[Multiple heroines + Disciples and rebels + Villains + Not feeling aggrieved + Happy + Geniuses]
Ye Xiang had a dream.
Dreaming about his miserable life as a villain.
Along the way, he sent experience and equipment to the protagonist Feng Aotian's group, but in the end, the protagonist Feng Aotian stomped his face hard with his black feet on the physical level, and died in humiliation.
Then, he traveled to the world he saw in his dream.
In this life, with the bloodline of disaster that can devour everything, he will definitely rewrite his own destiny!
Ye Xiang thought so firmly in his heart.
Immediately...
There were rapid knocks on the door.
A familiar figure caught his eye - one of the harem of the protagonist Feng Aotian...
She is also a beautiful girl.
He broke into the house while shouting about love and justice.
On the first day of time travel, Ye Xiang was arrested.
Then...
…
"Fairy, please calm down. We must be enemies, right?"
"Stop talking and kiss me."
…
"Junior sister, I am your dearest senior brother!"
"Ha, dear senior brother, you don't want others to know that you are actually... A disaster that everyone wants to beat, right?"
…
"Master, you are my most respected master!"
"Be good~ no one will know~"
…
"Miss destiny heroine, what do you mean by this? You must know that the melons that are forced are not sweet!"
"Yeah, it's not sweet, but it can quench your thirst!"
"~~"
Reader comments
I found the preface of this article to be very confusing, and I wanted to abandon it, but then it became more and more depraved and I couldn't extricate myself. I must be sick.
In short, the first few chapters of this novel are very confusing to read, and it is easy to dissuade readers, but after reading later, you can feel that this is the author's writing style, so I recommend to get through the fighting scenes in the first few chapters first, and the viewing experience will be better when the sweets start to be given out later. The potential is unlimited. I hope the author will not cut off the book. This book is currently unavailable (the original heroine was so bullied that she fainted in the toilet), but you can read it with confidence. It is best to adapt to the author's writing style. (The author likes to say that probably) Once you get used to it, the viewing experience will improve a lot.
Moral protagonists are better than immoral ones.
This is just like the novel I wrote in junior high school. It goes on for several chapters without much useful information.
After the protagonist had to eat, he still looked like Chu Nan and was hung up with his mouth raised.
𓀃𓀅𓀇
The author's soul is back! The beacon in the southern sky is blazing, and the black armor covers the sky. The thunder-driving car splits the sky, and the light chases the tail of the comet!
𓀌𓀎𓀠
The author's soul is back! Looking back over the ice mountain, I see a golden frosty moon. Shoot Sirius into Beichenye, the sound of dysprosium is like a complaint!
𓀋𓀌𓀎
The author's soul is back! The sand in the West Pole is swallowed up, and the bronze lord burns into the night. Stepping on the tortoise-shell song and Yu's steps, the star map is in the palm of your hand!
𓀋𓀠𓀤
The author's soul is back! Looking to the east, the hibiscus trees are burning, and the red crows hold the pei in their heads. After nine days of carving the remains, he made a chariot, and Xihe gave him the bridle!
𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌
The soul is back! Forge weapons into bells!
The soul is back! Where the bones are buried, a golden harvest grows!
You will renew my mouth and teeth!
Four stars. Personally, I don't think it's a traditional fairy tale, but the use of traditional immortal place names is a bit more like a Western fantasy. When I read the introduction of the first female character who appeared at the beginning, she was said to be a Dragon Lady and a dragon tribe. It didn't feel like the monsters or dragons in the traditional fairy tale. Instead, it gave me a feeling like I was watching a western Doragon, not an oriental dragon. The protagonist's words felt particularly secondary to me, which made me look awkward. Moreover, the concrete setting of disaster is rarely used in traditional fairy tales. Disasters in traditional immortality writing do not only refer to a certain thing or person. In Western fantasy, disasters are often embodied in human form and walk on the earth. Disasters in traditional immortality are generally a catastrophe or large-scale event and do not refer to a fixed race or person. Disasters are called "tribulations" in traditional immortality. For example, the often mentioned large-scale invasion of extraterrestrial demons, the advent of the end of the law, epidemics and cholera, catastrophes, and various calamities in the prehistoric era. They are all a type of disaster. Disasters in traditional immortality include not only destruction, but also disputes between luck, Taoism, and a series of disasters caused by the opposition of laws and ideas. For example, the birth of a great demon is a kind of disaster and a competition between luck and Tao. For example, an epidemic sweeping through the world of immortality is also a disaster. In traditional cultivation, disasters often refer to various disasters born out of conflicts between various world laws, great laws, and humanistic thoughts and morals.
