After Becoming a Wandering Beastman, I Stole My Archrival's Heart

I briefly read everyone's previous comments. This is my first book. I actually didn't expect so many people to read and like it. I'm very flattered by this! Here I would like to thank everyone for their support! 😳 In addition, although what I write is about the world of beasts, it is not similar to simple infrastructure or love. There are many factors to consider. After all, the protagonist cannot have traveled through time inexplicably, so it may involve some emm from the world of beasts, something similar to the power of the beast god (this is purely a figment of my own imagination!! The background is fictitious! If you don't like it, you don't have to read it, I have been thinking about it for a long time) 🥺 🥺 Secondly, many readers pointed out my shortcomings in the comments. Thank you very much for your criticism. I will correct them one by one in the future! Then let me reply to some of the more controversial points: 1. Regarding Jiang Ying's transformation and early expression ability: Because Jiang Ying himself is a modern person, in modern people's perception, the beast form (that is, the animal form) cannot speak, and he has just come through, so he does not understand the world and its occupancy. Based on the two premises of using someone else's body, I personally think it is a wise decision to say less or even nothing at all. After all, it would be wrong to say more, hahaha 😄. At the beginning of the chapter, I also explained that his character setting is a cautious and excellent character. I don't think it's difficult to understand that he doesn't transform. Firstly, his original body was seriously injured when he traveled through time. I personally think it is a very unwise choice to transform under such circumstances. On the contrary, the beast shape can better protect himself; secondly, he is a "human" soul after all!! How is it possible that I can flexibly change my form just after passing through it? But it is undeniable that it is really my problem that I didn't explain it clearly. 2. About the cub Ah Che: I read some comments about the character of Ah Che which are emmmm... It may be considered malicious, but I think it's not necessary. We don't have to have such big demands on a cub, right? Moreover, the cub should have a more obvious "growth" stage and process than other characters. This process needs to be subtle and step-by-step. Furthermore, such a setting can also promote the development of the plot. So I would like to reply to everyone in unison. Ah Che is not a burden. Not only does he not hold him back, he will also become an indispensable part of the team in the following articles [Blow kiss] 3. This last point is really my problem (sliding kneeling). Because my experience is too little and my qualifications are not enough, I still use some modern vocabulary to describe the world of beasts, which affects everyone's perception. I am deeply sorry and will correct it in the future! 😢 This is a small summary. If you have similar questions in the future, you can correct me. Thank you for your support! ❤️[Blow kiss]

The characters are well developed, and they are finally not silly and sweet. The plot is just so-so, not very novel. The author's writing style is okay, and the dialogue between the characters is also logical, and he doesn't make other people look like fools like other bestiality novels.

Okay, the early stages are actually pretty good. It was the little fox in the later stage that kept holding me back, which really annoyed me. In addition, he was actually portrayed as having some ability in the early stage, and he was not that brainless. In the later stage, it felt like it was constantly being delayed, and then it felt a little like green tea. (I personally hate that kind of green tea) But overall it's still okay.

Now that I have read "Rescue the Fox", I feel that the previous part is very similar to another novel I have read. It is also an expelled beast. It lives by itself and then meets the male protagonist, and then saves and raises other little beasts.

The subject matter is very novel and different from other beast world novels I have read before. Maybe I've read too many novels about the world of beasts. I couldn't understand the first few chapters of this novel about the novel about the world of beasts. 🤔

The book is very interesting, except that sometimes the descriptions of the beasts are too human-like and the work they do is too detailed.

You talk about the world of beasts. The tone of their words gave me a very new feeling. The words they said even gathered the spiritual energy of heaven and earth. Didn't they say that the fire was unknown at the beginning? Why would they use fire to burn the mountains again?

The author's writing is very good, with a very comfortable rhythm and story. It's not the kind that makes you feel emotional right from the beginning. It's very interesting. I hope your character won't change drastically when there are emotional lines later on.

Pretty good, pretty good, pretty good

Seeing the current position is very smooth. The logic is very clear. It's worth reading on. Recommend.