Mending the Mountains and Rivers of the Mortal World

The mountain temple subjugates the tiger demon, the county town lives in a ghost house, and a big tree is planted in the courtyard. The main line is the luck of the mountains and rivers, and the chessboard is replaced by a parchment picture. Mr. Ji, what are you doing? 🍉🍉🍉

It's really boring than hard-wearing.

I just read the first few chapters and I couldn't bear it anymore. One moment I was disdainful of yellow and white things, and in the next chapter I was stumped by a hero who was short of money. Author, what kind of character are you trying to create for the protagonist? In my opinion, it's both arrogant and upright, which makes people uncomfortable to watch 😂

I barely gave it two stars, as there were no comments at all on each chapter in the middle of the book. It's because the book is too light and boring. It's boring to read. Although it is a road novel, it no longer feels novel in the middle of reading. Without the cause and effect, implication, and bonding of the characters throughout the book, there are not enough. Although the main plot follows the parchment, it reads as if each story is not connected in series and is an independent story, which reduces the desire to read further.

Brother, your power system is completely broken. Your writing style directly makes you look decent. Except for you, the villain is a rotten fish and a rotten shrimp😅 You have to understand that the villain's character can bring out the protagonist's level (so it's normal for famous novels to be unable to defeat the villain). The protagonist does not have to turn the tide on his own. Yes, the one who turned the tide all by himself is called Long Aotian, not the traditional cultivator. Also, your description relies too much on the parchment. A lot of information is directly informed by the parchment and there is almost no description of a kind of mental growth that leads the protagonist to travel in the mortal world. It makes people feel that the role of the parchment is another hidden system.

Zhiwei: Pindao is just an idler Written in Dongli at the age of 18 It feels like a relatively old way of writing online articles about Taoism. The plot has been polished, and it doesn't read as empty, but it is boring and not fresh. In other words, there is not much passion, it mainly depends on the writing skills. The author's writing skills are definitely sufficient if he writes cool articles, but I always feel a bit lacking in writing this type of article and cannot arouse my emotions. The character creation is also a bit lacking. There is actually nothing wrong with this image, but it just looks like a common person and fails to describe the state of mind cultivation of a cultivator. So it reads a little flat. Three and a half to four stars.

Zhen Yuanzi's land book? Treasure book of heaven and earth?

It's equivalent to telling stories and completing copies. Beat one level and then another. The writing is okay, but the characters are quite awkward. Some of the plots in the book set off the protagonist's appearance and the description of the environment are really awkward. This is what I complained about. The rhythm of the plot is very smooth and the viewing experience is very comfortable. Highly recommended, just keep the rhythm of the plot

It's a pity, it's not very popular anyway

Yes, although it doesn't have the fairy spirit of Lan Ke Qiyuan, it is still worth watching. Better looking than most monsters.