Not bad, very interesting character design
There is not much problem with the synopsis and plot, but I don't know why I feel tired after watching it. I always feel that there is something wrong with the expression. But plot-wise it's still good
Let's wait and see first, then wait and see.
The author no longer knows what heaven and earth are when he writes a book
The protagonist is the villain, and he becomes the righteous only because of the villain's arrogance.
Very nice, recommended
There are too many related words and arrogant sentences in the article, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. It's nice to read.
It's so pretty that it makes my dike spin.
The setting is at least one of the more stable among the books I have read for so long, and I like the rhythm of the plot development very much. The so-called "moderate" should be like this. [Praise]
It's fun to watch, and the plot is coherent. I didn't see the bad points. Anyway, I felt so happy after watching it in one sitting! ! ! [Sinister smile]
Can your wings get knotted?
It's good to watch, all the characters are arrogant, and the plot is still very exciting. The writing is a little too convoluted, but it's still unique. The pacing is okay, but the relationship feels like it could progress a bit, otherwise it would be a bit uncomfortable to watch. The setting is very good, I hope I can keep writing.
If the world line is too large at the beginning, it will be confusing for people to see. It doesn't matter if it is a pit, but it will be uncomfortable for readers to guess in every chapter. My personal opinion does not represent everything. There should be some people who are interested. There is nothing wrong with the writing. At least it doesn't seem to be a problem. I encourage you with five stars. It's not a bad point.
The battle is great, the battle is well written.
Why does the protagonist always have a debuff on him? [What]
Please give me some support. The first part is indeed a bit messy, but the second part is a little better.
It's very interesting. Good luck to the author. I'm optimistic about you.
Not cliche, not brainless, and very comfortable to read.
It's still an interesting book. Although it has some flaws, it's not bad.
Very good, very good
I feel pretty good. Is the author being manipulated by trolls?
This "but I have a traitor and a disciple", reconciliation?
Just my daily life [making faces] [making faces] [making faces]
As expected of Uncle Mandrill
I finished reading it in one go, it was pretty good.
I found the preface of this article to be very confusing, and I wanted to abandon it, but then it became more and more depraved and I couldn't extricate myself. I must be sick. In short, the first few chapters of this novel are very confusing to read, and it is easy to dissuade readers, but after reading later, you can feel that this is the author's writing style, so I recommend to get through the fighting scenes in the first few chapters first, and the viewing experience will be better when the sweets start to be given out later. The potential is unlimited. I hope the author will not cut off the book. This book is currently unavailable (the original heroine was so bullied that she fainted in the toilet), but you can read it with confidence. It is best to adapt to the author's writing style. (The author likes to say that probably) Once you get used to it, the viewing experience will improve a lot.
Moral protagonists are better than immoral ones. This is just like the novel I wrote in junior high school. It goes on for several chapters without much useful information.
Great, detailed battles, nice descriptions, attracting attention
After the protagonist had to eat, he still looked like Chu Nan and was hung up with his mouth raised.
