The True Disciple of Qingyang Sect

I just read a few chapters, and I think it's okay. Unfortunately, I'm not a time traveler, but an aborigine. I just don't know about the author's fighting and emotions. How is the struggle between the major forces? Alas, it's a pity, after all, it is not the character of a time traveler. It is too reckless, reckless and arrogant, blindly pursuing the danger when the danger is unknown, and rushing in as if it is a temptation. The teammates may not be able to catch up in time, and they have to fight with others. The character of this genius is too bad, and the first two realms are not available. I always feel that the most critical early stage is missing, and I don't know how to be cautious to save life. There is a sect spirit that the aborigines have been cultivated by the sect. In my mind, I am more inclined to be more self-centered. I will give it three stars. 🤦

I quite like the character of the protagonist, and the story is pretty good, and I can keep reading it. It's not easy to find a novel that I can keep reading. It's hard to find even one novel out of ten or twenty. There are also some problems, such as some words that are too modern or even Internet-speak, and some settings in the realm that I personally feel are inappropriate. In short, I hope the writing will get better and better, five stars for encouragement.

It's okay, but the realm can be written more clearly, such as the several levels or the early and middle stages, because almost every chapter has the realm. Come on, author. Don't be too tired. If you can't finish writing, just change another one. I don't have time to read, but I will definitely read your new book. I don't like your kind of writing very much, so I can only write a review for you. Come on, you can persist for so long, it's amazing. I thought you said you would write a million words, and you just talked about it. I didn't expect you to be so persistent. I believe you will definitely become popular. Come on.

Very detailed, sect unity, good book This book is quite well written, unlike today's systematic texts which are really hard to read. Come on, author

Okay, there are some minor flaws and typos, but overall it's pretty good.

It looks okay so far

I feel quite comfortable watching it

Beautiful, a rare book

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is also good, the combat power settings and realm settings are somewhat original, very good

It's pretty good. Now that I have the Dharmakaya, my strength is also increased.