[Japanese western fantasy + multiple heroines + tsundere + saint + eldest lady + Shura field + daily life in the academy]
Ed travels into a beautiful girl academy game
He is neither a villain nor a noble young master, but has become the student council president of the college!
Others are cautiously following the original plot, but Ed wants to hold the script in his own hands.
"Now that I'm here, of course I have the final say in the plot!"
In order to rewrite the plot, Ed founded the club and led the goddess of light around the academy
But the butterfly effect was caught off guard, and everyone's trajectory deviated from the original script.
"Wait a minute! That's not what's written in the plot!"
"Also - there's something wrong with the way you look at me!"
Reader comments
After reading a few chapters, I feel like the author is too partial to the evil lady. But as for me, I don't have a good sense of her. The protagonist is a bit too licking towards him. In fact, it is more suitable to write about the protagonist who plays tricks on the evil lady like a smiling tiger or a squinting eye. It's better. It's a bit like kneeling down and begging for mercy. To be honest, it's a bit too that. I suggest the author change it. And the author, have you forgotten that this world is magical? There are too few magical elements in the whole world. It feels more like an everyday world? For example, the protagonist can clean the house without asking anyone to use magic, right? But overall it's quite interesting.
I've read a few chapters, the writing is okay, the plot is interesting, and the subject matter is novel.
After reading a few chapters, I feel like the author is too partial to the evil lady. But as for me, I don't have a good sense of her. The protagonist is a bit too licking towards him. In fact, it is more suitable to write about the protagonist who plays tricks on the evil lady like a smiling tiger or a squinting eye. It's better. It's a bit like kneeling down and begging for mercy. To be honest, it's a bit too that. I suggest the author change it. And the author, have you forgotten that this world is magical? There are too few magical elements in the whole world. It feels more like an everyday world? For example, the protagonist can clean the house without asking anyone to use magic, right? But overall it's quite interesting.
I've read a few chapters, the writing is okay, the plot is interesting, and the subject matter is novel.