𓀃𓀅𓀇 The author's soul is back! The beacon in the southern sky is blazing, and the black armor covers the sky. The thunder-driving car splits the sky, and the light chases the tail of the comet! 𓀌𓀎𓀠 The author's soul is back! Looking back over the ice mountain, I see a golden frosty moon. Shoot Sirius into Beichenye, the sound of dysprosium is like a complaint! 𓀋𓀌𓀎 The author's soul is back! The sand in the West Pole is swallowed up, and the bronze lord burns into the night. Stepping on the tortoise-shell song and Yu's steps, the star map is in the palm of your hand! 𓀋𓀠𓀤 The author's soul is back! Looking to the east, the hibiscus trees are burning, and the red crows hold the pei in their heads. After nine days of carving the remains, he made a chariot, and Xihe gave him the bridle! 𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back! Forge weapons into bells! The soul is back! Where the bones are buried, a golden harvest grows! You will renew my mouth and teeth!
Four stars. Personally, I don't think it's a traditional fairy tale, but the use of traditional immortal place names is a bit more like a Western fantasy. When I read the introduction of the first female character who appeared at the beginning, she was said to be a Dragon Lady and a dragon tribe. It didn't feel like the monsters or dragons in the traditional fairy tale. Instead, it gave me a feeling like I was watching a western Doragon, not an oriental dragon. The protagonist's words felt particularly secondary to me, which made me look awkward. Moreover, the concrete setting of disaster is rarely used in traditional fairy tales. Disasters in traditional immortality writing do not only refer to a certain thing or person. In Western fantasy, disasters are often embodied in human form and walk on the earth. Disasters in traditional immortality are generally a catastrophe or large-scale event and do not refer to a fixed race or person. Disasters are called "tribulations" in traditional immortality. For example, the often mentioned large-scale invasion of extraterrestrial demons, the advent of the end of the law, epidemics and cholera, catastrophes, and various calamities in the prehistoric era. They are all a type of disaster. Disasters in traditional immortality include not only destruction, but also disputes between luck, Taoism, and a series of disasters caused by the opposition of laws and ideas. For example, the birth of a great demon is a kind of disaster and a competition between luck and Tao. For example, an epidemic sweeping through the world of immortality is also a disaster. In traditional cultivation, disasters often refer to various disasters born out of conflicts between various world laws, great laws, and humanistic thoughts and morals.
Not bad, very interesting character design
There is not much problem with the synopsis and plot, but I don't know why I feel tired after watching it. I always feel that there is something wrong with the expression. But plot-wise it's still good
Let's wait and see first, then wait and see.
The author no longer knows what heaven and earth are when he writes a book The protagonist is the villain, and he becomes the righteous only because of the villain's arrogance. Very nice, recommended There are too many related words and arrogant sentences in the article, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read. It's nice to read.
It's so pretty that it makes my dike spin.
The setting is at least one of the more stable among the books I have read for so long, and I like the rhythm of the plot development very much. The so-called "moderate" should be like this. [Praise]
It's fun to watch, and the plot is coherent. I didn't see the bad points. Anyway, I felt so happy after watching it in one sitting! ! ! [Sinister smile]
Can your wings get knotted?
It's good to watch, all the characters are arrogant, and the plot is still very exciting. The writing is a little too convoluted, but it's still unique. The pacing is okay, but the relationship feels like it could progress a bit, otherwise it would be a bit uncomfortable to watch. The setting is very good, I hope I can keep writing.
If the world line is too large at the beginning, it will be confusing for people to see. It doesn't matter if it is a pit, but it will be uncomfortable for readers to guess in every chapter. My personal opinion does not represent everything. There should be some people who are interested. There is nothing wrong with the writing. At least it doesn't seem to be a problem. I encourage you with five stars. It's not a bad point.
The battle is great, the battle is well written.
Why does the protagonist always have a debuff on him? [What]
Please give me some support. The first part is indeed a bit messy, but the second part is a little better.
It's very interesting. Good luck to the author. I'm optimistic about you.
Not cliche, not brainless, and very comfortable to read.
It's still an interesting book. Although it has some flaws, it's not bad.
Very good, very good
I feel pretty good. Is the author being manipulated by trolls?
This "but I have a traitor and a disciple", reconciliation?
Just my daily life [making faces] [making faces] [making faces]
As expected of Uncle Mandrill
I finished reading it in one go, it was pretty good.
Looks good and suits my taste
I think it's quite interesting.