Comprehensive Comics: Beng Yuan Jue Tie Plays a Behind-The-Scenes Role in Driving the World

I think there's something wrong The detective badge appeared too early. I remember it only appeared in the middle period. The first time it appeared in the article, it only played a role in the speed of police dispatch. Also, Ke suspected the God's Eye too quickly and unexpectedly. As soon as he saw the character's God's Eye, he suspected that it was a symbol of an organization. He could be more natural, for example: I saw the special material decoration (eyes of God) on the police officers [which left a deep impression]. After seeing the second time (God's Eye) on a little girl, it changed to [maybe a popular decoration recently?]. Finally, the third time I heard that the man who carried the bomb to the little girl also had the eye of God and was acquainted with the first policeman [this may be a symbol of an organization], it would be much more natural. That's all for now. I'll check to see if there are any questions later. This is a good work. Good luck to the author. Okay, I divided it early. There are many logical errors after the Conan plot begins, such as Genta's weight = three children. If there are three children and one adult in the elevator, he cannot move. Passers-by suddenly heard it using the library's broadcaster in the middle of the night. The subject matter is good but there are many problems with the logic of speeding up the plot.

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It's well written, but the paragraphs are too long and hard to read. I hope the author can change them.

It looks good. I think it's quite interesting that the characters are doing things together. [Laughs evilly]