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It's nice to see. The way Rikong wants to stop everything but is powerless is so pleasing, isn't it? I want to see Rikong become a witch after being unable to do anything.

Kurosawa Tokiri Sora is the person who can be my mother [laughing evilly]

Warning before watching: The first part of the plot contains a lot of knives. I personally think that some parts are more knives than the original, and the protagonist cannot do anything in the early stage (bushi). If you mind, please proceed with caution. Written before the end of the first week, I hope Li Kong can turn the situation around in the second week🙏

OMG! Must give a five-star rating! This book is really beautiful! The fascinating thing about this book is that it completely subverts the expectations of reading - just when you think you will be walking on familiar soil, you are gently pushed into a completely different world. It has a rare courage that is enough to make every reader who originally had some expectations feel a brand new and pure creation. During the reading process, I am often shocked by this complete 'freedom', although it does choose to completely let go of all 'existing impressions'. After reading it, I couldn't help but think that it is a rare talent to be able to construct an entire narrative universe so decisively and solely by oneself. It takes a special fate to walk into it, but once you walk in, the unfettered creative scenery is indeed unforgettable. All in all! Very nice! 😋 Although this book has many flaws, at least it is good to read without thinking.

I watched half of it and it was quite interesting. I just hope that the author will confirm whether it is changing to 100 or single.

Very nice! The author is a newcomer, but this book is already very good. I don't think there's anything I can generally complain about, but the author himself said there are some minor flaws.

It's a very good book. The ideas are very good and detailed. It can be seen that the author really thought carefully. As a first book, it is a perfect work. There are traces of foreshadowing, and you can see the difference if you play carefully; there are also signs of misplaced information, and there are psychological expectations. Then if the sugar rises very well, you will be rewarded ( The sword is very good, and there are many rewards ( In the field of Magical Fantasy fan fiction, it is well-established and logically gossamer. Didn't Li Kong really turn into a prison circle later? ( How come Lao Yuan can still come down to inspect? ( Also counts as a magical girl (

It's very appetizing. It can be said that the protagonist fits into the plot just right. Although he can't do anything (laughing), it's very comfortable to watch and the speed is very fast. Why is it that the dps of Haji is the same as that of Yi Ge Xue Li? 😡

When I opened the door, the last candle was extinguished gently. The feast had just ended, the warmth was still lingering, and I happened to be standing at the juncture between the story and its ending. This is a strange fate - there is no anxiety of chasing updates, no suspense day after day, but because of this, I have gained an unprecedented completeness. I spent a continuous and immersive time walking through the character's life. Their joys and sorrows became a coherent, creaseless picture, unfolding in front of me in one go, and then rewinding neatly. But therein lies the loss. I lost the right to grow with the story. I haven't been able to experience the excitement of waiting for updates every week, I haven't had heated discussions with my colleagues when guessing the plot, and I haven't experienced the sweet anxiety of being "tortured by the author out of chapters." When I arrived, everything was settled. In the discussion area, those once exciting predictions and tearful resonances have become fixed inscriptions. I am like a latecomer at an archaeological site, stroking the cooled ashes, but I can still imagine how blazing it once was. In any case, this is an excellent second novel of Demon Trial

I've also finished reading the main text, but haven't read the extras. I'll keep it on my bookshelf as a souvenir. Maybe one day I'll find the extras. Well, this is the first Demon Trial fanfic I have read. Thank you to the author for leaving such a story for me. It is strange. We are obviously outsiders, but we only fall in love with the people in the book.

It's great, I love reading it. It's one of the best fanfics I've ever read. The author has a great grasp of emotions, and there's nothing wrong with the look and feel. It's very comfortable to watch. I highly recommend it.

This looks great, can it be faster? It's very interesting to watch😄 Write down whatever you dream about and say yes. I won't forget you for probably a year.

You go on, I'm passing by (Releasing the witch factor) Very nice! I've finished reading it. The plot is innovative on a reasonable basis, and everyone's characters are also quite in place. If I have to say that there are shortcomings... It is that the deus ex machina is a little bit late in the plot, and the warden is OOC... But it doesn't matter, after all, everyone has their own understanding. By the way, this is the first second-generation novel of Magic Trial that I have read. I had a lot of fun reading it. After reading it, I even had the urge to write a second-generation novel myself (but I am definitely not good at it)... In short, I would like to thank the author for allowing me to read such a wonderful novel!

Although it has a happy ending, I still couldn't get over it after not seeing the college chapter [crying][crying][crying]

The writing is very good, and it can be seen that the protagonist is already trying his best to pursue the perfect ending, which can be regarded as making up for a lot of regrets. There may be some flaws in the middle, but they are harmless. There are very few books of this type, and this one can be regarded as a rare masterpiece.

So far, there is no problem at all, except for the knife in the first week, but the author promises that the next two weeks will have a good ending, and no one will be sacrificed in the end.

It's not bad, but I don't recommend it for newbies. Boy, I've already been spoiled.

Although it's not a twisted novel, it feels very similar and makes me feel bloodthirsty. The writing is very delicious.

It's good to read. There are very few books about Demon Trial. This one is one of the two best.

The knife is too sharp. The first week is too sharp.

The author is very good. I have also thought about writing a novel myself, but I don't have as much inspiration as the author, and I don't know how to start. The author can write it, and it is complete and logical, and he can avoid his own shortcomings. It is very good. If possible, I would like to read the author. Please do your best.

Not a bad story

Beautiful, no need to say more

It looks good. I'll give it five stars when I come back.

Why is it over? I haven't seen enough yet😭

Oh my gosh, I finished reading it in one day. It was really shocking. I want to play Magic Trial. Can the extra chapters be made faster? It's really good to watch [laughs]

There are still some problems throughout the book, including the plot, characterization, and worldview explanation. But I still read it in one sitting. It can't be called a state banquet, but it can be called a bear's paw. The author is also very humane, which can be seen from the fragmentary thoughts at the summary and conclusion of some chapters. Good luck in life.

It's great. One of the best fanfics I've ever read.

After reading it, give it five stars.

Very nice, I like watching it