Mushoku Tensei: A Song of Departure

Yes, I have written a new idea. To summarize the jobless fan fiction I have read in the past, when faced with the threat of humans and gods, the authors generally have two ways of writing: 1. Ignoring or weakening the malice of humans and gods, which seems a bit inconsistent with the original work. However, this also depends on the tone of the work. If it is a hard-core textual research, this is a big shortcoming. If not, it is actually okay. Just treat humans and gods as ordinary "demon kings" and the ordinary world of swords and magic will be fine. 2 From the beginning, it is emphasized to speculate on human gods and even dragon gods with the greatest malice. This kind of method usually gives the protagonist powerful cheats, which are much stronger than the original Rudy, and even other power systems. The advantage is that the logic is smoother than the first method of writing, but the disadvantage is that it is more difficult to write a "sense of growth" and is suspected of being a "deus ex machina". This book balances the difficulty of the world and the strength of the cheats. On this basis, it writes the "sense of growth" of the non-original protagonist. This is an advantage, but the disadvantages are also very obvious. The protagonist is not Long Aotian or "Gou Zhenren", and the weakness and powerlessness of ordinary people is written at the beginning, such as If you have the experience of reading "Curling Blade Long Sword" or "Seeking Demons" or the complete "Dragon Tribe" and "Three Kingdoms", it proves that you have a certain tolerance for "knives". This is not a shortcoming. Then the only question is whether the author can keep it until the end, or even get better and better as he writes! Come on (•̀ᴗ•́)و

There was a bit of a problem with the pace being too fast in the early stages, but it got much better later on. I still have my own ideas in design. The combat power system is relatively weak at the moment, so it's not a good start. All in all, worth a look.

Beautiful, incomparably beautiful

The writing is okay, but the pacing changed later and it looks a lot more comfortable.

The details are abundant, the psychological description is a bit monotonous and procrastinating, but overall it's very good.

. It looks good and feels very immersive. The description is quite rich and there are many original settings.