I Asked You to Help Me Woo Someone, Not Confess on the Spot!

One god VS 1 bunch of gods

It looks good. The character of the protagonist is very well drawn, and I like it very well. She is carefree but responsible, and her behavior is sometimes reckless but has a bottom line. Except for Lin Zhiyuan's part (a young lady disguises herself as a man and approaches the protagonist's good brother, but is bullied by others, and the story of the return of the Dragon King will start as soon as the others leave. I really can't stand such a young lady being bullied). There is nothing too toxic at the moment. Keep up the good level. It is recommended to polish the follow-up plot more. Many places are really difficult to explain in one sentence. The author must look at how other authors of the same type write plots [face-covering][face-covering]

"In the logic of despair, high-level tenderness is written." I think this book is a dry book. 1. Reject dampness and reshape the gentleness of the strong mentality Many similar works like to dissect the slimy dark side of human nature and beautify the male protagonist's entanglement and vulgarity into "reality", which leaves a lingering sense of dankness in reading. But the male protagonist Su Li in this book is completely different. He looks carefree on the outside, but is extremely determined on the inside. He foresaw the tragedy of suicide and did not indulge in sentimentality. Instead, he hit the gears of fate with a clumsiness that was almost "straight ball". This kind of gentle but not weak, restrained but not internal character is the true tenacity tempered by the hardships of life. 2. Exquisite "misplaced redemption" structure The author shows a very high level of narrative skills: the male protagonist's perspective: a passionate rescue plan with a predictable script; the female protagonist's perspective: a desperate last struggle that even "sells her soul" to take advantage of love. When the male protagonist's sunny confession collides with the female protagonist's guilt for repaying her debt, the dramatic tension brought about by this information gap is heartbreaking and addictive. Especially the plot where the heroine buys the "Guide to Pursuing People" expresses her despair for the future and her greed for the last trace of warmth to the extreme. The plot after Lin Qingyu was handled very poorly. Without solving one person's problem, the next person's problem was shown directly. After that, many heroine's problems were shown, but none of them were solved. After Lin's own problems reached a climax and were about to explode, he suddenly turned to Gu, and the original climax suddenly disappeared. There is a high probability that the plot will develop in a twisted direction. I thought it was a dry text, but I didn't expect it to be very deep. Lin is the most normal of all the heroines. The subsequent characters are basically twisted on the inside, and so is the male protagonist.

I couldn't sleep at night, so I looked through the book reviews, and then I saw someone saying that I was pretending to be dead, so I will give a unified reply. How should I put it, it's still uncomfortable. The feeling of being denied is really uncomfortable. At this moment, I and everyone who feels dissatisfied must feel the same way. As for why I pretended to be dead, it was actually because many of the reviews were right and convincing, and I was unable to refute it. In fact, there are many evil points and many shortcomings. There is nothing wrong with admitting your mistakes frankly. I am a new author, and writing books was just a hobby at first, so I am not sensitive to the hidden rules. (Why is a lily considered green? The male protagonist cannot be aggrieved for more than three chapters. There must be awesome cheats and he must step on everyone's head.) (As for Maya Kujo, I really didn't expect the reaction to be so big. I was still relatively casual and restrained my efforts at the time. Maybe I unexpectedly have a talent for writing great villains?) But I don't mean to disgust you, because I am also a very extreme person. I don't like ordinary and flowing daily life, so I have written a lot of extreme plots and characters. It is normal for some people to like it and others not to like it. Therefore, I hold the attitude that most people's comments are justified. I would like to say sorry to everyone here. If you want to scold me in this comment, or if you have any opinions, there is no problem. Because the author often swallows comments in the background, so I can't see some of them. Finally, I would like to thank the readers who have always supported me, and also thank the readers who have always given me suggestions. At least you have carefully read what I wrote. This alone makes me very happy. Thank you. (As for why I gave it five stars, although I am not very satisfied with my work, and I know there are many shortcomings, but if I deny it myself, wouldn't it be unfair to me who was once a passionate creator? I also feel sorry for everyone who likes this book and is willing to be patient with me.) (So even if I get scolded for this, please allow me to be a little arrogant and give it five stars.) Although many people who leave after giving negative reviews should be invisible, I still thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I am already reflecting on it, and I will sum up the experience and apply it to the next book. If we meet again by chance, I hope I can leave a good impression on you next time.

I can't eat it alone💩

Not bad, the writing style is relatively relaxed at the moment What the hell is Kujo Maya?

Very good, the characterization is logically self-consistent and vivid, just like the bright and dazzling coat of a rose, with its spiky heart and gentle and fragile roots. Looking forward to the follow-up, sincerely.

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This book is really okay. The male protagonist is as rational as when he secretly indulges in adultery and is the protagonist of the world. He has his own power at his disposal. When I opened this book, I already found a treasure. To be honest, I felt a bit humble about the plot where the sister modified the memory and imprisoned it. I felt that the male protagonist could be manipulated by anyone. The women in the force field can control it, but the author didn't let the male protagonist continue to suffer, which makes me feel good. Anyway, I am not a person who specializes in plots. I just think that more good things are enough. I hope the author will continue to work hard (it's a long paragraph written by Tong Tong, don't scold me, anyway, I really like this book)

I think if you like watching Riqing, you can give it a watch. Overall, it's probably a battle between gods and humans, and everyone is quite upset. There is a plot where one of the female protagonists wanted to kill the male protagonist, but later confessed that she should be included in the harem. If she thinks she is poisonous, she can avoid it.