yueguang's corner, and the heroine is doing the puzzle. The second heroine in the world is Bai Yueguang, who has taken the corner of the latecomer, and the latecomer is doing the puzzle. It's very interesting to see it this way. It's equivalent to being in the second world. The heroine is using her identity as the heroine of the original world to break the situation. It's a bit confrontational. Not bad 🤭🤭😳😳

The author's writing has a very old-school feel. It's bloody, exciting, and good at the same time. But I just want to read it all in one go. It's great. More to come.

The author's writing is so good and invincible, but why did it end so quickly? If it continues, it will definitely become a hit. It's really good to watch. I like this exciting confrontation between lovers. Let's see who bows his head first last

It must be five stars, the characters are interesting, and the story is interesting. Just to make me feel better. Several times, I was rated and asked to quit in the comment section, saying that this was the case. I didn't expect it to be so wonderful. It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful.

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