[Everyday life + super-sweet romance + fake brother and sister + a touch of yandere + living together, one-on-one]
[The little sister I raised is getting more and more unhinged]
Xu Qianqian in everyone else's eyes: the aloof beauty of the art building, cool, world-weary, a genius artist who keeps strangers at a distance.
Xu Qianqian in Lin Ran's eyes: A scaredy-cat: “Brother, it's thundering. Can you leave the door unlocked?”
Hopeless at daily life: “Brother, the washing machine is bubbling... Did I break it?”
A jealous little thing: “Brother, your clothes smell like someone else. I don't like it. Change.”
Lin Ran always thought they were just two poor siblings sharing a home in a cold city.
That is, until the day he saw Xu Qianqian's sketchbook. Hundreds of drawings, and every one of them showed his back.
In the corner of every page, the same sentence was written in pencil, pressed down with all her strength: “Brother, you're mine.”
It's good, but there are some inconsistencies. And then his parents can travel to Sanya and have no money to support them, right? It feels like AI but not like 🤦. I think this book will be awesome after the author revised it. Very nice and atmospheric. Looking forward to the author's reply, I really like this book 🥺 🥺 🥺
I like this kind of light and flowing writing style very much. It has many advantages. I won't go into details since other comments have basically said it. I will just make a few complaints. First, is the protagonist's early life predicament a little too deliberate? How could his parents not provide living expenses for such a long period of time even if his parents had money to travel to Sanya? If I remember correctly, my parents gave me 10,000 yuan at the beginning, right? Secondly, did Chen He's scene end a little abruptly? He was obviously the first friend recognized by the heroine, but why did he disappear after Chapter 130? Based on the heroine's character, she probably won't forget it. Third, there are small issues with details. Jiang He or Jiang He? Why are three characters four characters (this is very AI)? Fourth, it is very fairy tale-like, and it can be said that there is no bad guy (except for the male protagonist's classmate and the stall owner next door who stole the idea, can't they be considered bad guys?)! Everyone is sincere and beautiful. Is this possible among art students?
If you are used to seeing too sweet food, watch this. The progress is comfortable.
No matter what, people who watch it will feel warm in their hearts o( ̄▽ ̄)🔥
It's nice to look at, but there's very little sense of brother and sister. There is a flavor of life
Her emotions are delicate and her daily life is ordinary. She doesn't look like a yandere at the moment, but her shadow is already there.
Good-looking, the male protagonist is too poor, but very real
The writing is good, but the bad thing is that the author has never studied art, and he is so impressive to us art students.
Everyday, ordinary, potential stocks [send heartfelt]
It's a very warm daily life, but doesn't the protagonist sleep in the second bedroom? Why did it become the master bedroom?